Haverghast Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 [img]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/2479/461243.jpg[/img] [spoiler='Lore:']If your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card that destroys all monters on your field: Special Summon this card from your hand; negate the activation and effect and destroy it. During the End Phase of the turn this card was Special Summoned by this effect: return it to your Deck. [/spoiler] Plz rate, also, if anyone has any info on what is okay as card images, please tell me! (e.g. gore, partial nudity) (not a perv, but it's hard to find decent warrior lady >.>) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 I might be able to help with the OCG a little. If nothing needed fixing, then shoot me. If your opponent activates a Spell or Trap card that destroys all cards on your side of the field, Special Summon this card from your hand, and negate the Spell or Trap card and destroy it . If you activate this card's effect, return it to your deck and shuffle your deck. It would be good against Straight Flush and Heavy Storm or something like that. But thats it. Also. You should try and find a better pic. But for a first card. It's not that bad. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haverghast Posted August 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 okay, fixed Ocg, If you give me a reason to change the pic, then I will. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 [quote name='finally' timestamp='1312232726' post='5405551'] okay, fixed Ocg, If you give me a reason to change the pic, then I will. [/quote] At the edge of the card. There is a White Opening. >_> Plus its really not that good XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haverghast Posted August 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 Changed pic, better, worse, or same? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 [quote]If your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card that destroys all cards on your field: Special Summon this card from your hand; negate the activation and effect and destroy it. During the End Phase of the turn this card was Special Summoned by this effect: return it to your Deck.[/quote] That's the correct OCG, with the most updated terms. It's actually quite balanced, though I'm not sure where you'd really be able to use it effectively. The only cards that destroy all cards on your field that are even remotely close to being used are Judgment Dragon and Black Rose Dragon, and I'm not even sure if those work (due to your effect stating [b]your[/b] field, which I don't know if that means your field only, or just if the card's effect would involve everything on your field being destroyed). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haverghast Posted August 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 Fixed it. made this card in response to Reigeki, Darkhole, Torrental Tribute, ect,ect. so yes, works if it would destroy everything, since your field would be destroyed. just a thought, didn't wanna be the average newbie, posting cards that are almost invincible or cap like that... any ways thanks + rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 [quote name='finally' timestamp='1312234657' post='5405676'] Fixed it. made this card in response to Reigeki, Darkhole, Torrental Tribute, ect,ect. so yes, works if it would destroy everything, since your field would be destroyed. just a thought, didn't wanna be the average newbie, posting cards that are almost invincible or cap like that... any ways thanks + rep [/quote] It's actually not bad at all, though perhaps the image could be a bit better. The problem is, Dark Hole, Torrential Tribute, etc., only destroy "monsters", therein the way you have this worded, it won't work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haverghast Posted August 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 ohh, crap! so thats what you ment earlier, all cards=defense agianst cards like final destiny only! okay changed to all monsters...I think thats it, anyone disagree?(I'm not changing the pic, cause the pic isn't overly important) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Resident Fascist Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 It's decent in a game where decent simply isn't enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haverghast Posted August 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 ehh, even so, decent is ok for me, considering this is my first card. thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 2, 2011 Report Share Posted August 2, 2011 [quote name='✪✪✪~Star~✪✪✪' timestamp='1312232093' post='5405519'] I might be able to help with the OCG a little. If nothing needed fixing, then shoot me. If your opponent activates a Spell or Trap card that destroys all cards on your side of the field, Special Summon this card from your hand, and negate the Spell or Trap card and destroy it . If you activate this card's effect, return it to your deck and shuffle your deck. It would be good against Straight Flush and Heavy Storm or something like that. But thats it. Also. You should try and find a better pic. But for a first card. It's not that bad. 8.5/10 [/quote] Not Heavy Storm Remember, Heavy Storm only nukes all the spells/traps, not monsters overall after the modifications, the effect looks fine the way it is I'll give this 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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