Blood Yuchi Posted August 14, 2011 Report Share Posted August 14, 2011 [img]http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii89/3lood4ngel/MaelStormRoseDragon.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore] | Maelstorm Rose Dragon | 10 | Dragon | Synchro | Effect | 3200 | 2400 | 1 Tuner Synchro Monster + "Black Rose Dragon" When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can destroy 1 card on the field for each banished Tuner monster. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Plant-Type monster from your Graveyard to reduce the ATK of 1 face-up monster to 0 until the End Phase. When your opponent's monster declares an attack you can select it, then remove this card from play and negate the attack. During the End Phase, Special Summon this card that was removed from play by this effect. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiina Posted August 14, 2011 Report Share Posted August 14, 2011 Really good card. The effect texts are up to date and the image is good, could of swore I've seen it somewhere before. Overall-9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted August 14, 2011 Report Share Posted August 14, 2011 Lv. 10.... LE WAT. Make it Level 9. First effect is lackluster, as having Banished Tuners is not common, at all. Make it send all cards to the grave or something =D *Shot* Second effect is stupid, as it is WORSE than the original BRD. Make it 1 monster, any position, and IF in DEF, place it in face-up DEF. Once per turn is also lack luster. Honestly, it's terrible, as is. It's, essentially, a Vanilla after the first turn it was summoned. A bad version of Junk Destroyer's effect, and a bad version of BRD's second effect, as nothing would be put in ATK after this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted August 14, 2011 Report Share Posted August 14, 2011 Im not a big fan of it myself, and the ocg needs some work... heres a fix if you want! [b]1 Tuner Synchro Monster + "Black Rose Dragon"[/b] [b]When this card is Synchro Summoned[u]: Y[/u]ou can destroy 1 card on the field for each banished Tuner monster. Once per turn[u]: Y[/u]ou can [u]banish[/u] 1 Plant-Type monster from your Graveyard[u];[/u] reduce the ATK of 1 face-up monster to 0 until the End Phase. When your opponent's monster declares an attack[u]: Banish[/u] this card[u];[/u] negate the attack. During the End Phase [u]of the turn this effect was activated[/u]: Special Summon this card.[/b] The underlined parts are what I fixed I also shortened the effect (since thats the theme of cards these days) but still allowed it to have the same effect - Colons and their capital letters come after a limitation effect (when the effect can be activated). Semi-colons come after a cost. The rest of the sentense is its actual effect. - "banish" is the new "remove from play" Hopefully this helps, but my rating is a 8/10 This is because i like Fire and Dragon monsters, but i dont usually carry Plants... and I perfer Xyz's over synchros Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted August 14, 2011 Report Share Posted August 14, 2011 Interesting. More of just an upgrade on Black Rose than something new, but that was to be expected. However, Raven summed it up. So, 7/10. One problem. This card (10) = Black Rose (7) + Tuner Synchro (x) Therefore 3 = x. There is no Level 3 Tuner Synchro XDD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkThief Posted August 14, 2011 Report Share Posted August 14, 2011 i give this card a 9.5/10, nice work hehe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
finalfinder Posted August 14, 2011 Report Share Posted August 14, 2011 Black Rose already has the remove plant effect. upgrade this 1 so it can remove from play ANY monsters. And also try using an effect that can counter Card effects. but cool! 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 14, 2011 Report Share Posted August 14, 2011 "When your opponent's monster declares an attack you can select it, then remove this card from play and negate the attack" That effect should be only once per turn yes your opponent gets it back later, but even then it'll be broken if you don't do so Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted August 14, 2011 Report Share Posted August 14, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1313356083' post='5442818'] "When your opponent's monster declares an attack you can select it, then remove this card from play and negate the attack" That effect should be only once per turn yes your opponent gets it back later, but even then it'll be broken if you don't do so [/quote] No it shouldn't =/ It doesn't return automatically, so the "Once Per Turn" is extraneous. See SHOOTING STAR DRAGON or RED NOVA DRAGON. Also, seriously, look at MY post. These other guys aren't in the metagame and, hoenstly, don't have a clue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted August 14, 2011 Report Share Posted August 14, 2011 I guess it's cool to look at. I mean, there's no way to Summon it, so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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