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Eh, why the hell not?

Name: Scorpion
Age: 32 at death, is now a hellspawn
Gender: M
Type: Ninja Specter
Move List: [b]Special moves[/b]
Spear
Hellfire
Teleport
Take-down
Fire Breath
Back flip Kick
Launch
[b]Fatalities[/b]
Toasty!
Spear Slice
Annihilation
Spear Shot
Nether Gates

Description: [IMG]http://i240.photobucket.com/albums/ff33/Cloudy1109/Mortal%20Kombat/Scorpion___Mortal_Kombat.jpg[/IMG]

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Pfft, ninja please. What's the fun in being your favorite character if you aren't accurate?

now, I do have some notes for you. First off, we need a plot. It's standard in the RULES that you need a plot. an RP can't exist without one. Second, the app needs work. Try adding in a separate section for Appearances, Personality, Bio, and Weapons. makes things a lot easier to read rather than just putting two categories together into one and labeling it Description. A side note about appearances, give the applicant and option to use a picture or their own imagination on describing the character. Also, to add a little spice to the mix (maybe Paprika? ^^), you should give the option in the rules of creating a brand new character to add to the Kombat. Oh and by the way, a list of rules is also required by the rules of YCM RP.

Lastly, don't make an IC thread unless you're actually ready to start. As you can see, it has gotten locked, because it went against the rules. And when you do make an IC thread, include a link to this, the OOC thread as well as a lengthy first post by you, the creator. This first post will generate ideas into the other Kombatants heads and help with the general RPing process. Remember, it's the little things that matter most.

Those are the major issues. Minor issues include spelling, grammar, pronunciation, and be able to count past 10. I also recommend wearing Old Spice, as both Scorpion and Sub-Zero do, and they are the most popular characters in the MK Universe. They have to be doing something right, and I'll be willing to bet it's wearing old spice body fragrances. You can't not win, which means you always will.

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Damn...

I have to openly agree with Aimi on this one. To truly be obsessed with a series, you MUST be able to know how to make a plot that would not only make sense, BUT would be something that would actually be something worth while.

You're a n00b, simple as that. You're only obsessed with the use of the blood and gore that many people crave because of those games.

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Next time, just do some research into the series and think up a new storyline based off of that. Hell, go off from where the most recent Mortal Kombat game "Mortal Kombat" left off, because I have beaten that game and I can tell you that it leaves many a possibility to wonder about

Don't think of this as a loss, think of it as a learning experience and get it right next time. ^^

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