Therrion Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]My 2nd Xyz card. [/center][/center] [center][center]BaniSharks FTW [/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/5841/leviathsoldier.png[/img] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][spoiler=Lore]Once per turn you can activate 1 of the following effects: -Remove 1 Xyz Material: Destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field (Quick) -Remove 2 Xyz Material: Negate the activation of an Effect Monster's effect and send it to the graveyard. (Quick)[/spoiler] [/center][/center] [center][center]Rate/Comment/Fix and such [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Remove?Isn't it Detach? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Welche the crab Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 The ATK seems a bit high for rank 3. Maybe closer to 2300? But the effect is nice. What do you mean "quick"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [center][center]Quick means it isn't ignition. It CAN be used during the opponent's turn. [/center][/center] [center][center]Detach is correct, sorry, could you rate the card?[/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]The ATK is fine, can overcome Stardust and such and it requires 3 Materials, not just 2. [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 I can't rate card... I'm stil a newbie... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [center][center]I have seen your cards and I ask for your opinion. I care not that you are a "newbie".[/center][/center] [center][center][/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Well,Ok,IMO your card is fine enough for me 8,5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [center][center]Cool [/center][/center] [center][center]That wasn't that bad, was it?[/center][/center] [center][center]Post more of your Mages, I like them [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Time Psyduck Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Not bad. 2600 is still a bit high for a rank 3, even with three materials (since 3 material rank 4's don't pass 2500), but it's not a major problem. The first effect would be an ignition effect - it doesn't negate, and doesn't say you can use it in either player's turn, so there's nothing to say it's a quick effect. The second effect is good, but since it's one use only, and then only if you don't use the other effect more than once, it's fair. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [center][center]If you read the lore instead, it says (quick) [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Time Psyduck Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 But (quick), like that at the end of an effect, isn't yugioh card grammar. The text of the effect itself needs to say something to indicate it's a quick effect. I mentioned that it's not a quick effect because I'd read that, but not seen anything to suggest it in the text itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drcrisis Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Bit bland effect ;/ I give you 6/10 for the effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [center][center]@Time, I don't know the new OCG to indicate that, I don't even know if there is new or if it stayed old.[/center][/center] [center][center]@drcrisis, that is what I consider spam. Don't just give a rating, what could I do for you to make it better? Don't just rate and say "Boring".[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drcrisis Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Im just saying its like any other card in the game. Most cards here have crazy effects, even if its OP its best to make it unique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Time Psyduck Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 I think for the ocg it would be "during either player's turn" after the once per turn clause, (unless it were to negate the activation of the spell/trap). That technically still means it's spell speed one, so you can't destroy a trap as it's set, but can still destroy it at some point that turn (and if you still had materials for the monster effect negation, you'd likely want to wait anyway.) drcrisis: Just because other people create cards with crazy effects doesn't make something that's more conventional bad. And no, uniqueness is not more important than balance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [center][center]I can and do create some unique cards, but after alot of those, some have to be semi-basic.[/center][/center] [center][center]Thanks Psyduck, will include on future cards.[/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 you shouldn't have written quick you should have just say the effect can be activated on either player's turn in the lore itself now if only you have the effect to reattach the XYZ materials back on......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [center][center]There is usually never suppose to be a way to do that.[/center][/center] [center][center]For future reference, could you comment AND rate I love getting rates (?/10)[/center][/center] [center][center]Also just like your comments rag [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 well too many people told me my rates are irrelavent still, if you really want one, I'll give this one 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [center][center]Yay! Screw the naysayers I love ratings [/center][/center] [center][center]Thanks [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [center][center]Bump[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.