Flinzarn Posted August 13, 2011 Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 Hey, im new here so plz go easy on me... heres my first card: [img]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/6048/468617.jpg[/img] Also, what does "circulation" mean? I didnt know so i skipped it. Next card: [img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/6048/468617.jpg[/img] theres a lot of mistakes cuz i didnt know how to word it, so plz help [img]http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/6048/468617.jpg[/img] [img]http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6048/468617.jpg[/img] I cant think of a good effect, can you help? Also i want and equip card, the pic needs to be a dragon ice wing... can anyone help with that? [img]http://img571.imageshack.us/img571/6048/468617.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted August 13, 2011 Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 Firstly, circulation is the print circulation. So there is First Edition, which is the Original Printing. Then Unlimited Edition, which is reprints of cards. [ocgfix]Choose 1 Dragon-type monster on your opponent's side of the field with an ATK of 2500 or less. You gain control of the Dragon-type monster for 2 turns, then chose 1 Warrior-type monster on your side of the field and send it to the Graveyard. Return the Dragon-type monster to your opponent's hand.[/ocgfix] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flinzarn Posted August 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 yes but you need the warrior on ur field b4 u use it tho thx for tellin me what circulation tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 13, 2011 Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 Choose 1 Dragon-Type monster your opponent controls with 2500 or less ATK. Send 1 Warrior-Type monster you control to the Graveyard and take control of the selected monster. During your second Standby Phase after this card's activate, return the selected monster to the hand. Situational card is situational. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted August 13, 2011 Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 Before everything, There is No QUICK PLAY TRAP CARDS that exists... NEW OCG fix: Target 1 Dragon-Type you control and 1 Dragon-Type monster your opponent controls whose ATK is equal to or lower than 2500. Destroy both monsters; Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster from your Deck or hand with an ATK equal to lower than combined ATK of the destroyed monsters. During your 2nd Standby Phase: Return the Special Summoned monster to your Deck; Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard. Change the lore to have a more meaningful effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted August 13, 2011 Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 [quote name='ｔｒｉｎｉｔｙＳＯＵＬ' timestamp='1313246221' post='5438991'] Before everything, There is No QUICK PLAY TRAP CARDS that exists... NEW OCG fix: Target 1 Dragon-Type you control and 1 Dragon-Type monster your opponent controls whose ATK is equal to or lower than 2500. Destroy all both monsters; Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster from your Deck or hand with an ATK equal to lower than combined ATK of the destroyed monsters. During your 2nd Standby Phase: Return the Special Summoned monster to your Deck; Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard. Change the lore to have a more meaningful effect. [/quote] The grammar in this doesn't even make sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flinzarn Posted August 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 [quote name='ｔｒｉｎｉｔｙＳＯＵＬ' timestamp='1313246221' post='5438991'] Before everything, There is No QUICK PLAY TRAP CARDS that exists... NEW OCG fix: Target 1 Dragon-Type you control and 1 Dragon-Type monster your opponent controls whose ATK is equal to or lower than 2500. Destroy [color=#ffff00]all both[/color] monsters; Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster from your Deck or hand with an ATK equal to lower than combined ATK of the destroyed monsters. During your 2nd Standby Phase: Return the Special Summoned monster to your Deck; Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard. Change the lore to have a more meaningful effect. [/quote] all both? lol i like ur effect tho.. so which card shud i make it?ok i changed it. adding more cards soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted August 13, 2011 Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 Second card is redundant "When the card this is equiped to is is destroyed, destroy this card." When an monster that has an equip card equip to it and is destroyed, the equip card is destroyed too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flinzarn Posted August 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 k, better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted August 13, 2011 Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 Flame Dragon When this card is equipped with "Flame Breath" this card can attack twice per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted August 13, 2011 Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 2nd Equip only to a Dragon-Type monster. It gains 300 ATK. Send this card to the Graveyard; Inflict 600 Damage to your opponent's Life Points. If the equipped monster is destroyed and this card is sent to the Graveyard; Inflict 250 Damage to your opponent for each monsters they control. 3rd If this card is equipped with "Flame Breath"; It can attack twice in the same Battle Phase. If this card destroys a monster by battle; Banish 1 Monster Card from your opponent's Graveyard. I recommend Flame Dragon to have 1500 ATK and 200 DEF instead for possible Flamvell Support. I have added a new effect for Flame Dragon to suit the meta!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted August 13, 2011 Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 [quote name='ｔｒｉｎｉｔｙＳＯＵＬ' timestamp='1313247605' post='5439035'] 2nd Equip only to a Dragon-Type monster[b]:[/b] It gains 300 ATK. [b]During your Main Phase: You can destroy this card; Inflict 600 damage to your opponent.[/b] If the equipped monster is destroyed and this card is sent to the Graveyard: [b]Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of monsters they control x 250.[/b] 3rd [b]While[/b] this card is equipped with "Flame Breath": It can attack twice [b]during[/b] the same Battle Phase. When this card destroys a monster by battle: [b]Select and banish 1 monster in your opponent's Graveyard.[/b] [/quote] Fixed. Overall, both are pretty standard. Neither are nothing new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flinzarn Posted August 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 wow thanks alot guys! workin on it right away! [quote name='ｔｒｉｎｉｔｙＳＯＵＬ' timestamp='1313247605' post='5439035'] I have added a new effect for Flame Dragon to suit the meta!! [/quote] ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted August 13, 2011 Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 [quote name='Flinzarn' timestamp='1313258221' post='5439464'] ??? [/quote] The 'meta' is a term used to refer to any Deck that is currently successful in tournaments. I believe he is refering to the moderate success of the "Flamvell" and "Laval" archetypes, both of which have a Graveyard-banish element side to them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flinzarn Posted August 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 [quote name='Max Darkness' timestamp='1313262261' post='5439690'] The 'meta' is a term used to refer to any Deck that is currently successful in tournaments. I believe he is refering to the moderate success of the "Flamvell" and "Laval" archetypes, both of which have a Graveyard-banish element side to them. [/quote] ah ok thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 13, 2011 Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 for the trap, 2 turns is way too long. 1 is more than enough I mean yes your opponent will get it back, but it's not likely he can resummon it the second he gets it back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ultrameemo Posted August 14, 2011 Report Share Posted August 14, 2011 cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 14, 2011 Report Share Posted August 14, 2011 I suggest "Flame Dragon"s DEF is 200, so Flamvell Poun can add "Flame Dragon" from your deck to your hand, IMO all your cards looks fine to me, Good card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beastlevii Posted August 14, 2011 Report Share Posted August 14, 2011 these cards is pretty cool i guess :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flinzarn Posted August 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 [quote name='beastlevii' timestamp='1313333843' post='5441911'] these cards is pretty cool i guess :/ [/quote] thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 16, 2011 Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 A counter trap...is that even possible..? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flinzarn Posted August 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 [quote name='✪✪✪~Star~✪✪✪' timestamp='1313459703' post='5446351'] A counter trap...is that even possible..? [/quote] well, i dunno. what shud i make it im not sure of the type... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted August 16, 2011 Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 [quote name='✪✪✪~Star~✪✪✪' timestamp='1313459703' post='5446351'] A counter trap...is that even possible..? [/quote] [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Counter_Trap_Card"]http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Counter_Trap_Card[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flinzarn Posted August 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 [quote name='Max Darkness' timestamp='1313488488' post='5446730'] [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Counter_Trap_Card"]http://yugioh.wikia....unter_Trap_Card[/url] [/quote] yeah i just check my cads in my room.. there IS a counter trap. ha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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