Therrion Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/4056/59518x.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore(NEW)]This card can attack your opponent directly. Once per turn: Banish 1 card in your graveyard. Inflict 600 damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points: banish the top card of your deck. During each of your End Phases: Banish this card until your next Standby Phase. When this card is returned to the field by this effect: Send up to 2 cards in your hand to the graveyard: Select non-Spell banished cards up to the number of cards sent to the graveyard by this effect; add the selected cards to your hand.[/spoiler] [/center][/center] [center][center]TOTALLY redisigned the card.[/center][/center] [center][center]Now it is more "lonely".[/center][/center] [center][center]I thought if it could tutor Spells, it would be way to powerful.[/center][/center] [center][center]The "Sending" instead of "Discarding" is to prevent Fabled/ other shenanigens.[/center][/center] [center][center]Pretty hard to kill though, D. Pris and Mirror Force could stop it. Also Icarus Attack/Raigeki Break or an attacked Ryko, etc. [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 3000 burn is too much since you're banishing 2 in either player's graveyard and the burn effect requires 5 TOTAL banished, it's not too hard to pull off I'd drop it to 1500ish burn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 [center][center]Then should I increase the ATK or DEF for survivabilty?[/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 that, and for the 600 burn, maybe say it has to be a SPECIFIC type of card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 [center][center]I would like you, Rag, to retalk. I was bored of the other effect anyways XD[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 I like the card. If you are worried about survivability then drop the level by 1 so now Gravity Bind and Level Limit Area B will help it. Second I like the face that it isn't catered to spells because that could be broken (even though a spellcaster not liking spells is quite odd lol). So in my eyes its a great card that doesn't really need fixing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 [quote name='Therrion' timestamp='1312807316' post='5424627'] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]I would like you, Rag, to retalk. I was bored of the other effect anyways XD [/quote] and exactly what do you want me to say?[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 [center][center]Rerate the card because I changed it from what it was >,>[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 so overall now it's a faster card recovery process for the effect rest of the effect hasn't changed TOO much, but I'll still give you 9.4/10 for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 IMO your monster's level should be 2 or 3, because it only has 600 ATK and 1000 DEF, but hey it's your choice, i'm just giving opinion, 9.5/10 for the effect! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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