tacolaw Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 ok so I made these if theres a fix needed plz say so i may fix it [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/3043/448629.jpg[/img] [img]http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/3750/448629x.jpg[/img] [img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/6364/448629l.jpg[/img] [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/656/448629d.jpg[/img] [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/6634/448629j.jpg[/img][img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/3043/448629.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
おジャマ・キング Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/j59ksl.png[/IMG] for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tacolaw Posted August 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 screw all the over created gansters? haha jk but uhmm thank you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 He's saying that the card grammar is terrible. Look at real cards and then yours. "When 3 dragons are summoned something happens." What does that even mean? "Hidden ability" isn't used anywhere in yugioh. Also, Fusion monsters generally require Fusion Materials, and Ritual Monsters generally require a Ritual Spell card. And おジャマ・キング, you may call yourself the protector or AoC, but your comment is just retarded. And I hope you take offense to that statement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
おジャマ・キング Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 [quote name='tacolaw' timestamp='1312854598' post='5426359'] haha jk but uhmm thank you? [/quote] That was supposed to be an insult... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tacolaw Posted August 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 i found it funny to be honest but uhmm OK I lost my virginity, so, can I have yours?~ lets see grammar needs major improvement and hidden ability is a card i created not a actual Yughio card just like the rest of my dragons except the wicked gods i have and a few magic cards but i wanna know is it decent enough or overpowered and instead of "When 3 dragons are summoned something happens" what can I put in place in your option Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 Well what's a hidden ability? An extra effect? Just say "Select one Dragon-Type mosnter and activate one of the following effects: The selected monster can attack twice this turn. The selected monster gains attack equal to another monster you control (until the End Phase (optional)) The selected monster can attack directly." There really is no reason to say hidden ability, and even if it's your card, we usually follow actual Yugioh cards on this site. Try looking at real cards and using grammar from them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tacolaw Posted August 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 hidden ability is a equip card and the player can choose one of the three on only one dragon type monster not divine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezmoe Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 [quote name='Miror B.' timestamp='1312854877' post='5426369'] He's saying that the card grammar is terrible. Look at real cards and then yours. "When 3 dragons are summoned something happens." What does that even mean? "Hidden ability" isn't used anywhere in yugioh. Also, Fusion monsters generally require Fusion Materials, and Ritual Monsters generally require a Ritual Spell card. And おジャマ・キング, you may call yourself the protector or AoC, but your comment is just retarded. And I hope you take offense to that statement. [/quote] OCG is well, just, kinda, [size=2]how do i put this..[/size] not good. And hidden ability thing, that only goes for Ojamas. Pics: Overused Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkThief Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 waaah!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Metallium Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 I saw it, aim gonna HURL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niv-Mizzet Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 I would put a long and thorough OCG fix, but I have no idea what your cards are supposed to do in the first place. You're using Fusion and Ritual monster frames, while giving no Fusion Materials or Ritual Spells to summon them? What do ???? and X000 even mean when you don't put a way to set them? Which three dragons? What is this "Hidden Ability" card you have alluded to? These are only some of the things you need to fix if you want to even have a chance at getting the OCG fixed, because your cards are barely understandable the way you have them written. So fix that, then I'll give you an honest evaluation and ways to improve, unlike most other people on this thread. Thank you for listening to my rant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Newsd Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 I Think Those Cards Are Awesome, Takolaw! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThorGodOfThunder Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 [quote name='Newsd' timestamp='1312991134' post='5430228'] I Think Those Cards Are Awesome, Takolaw! [/quote] Sorry to say, but I don't, since there's not listed Fusion Material Monsters or Ritual Spell Cards, Dragons should be Dragon-type, there is no thing such as 'hidden abilities' and "when the three dragons are summoned, something will happen" just shouldn't be together with card effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tacolaw Posted August 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 Well as far as frames are concern it's just for looks except the one that is a fusion hidden ablilty magic card is explained I'n one of my replys n thanks for ur positive n negative comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tacolaw Posted August 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2011 better or no? [img]http://img803.imageshack.us/img803/3043/448629.jpg[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/3084/448629q.jpg[/img] [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/3043/448629.jpg[/img] [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/7742/448629k.jpg[/img] [img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/3043/448629.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
おジャマ・キング Posted August 11, 2011 Report Share Posted August 11, 2011 You screwed the OCG again, and the most original ATK a non-Nomi, non-Synchro, non-Fusion non-Xyz non-whateverextradeckmonsterstheyhaveinthefuture monster will ever have is 3300. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tacolaw Posted August 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2011 OK so what your saying is i should lower my monsters atk points to max of 3300 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KuraiKage Posted August 13, 2011 Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 Wow pretty cool and i see that we have the same taste in dragon pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tacolaw Posted August 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 haha i thank Google for the pictures =D[img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/240/448629p.jpg[/img] [img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/3043/448629.jpg[/img] [img]http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/3043/448629.jpg[/img] [img]http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/3043/448629.jpg[/img] [img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/3043/448629.jpg[/img] [img]http://img803.imageshack.us/img803/656/448629d.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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