biraj321 Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Well here they are my MysticMan Archetype. Ive only got a few but ill update them when i finish more. [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/4284/61375b.jpg[/img] When this card is Tributed Summoned: Destroy all cards on your side of the field except this card. Once per turn: You can Tribute one monster on your side of the field to active this effect: Banish monsters from your graveyard equal to the tributed monster's level and Special Summon 1 WIND monster with the same level as the amount of Banished monsters. [img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/409/61375.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up or Special Summoned. If a level 4 or lower monster you control was removed from the field this turn, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is Summoned, you can tribute 1 card to Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from your hand, deck or graveyard. That card cannot be used as a synchro material monster. [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/409/61375.jpg[/img] When this card is Normal Summoned you can Special Summon 1 level 3 or lower "MysticMan" monster from your hand. This card cannot declare an attack unless you banish 1 monster from your graveyard. When this card is removed from the field except by battle, send 1 card from the field to the graveyard. If you chose "MysticMan Banisher" you can Special Summon 1 card from your hand. [img]http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/409/61375.jpg[/img] Pay 1000 life-points. The turn-player cannot declare an attack the turn you activate this card. Return all monsters from your side of the field to your hand and remove from play 3 cards from your graveyard. If you returned a "MysticMan" monster(s), you can Special Summon level 6 or lower "MysticMan" monsters from your deck equal to the number "MysticMan" monsters returned to your hand. [img]http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/409/61375.jpg[/img] [img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/409/61375.jpg[/img] "MysticMan Cavalry-Guard" + "MysticMan Cavalry-Guard" + "MysticMan Cavalry-Guard" When this card is Fusion Summoned, Special Summon 2 of your banished monsters whos level equal 7. Whenever a "MysticMan" monster is removed from the field, inflict 200 damage to your opponent. [img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/409/61375.jpg[/img] Tribute 2 monsters you control. Destroy all Spell and Trap cards on your opponents side of the field. [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/409/61375.jpg[/img] Whenever a card effect you control is activated that banishes or removes cards from the field, you can pay 100 life points to keep that card in the field or graveyard. If this card would be destroyed you discard your hand to negate that effect and destroy it. During your 3rd end phase after activating this card, destroy it. [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/409/61375.jpg[/img] When this card is Special Summoned from your deck, banish 1 card your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can return 1 monster you control to your hand to increase this cards ATK by 500. When this card is removed from the field by an effect, add 1 of your banished cards to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 well the Lore doesn't really make sense, and the attack may be low, but without a proper effect I can't say what the ATK should be. when you fix it, I'll make sure to read it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucario2812 Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 I found the effect confusing and you don't have to have the effect to destroy all cards on your side of the field. And try a cap on the effect. I'll help with the phrasing as best i can here i go: When this card is Tributed Summoned: Destroy all cards on your side of the field except this card. Once per turn: Tribute one monster on your side of the field to active this effect: Banish from your graveyard a monster(s) who's level equals the tributed monster and Special Summon 1 WIND monster with the same level as the banished monster(s). There i hoped i helped but Mr. Striker is the best person to ask about phrasing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biraj321 Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 ill try to exlain the lore: Lets say i tribute a level 5 monster. I have to remove from play 5 monsters from my graveyard and then i can special summon a level 5 WIND monster from my deck. At first this doesnt make sense but u will see soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Ahh, When this card is Tributed Summoned: Destroy all cards on your side of the field except this card. Once per turn: You can Tribute one monster on your side of the field to active this effect: Banish monsters from your graveyard equal to the tributed monster's level and Special Summon 1 WIND monster with the same level as the amount of Banished monsters. I hope this is what your trying to say! Mr. Striker or BFG Studios have the best Ocg and phrasing skills I know of... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biraj321 Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 yes thank u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 the new cards are interesting, I'm sorta partial on Banisher...he's not really overpowered, but if you had a deck that benifitted from banishing monsters, he would be...very good though, the elder has an interesting effect to! I like them, the spell however seems to hurt you much, much more than the opponent... 8/10 I wanna see some more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Change 1 thing "When this card is removed from the field except by battle, send 1 card from the field to the graveyard. If you chose "MysticMan Banisher" you can Special Summon 1 card from your hand." <---for that, for the special summon 1 card from your hand, you should say that card cannot be ANOTHER Banisher Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biraj321 Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 added the cavalry and fusion: will get synchro up there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 for War-Force, that burn needs to be higher 200 burn is virtually nothing nowadays, make it like 1000 or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 yeah, burn is way low...however someone jumped on me saying 500 was to much! >.< any ways increase the burn and you'll be good, no ocg fusion card = 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 [quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1312564899' post='5416818'] yeah, burn is way low...however someone jumped on me saying 500 was to much! >.< any ways increase the burn and you'll be good, no ocg fusion card = 8/10 [/quote] 500 isn't much at all now, if someone said over 1000, THEN it's pushing it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biraj321 Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 hmmm maybe 400? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nkschlosser Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Yeah I saw something wrong.... there were two elders at thebeginning. it may have been just some lagg but I think there were twocards with the same name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 [quote name='biraj321' timestamp='1312571102' post='5417173'] hmmm maybe 400? [/quote] I'd go with 700 - 800 but it's still your card, so you do what you want! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biraj321 Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Well lets say i use magic-shattering and return 4 cards to my hand and leave the war-force (i can do that with my field card im gonna make) and inflict 1600. Then with the effect of magic-shattering special summon 4 more and then use one of their effects and return more to inflict 2000+. I can already think of an otk... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 eeep, well to be fair you didn't have the field posted so I didn't know... okay, definetly lower, otk is a no,no! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biraj321 Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 i got it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 nice effect, but paying a mere 100 to keep from banishing a monster is a little cheap... someone could use Dark Hole or giant trunade and you could pay 500 to keep all your monsters or spells and traps on the field(it says banish or removed from field) however, since its destroyed after 3 turns...I guess its ok... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biraj321 Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 I think the card says ur card effect... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 [quote name='biraj321' timestamp='1312571102' post='5417173'] hmmm maybe 400? [/quote] I just said 500 isn't much, you should have said 700 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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