yugman Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 This is my newest set of cards the Burnest, this is only the start [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/9639/44930.jpg[/img][img]http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/9639/44930.jpg [/img]img]http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/9639/44930.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 I think this OCG would be correct Tribute 1 monster you control; inflict 500 damage to your opponent. This card cannot be affected by Trap Cards. This card is ok i guess ya might want to put a restriction on that burn effect maybe once per turn... otherwise... broken This is okay... not to exciting... but not to bad... 7.7/10The second card's effect is pretty bland... maybe adding another effect or something would make it better... 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 [center][center]OCG on first: "Once per turn: Tribute 1 monster; inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points."[/center][/center] [center][center]Pretty sure, but my OCG isn't perfect.[/center][/center] [center][center]I don't feel like squinting to read the 2nd one. but its just FIRE, not FIRE ATTRIBUTE[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 Don't worry, I am here to solve all of your newb problems who don't know how to post lore: By Tributing 1 FIRE monster on your side of the field: You can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. When this monster destroys an opponent's monster in battle: Draw 1 card. I'm not even gonna bother with the last part, because it's just too broken for me to even consider posting. Allowing you to gain +1 Field Advantage AND +2 to your hand is waaaayyy to much of a broken effect. Why do you think Pot of Greed, Spirit of Yata-Garasu, Graceful Charity, and Destiny Hero - Disk Commander are all forbidden? They allow you to draw +2 cards. With this, you've got +3 altogether, which spells out disaster for your opponent. Suggestion: Remove the last effect and replace it with something like "When this card is used for Synchro Material: Special Summon 1 FIRE monster from your Deck with 1500 or less ATK". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 1st effect is meh for just losing 1 monster than burning your opponent for a mere 500 Solar Flare Dragon's burn effect is better than that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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