cloud7184 Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 Well went afk for a while and gammer on card might not be corret but im not a perfect person on gammer but anyways hope the card effect inst overpowered [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/34yqmfm.jpg[/IMG] When a monster you control is destroyed by battle destroy the attacking monster. While this card is face-up on the field you must pay 500 Life Points during your Standby Phase; if you do not, destroy this card. Only one Eye Of Revenge can be on the field at a time Gammer fixs was done by Shadow Ninja i take no credit for the gammer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
▼AlcaNdeR▼ Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 I'd say it isnt Op'd but maybe it is a little, if I was you I would add some drawback nothing big maybe Life Points payment at a certain time. Picture is okay to me, there are some OCG errors; dont use capitals for every word dude. BTW card's name doesnt fit well with its pic IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cloud7184 Posted July 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 [quote name='▼AlcaNdeR▼' timestamp='1311470554' post='5381850'] I'd say it isnt Op'd but maybe it is a little, if I was you I would add some drawback nothing big maybe Life Points payment at a certain time. Picture is okay to me, there are some OCG errors; dont use capitals for every word dude. BTW card's name doesnt fit well with its pic IMO. [/quote] You mean something like during the standby phase u take 500 points of damage or send this card to the graveyard and the caps thing is just something not even gonna bother with never was good in the OCG section so not gonna bother with that would just fail again lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
▼AlcaNdeR▼ Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 [quote name='cloud7184' timestamp='1311470896' post='5381863'] You mean something like [b]during the standby phase u take 500 points of damage[/b] or send this card to the graveyard and the caps thing is just something not even gonna bother with never was good in the OCG section so not gonna bother with that would just fail again lol. [/quote] Yeah I meant something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
and1dodger Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 Maybe you should have it were you have to discard 1 card during your turn to keep this card on the field. Also, maybe you should rewrite like this "When a monster on your side of the field is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy the attacking monster." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cloud7184 Posted July 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 [quote name='▼AlcaNdeR▼' timestamp='1311471388' post='5381882'] Yeah I meant something like that. [/quote] When A Monster On Your Side Of The Field Is Destoryed By Battle This Card Activates And Destroy's the Attacking Monster,During Your Standby You Take 500 Points Of Damage Or Send This Card To The Graveyard. was acutally thinking this would make a good recoil for what the card can do also might add something as a cost to putit into play Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 [quote name='cloud7184' timestamp='1311472515' post='5381930'] When A Monster On Your Side Of The Field Is Destoryed By Battle This Card Activates And Destroy's the Attacking Monster,During Your Standby You Take 500 Points Of Damage Or Send This Card To The Graveyard. was acutally thinking this would make a good recoil for what the card can do also might add something as a cost to putit into play [/quote] Why are you writing in all caps? When a monster you control is destroyed by battle: destroy the attacking monster. While this card is face-up on the field: you must pay 500 Life Points during your Standby Phase; if you do not, destroy this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cloud7184 Posted July 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 [quote name='Shadow Ninja' timestamp='1311473676' post='5381987'] Why are you writing in all caps? When a monster you control is destroyed by battle: destroy the attacking monster. While this card is face-up on the field: you must pay 500 Life Points during your Standby Phase; if you do not, destroy this card. [/quote] Cause my gammer sucks lol thank you for correting that for me gonna fix it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 this is mostly just like Newdoria's effect not as flexible as Newdoria though,so it's meh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cloud7184 Posted July 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311479057' post='5382233'] this is mostly just like Newdoria's effect not as flexible as Newdoria though,so it's meh [/quote] Huh i see the effect never knew it exist tbh and why is ur name doom of the nordic gods? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catterjune Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 Your OCG is incorrect. The first part of the effect (before the semi-colon) seems to imply that you can destroy your own monsters in battle. IE: Opponent has Blue Eyes on the field. You summon Dark Magician. Your DM attacks his BEWD, letting it accomplish the "destroyed by battle" clause. However the "destroy the attacking monster" seems to imply... that nothing would happen. DM attacks BEWD. A monster you own has been destroyed by battle. Therefore, the attacking monster (DM) goes to the graveyard (which it already did). That might have been your intention all along to keep this card from being stupid broken with searchers like Giant Rat or Mystic Tomato or something, but it's just... worded peculiarly. Also, this would be amazing in gadgets. Also, what happens when you have multiples on the field? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cloud7184 Posted July 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 [quote name='PikaPerson01' timestamp='1311480892' post='5382307'] Your OCG is incorrect. The first part of the effect (before the semi-colon) seems to imply that you can destroy your own monsters in battle. IE: Opponent has Blue Eyes on the field. You summon Dark Magician. Your DM attacks his BEWD, letting it accomplish the "destroyed by battle" clause. However the "destroy the attacking monster" seems to imply... that nothing would happen. DM attacks BEWD. A monster you own has been destroyed by battle. Therefore, the attacking monster (DM) goes to the graveyard (which it already did). That might have been your intention all along to keep this card from being stupid broken with searchers like Giant Rat or Mystic Tomato or something, but it's just... worded peculiarly. Also, this would be amazing in gadgets. Also, what happens when you have multiples on the field? [/quote] CRAP!!! Forgot to put only one can be on the field at a time.Also wated to say thank you guys for all the help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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