Some of my art

[RPG King]

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[.Rai]

The tag's great. Lighting's accurate but perhaps a little strong. Blur the background for depth. There's not much there to be honest. Also the C4D at the very bottom of the render's really distracting and misplaced.

The shoe is well detailed. What I'd say is probably just work on your shadows and also texturing.

[RPG King]

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The tag's great. Lighting's accurate but perhaps a little strong. Blur the background for depth. There's not much there to be honest. Also the C4D at the very bottom of the render's really distracting and misplaced.

The shoe is well detailed. What I'd say is probably just work on your shadows and also texturing.
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[size=2]Thanks for your input[/size]

[chairman ali]

Not digging them tbh.
The style of the tag is overdone and has lost it's essence. Looks pretty crowded atm because all of the effects crashing into each other and making it hard to focus on. Lighting looks utterly un-realistic. Light bounces off objects which means that pretty much all of the focal should have green highlights/hues on it. Also the green blotches need to be warped around the light source, a curve doesn't exactly produce a round light of that perspective. It produces a curved light with a kneeling perspective. I also think there should be dark areas whereas the back, because as it seems the front is being the most lit space, it should be covered from the light.

The drawing has nice outlines but rather poor shading. Work on the shading mostly.

[Newsd]

Im An Artist Myself And Thats Great Work!