Steam World

[L of the Shinigami]

These are cards that are based on Steam Punk ideas. This is the Set so far. Please tell me what you think of them.

Warrior of the Steaming Lotus
[img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/4089/464973ek.jpg[/img]

Steaming Cheshire Cat
[img]http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/3825/464973.jpg[/img]

Mechanized Teeth Punk
[img]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/3825/464973.jpg[/img]

Chair of Time
[img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/3825/464973.jpg[/img]

Loving Ambush Boy
[img]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/3825/464973.jpg[/img]

Archer of the Steaming Lotus
[img]http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/3825/464973.jpg[/img]

Pistoleer of the Steaming Lotus
[img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/3825/464973.jpg[/img]

S.T.E.V.E.
[img]http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/3825/464973.jpg[/img]

Aviator Kid
[img]http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/3825/464973.jpg[/img]

Sniper of the Steaming Lotus
[img]http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/3825/464973.jpg[/img]

Leader of the Steaming Lotus
[img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3825/464973.jpg[/img]

[Archwing]

Well
First off, just somthing I noticed, Shouldnt Steam monsters have somthing to do with FIRE and/or pyro-types and WATER and/or Aqua-types? I guess the machine-type thing covers it but, oh well, jsut my opinion.
[b]Warrior of the Steaming Lotus[/b]
Name: good start
Picture: Fine other than the black box around the image, try to get rid of those, Its pretty easy.
Effect: Well first off, and this goes for the rest of the cards too, next time you post cards put the lore under them so its easier to read. Effect is way too overpowered and it has too much ATK and DEF for somthing that looks like its ment to be the basic troop.

[b]Steaming Cheshire Cat[/b]

Name: Seems like an odd thing to include to this....much less ANY set of cards
Picture: same as the other one, get rid of the black box
Effect: Some OCG problems.

[b]Mechanized Teeth Punk[/b]

Name: Odd...
Picture: Meh, White creature with bland background and a signiture.
Lore: Boring tbh

[b]Chair Of Time[/b]
Name: Okay..... It dosnt seem to have anthing to do with time
Picture: Fine i guess... dull, colorless
Effect: Its a decent effect

[b]Loving Ambush Boy[/b]

Name: What is this i dont even......
Picture: Allright.... This card has nothing to do with "Steam"...
Effect: Odd.....

[b]Archer of the Steaming Lotus[/b]

Name: Good back to the set
Picture: Black box again
Effect: Okay.... The set seems all over the place... And why no DEF at all?

[b]Pistoleer of the Steaming Lotus[/b]

Name: Okay
Picture: We have a Samurai, a Cat, A Mutant, A Pressure Gauge with gears, Some kid piggybacking a pissed off man/woman, A Cowboy Archer and a Pirate? You seem all over the place
Lore: Better than the previous one

[b]S.T.E.V.E.[/b]

Name: Um?
Picture: Just odd
Effect: Needs to be more specific

[b]Aviator Kid[/b]

Name: Allright i guess
Picture: Text in the corner is bad
Effect: Overpowered IMO

[b]Sniper of the Steaming Lotus?[/b]

Name: Card says "Tamer" You put "Sniper" sniper makes more sense by the picture
Picture: Allright
Effect: Bland

[b]Leader of the Steaming Lotus[/b]
Name: Allright, You could think of somthing better though
Picture:Kinda bland
Effect: How dose this come from the cat?!?! Whatever, Rest of the effect is okay

Overall needs work, You need to find more Uniformed pictures and a overall theme to the effects and such. Keep working on em

[Therrion]

[center][center]Fire-Attribute Aqua-Type monsters would be perfect justification for "Steam".[/center][/center]

[ragnarok1945]

it's a shame you didn't have the spell/traps to support the vanillas

for S.T.E.V.E., it's a bit TOO versatile, you might want to consider a drawback to it