Rogue Executioner - A new Spirit Warrior Monster (with New OCG!)

[BFG Studios]

The new Spirit OCG comes from: [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ho-o"]http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ho-o[/url] ([b]ZEXAL[/b] Series)

I like spirits... especially the ones that are Lv4 or lower...
for for this, i made a Lv3 Warrior

[img]http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2952/390021.jpg[/img]
Lore:
[size=4][b]Cannot be Special Summoned. During the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up: Return it to its owner's hand. This card can attack your opponent directly. If your opponent controls no monsters when this effect is activated: Double the amount of damage infliced.[/b][/size]

Advantages: Easy to get on the field. Easy to cause damage
Disadvantages: This card will usually only be able to use it's effect to deal 700 damage instead of 1400

Artwork by JazinKay
(I know this is a common pic, but i didnt feel like looking hard for a pic this time)

[ragnarok1945]

nothing really new, almost reminds me of toon effects

but it's balanced out, so I'll give this 8.9/10

[BFG Studios]

well, glad you like it and think its balanced... thats what i was going for

[kyle mantle]

i agree well balanced

[BFG Studios]

well im glad people think its balanced
i like people who like my stuff

the reason why i didnt just make its ATK 700 is because its possible to add equip cards to this card... make it even more powerful!

[Max.]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Picture - 7/10 - Somewhat reused, but I <3 it.[/font]
[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Effects - 5.5/10 - The effect is somewhat useless, as if there are no monsters on the opponents field, you don't need an effect to attack them directly. But, then again, it's still and extra 700 damage to the opponent. So, it's kinda in the middle.[/font]
[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Usefulness - 7.5/10 - It's somewhat useful, especially if you draw her first turn.[/font]
[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Originality - 6/10 - It's original. But the "direct-attack" effect is dreadfully overused.[/font]
[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Overall - 7.5/10 - It's a good card. Though there could be a few things you could improve on.[/font]

[BFG Studios]

[quote name='Max.' timestamp='1312197565' post='5403909']
[font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Picture - 7/10 - Somewhat reused, but I <3 it.[/font]
[font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Effects - 5.5/10 - The effect is somewhat useless, as if there are no monsters on the opponents field, you don't need an effect to attack them directly. But, then again, it's still and extra 700 damage to the opponent. So, it's kinda in the middle.[/font]
[font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Usefulness - 7.5/10 - It's somewhat useful, especially if you draw her first turn.[/font]
[font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Originality - 6/10 - It's original. But the "direct-attack" effect is dreadfully overused.[/font]
[font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Overall - 7.5/10 - It's a good card. Though there could be a few things you could improve on.[/font]
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I know the pic has been used... i just didnt feel like looking for a [i]really[/i] good pic so i chose one of the more common ones
I've been thinking about the effect, and i think i'll just lower its ATK to 700 and remove that useless effect, and add another effect! the Direct-Attack effect may be overused... but it works most of the time

I think if i make its attack 700, it'll be too much like Inaba White Rabbit, but im sure the card will still be good

[Resident Fascist]

Wtf does this have to do with Japanese Mythology? Spirit Monsters(Minus 2~) all have something to do with Japanese Mythology...I'd prefer it if it where based on the theme of the Subtype. anyway, poking for 700 is pretty useless so...7/10?