Lucas-Koot Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 Charmeleon Warrior: [img]http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/7203/464250.jpg[/img] Lore: Flip: all monsters are turning into attack position. If this monster is defeated by a monster with a water attribute you may put this card in your deck, after you put it in your deck, shuffle your deck. Brave Warrior: [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/7203/464250.jpg[/img] Lore: For every monster what is defeated by this card, this card gets 100 extra attack points, if this card is destroyed by battle search for a level 4 or lower warrior-type monster in your deck and put it in your hand. King Of The Dark Kingdom: [img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/7203/464250.jpg[/img] Lore: When ''King Of The Dark Kingdom'' fights a light attribute monster it gains 250 extra attack points for that battle. Black Hole: [img]http://i53.tinypic.com/x54kp.jpg[/img] Lore: This card gives a monster with a dark attribute 600 extra attack points and 300 extra defence points, if this card is destroyed also the monster thats wearing this card dies. I Hope You Guys Like These Card.:--) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 You have a lot of OCG errors, but I'll let the others do the OCG fixes, okay, Charmeleon Warrior, it's effect isn't that useful, and it has a flip effect but his ATK is higher than the DEF, IMO switch it ! ATK 1400, DEF 1800, Brave Warrior, first effect... Okay looks fine to me, second effect... Not that useful, how about "When this card is destroyed by battle, add 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Deck to your Hand" King Of The Dark Kingdom, I don't really like it, it has a weak ATK boost, and it has a weakness when battles against the fire monster, Black Hole, I don't really like this card either, your opponet just need MST and your equipped monster is destroyed, 7/10! Good, but needs improvement, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 OCG aside, Black Hole is too weak you need defense against card effects, otherwise a simple Heavy Storm will take care of it King of the Dark Kingdom is unimpressive for just gaining and losing atk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas-Koot Posted August 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 [quote name='Cyrus Angelius' timestamp='1312898003' post='5427400'] You have a lot of OCG errors, but I'll let the others do the OCG fixes, okay, Charmeleon Warrior, it's effect isn't that useful, and it has a flip effect but his ATK is higher than the DEF, IMO switch it ! ATK 1400, DEF 1800, Brave Warrior, first effect... Okay looks fine to me, second effect... Not that useful, how about "When this card is destroyed by battle, add 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Deck to your Hand" King Of The Dark Kingdom, I don't really like it, it has a weak ATK boost, and it has a weakness when battles against the fire monster, Black Hole, I don't really like this card either, your opponet just need MST and your equipped monster is destroyed, 7/10! Good, but needs improvement, [/quote] I Made Some Changes To Charmeleon Warrior, Brave Warrior And King Of The Dark Kingdoms. Thank You :--) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MujinTengu Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 those cards remind me of something....According to your cards effect and names writing ...you have potential to advance...it seems you dont know many cards, or am i mistaken?>> 6/10. next time work on your OCG and create effects based not only on ATK and DEF...that aside nice cards for first time (if it is)....pics are nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas-Koot Posted August 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 I Stop Making This Set, But Thanks For The Comments And Tips.:--) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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