Tymur Shayk Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 Hi guys. I'm new, so to speak and foreign so my english isn't the greatest, but Ill manage. I've been playing since Ygo's release and have done my research as far as "ocg" is concerned. I figured, I'd study up on it before posting an abomination, as well as reading tips for newbies. I hope you like the card, all feed back is appreciated. I used an image I found in showcase, so image credit goes to "hpdoom" [center] [img]http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/4140/459095.jpg[/img] (if you cannot see) Effect: This card cannot be destroyed by a monster with 1400 ATK or higher. During your Main Phase, you can pay 100 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Cyber Token" (Machine-Type/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Attack Position and equip it as an Equip Spell card to 1 of your opponent's monsters. The equipped monster loses ATK equal to it's level x100. If a monster equipped with a "Cyber Token" would leave the field, destroy the "Cyber Token" instead and inflict 500 damage to your opponent. [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 100 LP for a token is too cheap yes the atk decrease and 500 burn effect isn't really too much, but you should have put other restrictions on the tokens Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
j3tears Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 i like the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tymur Shayk Posted July 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 Thank you, for the feed back so far. Lol was kinda expecting more since i need to learn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Resident Fascist Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 It's decent in a game where decent isn't enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazekage dragon Posted July 30, 2011 Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 It's a pretty nice card but like ragnarok said, 100lp for a Token is a little low, 500 seems a little more appropriate and maybe even more considering the effect it has. OCG wise and everything it is pretty well written and the monster image really fits the category/name of the card. But anyways it's a very well done card especially considering it's your first. Also, welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tymur Shayk Posted July 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 Thank you Kazekage. And thank you for the feed back. I plan to get better as time goes on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omi Glad Posted July 30, 2011 Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 balance 1/10 the effect is spamable and can severly abuse sychros. And with Xyz monsters iout ya.... Once per turn and up the cost and you are closer to good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tymur Shayk Posted July 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 [quote name='Omi Glad' timestamp='1312002453' post='5400411'] balance 1/10 the effect is spamable and can severly abuse sychros. And with Xyz monsters iout ya.... Once per turn and up the cost and you are closer to good. [/quote] Correct me if I'm wrong... but tokens aren't tuners and if they're equipped to opponents monsters they can't be used for synchro summons. Come to think of it.. the tokens cant be used for xyz either because as it's implied on the card "and equip it as an Equip Spell card to 1 of your opponent's monsters." meaning, that they are equipped as they are summoned or I would've said "Once per turn, you can equip a "cyber token" to one of your opponents monsters, etc etc". So if they aren't on your field.. they cant be used in such a way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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