Lovely Gusto Posted July 30, 2011 Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 This is not finished but let me know what you think so far. [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/9231/458463v.jpg[/img] [img]http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/856/458463b.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn you may look at your opponent's hand and at an additional 500 life points you may dicard 1 card from his/her hand, if the card discarded is a monster, this card gains ATK equal to that monster's ATK points and losees DEF points equal to that monster's ATK points until the end of your opponent's next battle phase. After this effect is used switch this monster to defense position. [img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/1634/458463r.jpg[/img] [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/6069/458463p.jpg[/img] Lore: As long as this card is on the field you may not switch you monster's battle positions. When this monster battles one of your opponent's attack position monsters, destroy all other attack position monsters your opponent controls, you opponent loses life points equal to the destroyed monster's ATK points. When this effect is used no other monsters on your side of the field may attack this turn [img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/1279/458463.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2011 Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 for Envy, you might want to put an atk cap on the boosting. You said ANY monster, so essentially this can get like a 3500 atk boost for a turn, which is too much Gluttony is WAY too broken, since you said use any # of monsters. So all you have to do is play a monster, play Scapegoat, activate United We Stand, the monster will now gain 4000 atk, and you tribute that monster to get Gluttony. I think that's a bad idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovely Gusto Posted July 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311999298' post='5400305'] for Envy, you might want to put an atk cap on the boosting. You said ANY monster, so essentially this can get like a 3500 atk boost for a turn, which is too much Gluttony is WAY too broken, since you said use any # of monsters. So all you have to do is play a monster, play Scapegoat, activate United We Stand, the monster will now gain 4000 atk, and you tribute that monster to get Gluttony. I think that's a bad idea [/quote] Oh shoot you're right, my bad, thanks for the advice, I will fix it right away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovely Gusto Posted July 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omi Glad Posted July 30, 2011 Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 your pic for gluttony is the same as the one GladiatorL99 used on his destroyer - gluttony. but nice take on the sins. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2011 Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 [quote name='Lovely Gusto' timestamp='1312002349' post='5400408'] Oh shoot you're right, my bad, thanks for the advice, I will fix it right away. [/quote] let me know when you've made the modifications Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovely Gusto Posted August 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1312041005' post='5401185'] let me know when you've made the modifications [/quote] I made some modfications as well as adding the Horses. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 2, 2011 Report Share Posted August 2, 2011 the only horse monster where I can read the lore is Pestilance, so I'll do that one that is considered one hell of a banishing effect you got there problem is, you only said the monster that destroyed it, and it applies to your opponent's hand, deck, and graveyard and that's OPed, because that means you can kill Pestilance yourself and trigger the effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Gluttony seems to remind me of Maju Garzette and Great Maju Garzette, although three monsters may be to much, I dunno, seems like it though... Gluttony the Hungry Sin is way OP'ed, gaining all that ATK then gaining any destroyed monsters ATK to! yeeesh... everything else seems pretty good thogh 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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