Deck Worm

[jalern]

[img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/5563/178811f.jpg[/img]

Once per turn flip a coin, if heads discard 2 cards from the top of your deck, if tails discard 2 ards from the top of your opponents deck. When this card is sent to the graveyard Special Summon 1 "Worm Token" (Insect-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 100) with the following effects, once per turn Discard 1 card from your hand, once per turn you can pay 500 life points to discard 1 card at random from yout opponents hand.


Im making a few random cards so i can get better at making good ones sorry if this is spam.

[NiGHTS_098]

For the discarding cards from the deck, you could say: send (# of cards) cards from the top of the deck to the graveyard.
You write the token stats like this:
(Insect-Type/EARTH/Level ?/ATK 500/DEF 100)
For the token's effect, there are some spelling mistakes in there.
As for both "once per turn" effects, you'd have to ask someone else for help cause I have no idea how to explain it.

Other than that, I think this card is interesting. I'm not a big fan of the picture though, but it's fine.
7/10.

[jalern]

Ill fix the stuff, and ill try to find a better picture the picture suites more of a flip summon card anyway.

[ragnarok1945]

"with the following effects, once per turn Discard 1 card from your hand, once per turn you can pay 500 life points to discard 1 card at random from yout opponents hand."

for those two effects, they're fine in itself, but you should have said you can only activate ONE of them per turn

[Sander]

[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1313222376' post='5438677']
"with the following effects, once per turn Discard 1 card from your hand, once per turn you can pay 500 life points to discard 1 card at random from yout opponents hand."

for those two effects, they're fine in itself, but you should have said you can only activate ONE of them per turn
[/quote]

[i]"Once per turn: Discard 1 card from your hand."[/i] is a mandatory discard effect, meaning if you could activate only one of them per turn, nobody would choose to activate it and would automatically go for the [i]"Once per turn: You can pay 500 life points; Randomly discard 1 card from your opponents hand" [/i]effect[i].[/i]

[serus]

you said ard instead of card