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This is my newest set of cards the Burnest, this is only the start
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I think this OCG would be correct
Tribute 1 monster you control; inflict 500 damage to your opponent. This card cannot be affected by Trap Cards.

This card is ok i guess
ya might want to put a restriction on that burn effect
maybe once per turn... otherwise... broken

This is okay... not to exciting... but not to bad...
7.7/10

The second card's effect is pretty bland... maybe adding another effect or something would make it better...
7.5/10

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[center][center]OCG on first: "Once per turn: Tribute 1 monster; inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points."[/center][/center]
[center][center]Pretty sure, but my OCG isn't perfect.[/center][/center]
[center][center]I don't feel like squinting to read the 2nd one. but its just FIRE, not FIRE ATTRIBUTE[/center][/center]

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Don't worry, I am here to solve all of your newb problems who don't know how to post lore:

By Tributing 1 FIRE monster on your side of the field: You can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. When this monster destroys an opponent's monster in battle: Draw 1 card.

I'm not even gonna bother with the last part, because it's just too broken for me to even consider posting. Allowing you to gain +1 Field Advantage AND +2 to your hand is waaaayyy to much of a broken effect. Why do you think Pot of Greed, Spirit of Yata-Garasu, Graceful Charity, and Destiny Hero - Disk Commander are all forbidden? They allow you to draw +2 cards. With this, you've got +3 altogether, which spells out disaster for your opponent.

Suggestion: Remove the last effect and replace it with something like "When this card is used for Synchro Material: Special Summon 1 FIRE monster from your Deck with 1500 or less ATK".

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