shonenhikada Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Hidden room of spells Something I don't get is my images are cool,I took time making this image,and the effect isn't bad so instead of bad ocg error why not just tell me why you gave it the score you did so i can learn from it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicken Bob Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Pretty nice! It's just short of perfect, so 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Picture- BAD no circulation and set id. really i think that this cards Phails and if this is perfect then chicken bob you sure havent seen a thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted February 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Picture- BAD no circulation and set id. really i think that this cards Phails and if this is perfect then chicken bob you sure havent seen a thing.[align=center]^_^A new card is what i have made It's for bhims contest It will be my last card for a while^_^ Mistfic' date=' Misty Warrior Of Mist[/i'] EffectThis card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. Pay 500 Life Points during each of your Standby phases to activate this cards effect when it is in your hand. During your Draw chose one of the following effects--Activate when your opponent has 1 card in his hand, increase the ATK of 1 of your monsters by 300-Activate when your opponent has 2 cards in his hand, decrease the ATK of a monster by 300-Activate when your opponent has 3 cards in his hand, you may draw an extra card-Activate when your opponent has 4 cards in his hand, your opponent discards 1 random card from his/her hand-Activate when your opponent has 5 cards in his hand, your opponent loses 300 Life Points-Activate when your opponent has 6 cards in his hand, pay 300 Life Points Notes-Name, dont ask wanted something random and found it ^_^-Image was something i stumbled on on DeviantArt and it made me make the card actually-Effect makes your opponent doubtful and worried about your cards, to be safe he needs to have 6 cards which means that he has to stop playing any card which is something no duelist will do, yes i know it's powerful but there is the 500 Life Points you have to pay and besides it's weak- lol i know that the cards effect is big ^_^- yes it's for Bhim's contest- sadly it will be me last card for a while, tierd of making cards- i think this card might make me start another set althought i have 2 sets yet to complete and a new one already on the way ^_^- and i am imitating DJ lol ^_^, very well right? ^_^[/align] oh but of course because this is what you consider a good picture,lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Picture- BAD no circulation and set id. really i think that this cards Phails and if this is perfect then chicken bob you sure havent seen a thing.Actually, no circulation just means it's Unlimited Edition.And these are pretty cool!Just, maybe run a Hue/Sat through the first image, I like the actual image, but not the color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted February 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 alright well thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dongaboy Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 OverpoweredThe first cardKeepers of the magical library is way overpoweredSpells can activate fast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Oops, I forgot something:Normal SummonedSpecial Summoned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 alot of spelling mistakes other than that pretty good, i like the images Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted February 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 alot of spelling mistakes other than that pretty good' date=' i like the images[/quote']Actual when doing this I made sure that their were no spelling errors. oh sheet normal summon I can't believe i missed that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Hidden room of Spells: " This card can only be activate,when there's a face up " good checking plus your capatilizing words after comma's, and multiple double spaces Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted February 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Hidden room of Spells: " This card can only be activate' date='when there's a face up " good checking plus your capatilizing words after comma's, and multiple double spaces[/quote'] yes some cards in real life have words capitalized even when their's no comma like "Deck" and stuff,also their's a - in between face-up which is common eg "http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Swords_of_Revealing_Light" go to here and you'll see that theirs a big dash between face up,and the spacing was put in place so it wouldn't look at fake,if you look at some real cards you'll see that they are aligned a certain way and if i didn't put spaces then well it would just look bad. if you look at my card correctly you'll see i put a dash their. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 maybe if you have to tribute the monster and remove the spell counters to special summon the monster, it would be less overpowered. just a thought though.... anyway, i like the cards ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 no, these do look bad double spacing = looks shoddy nd fake no spaces after full stops or comma's = looks bad using 'Their' insted of 'There' = thats just bad grammar so yahh yoo may have checked other cards, but yoo still messed up alot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted February 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 no' date=' these do look bad double spacing = looks shoddy nd fake no spaces after full stops or comma's = looks bad using 'Their' insted of 'There' = thats just bad grammar so yahh yoo may have checked other cards, but yoo still messed up alot.[/quote'] fine you got me on the grammar,but i did research into everything,else and how do you suggest without spacing out the words to remedy the problem of card maker where you have unequally space lines above and below you. I mean if you ever look at a yu-gi-oh card you'll see that's not right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 no' date=' these do look bad double spacing = looks shoddy nd fake no spaces after full stops or comma's = looks bad using 'Their' insted of 'There' = thats just bad grammar so yahh yoo may have checked other cards, but yoo still messed up alot.[/quote'] fine you got me on the grammar,but i did research into everything,else and how do you suggest without spacing out the words to remedy the problem of card maker where you have unequally space lines above and below you. I mean if you ever look at a yu-gi-oh card you'll see that's not right. I agree With everything Azwolop said and the reason why im quoting your post Shonen, is it basically shows where your going wrong, if you compare the way you wrote this quoted post with your cards, i think ppl can see the connection to your errors. Stop trying to defend yourself against every negative comment that flys at ya, your as bad as that Death guy. Cards Other then the pointed out errors and not so good pictures, they are ok ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 The first cards characters need a bit of work, they look a little bit pixilated to be honest, 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted February 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 no' date=' these do look bad double spacing = looks shoddy nd fake no spaces after full stops or comma's = looks bad using 'Their' insted of 'There' = thats just bad grammar so yahh yoo may have checked other cards, but yoo still messed up alot.[/quote'] fine you got me on the grammar,but i did research into everything,else and how do you suggest without spacing out the words to remedy the problem of card maker where you have unequally space lines above and below you. I mean if you ever look at a yu-gi-oh card you'll see that's not right. I agree With everything Azwolop said and the reason why im quoting your post Shonen, is it basically shows where your going wrong, if you compare the way you wrote this quoted post with your cards, i think ppl can see the connection to your errors. Stop trying to defend yourself against every negative comment that flys at ya, your as bad as that Death guy. Cards Other then the pointed out errors and not so good pictures, they are ok ^_^ i'm not trying to defend I'm merely trying to convey why i did the things i did,up to now i still haven't gotten an answer on my question above. now why is your comment seems more like an insult than something constructive criticism I've seen some pretty crappy looking pictures get praise as good pictures and pics that don't even look like yu-gi-oh art even the red eyes wyvern people gave the guy with "king of mist" 10/10 oh god it's the best, the red eyes 8/10 it looks fake ,bad ocg and the ocg was a direct copy of the card. WTF. I spend time on the image,while people some not all get theirs direct from deviant and get 9/10,10/10 now is that right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Eh. They're definitely not the worst I've seen, but riddled with OCG errors. Plus, the second picture is just... plain... wrong. O,o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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