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blackscorpion

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blackscorpion Newbie

blackscorpion

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Hy this is my new and first deck(not completed yet)...The idea of this deck is to give all effects in the hand of your opponent while lowing their LP.

here are traps and spells...

BURNING MIND
This is a field spell.
[img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/4964/468564.jpg[/img]
Increase all the attack of all BURN monsters on field by 500.whenever you active a card effect that contain BURN in its name inflict 200 damage to your opponent.

Urgent Burn
its Quick play card.
[img]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/9292/468564y.jpg[/img]

You can only active this card when you have at least one monster on your side of the field contain BURN on its name.Then your opponent will declare one of the following effect:-

*Your opponent destroy His/Her monster and receive 700 Life points.
*Your opponent does not destroy His/Her monster and get 500 Life points damage.


Restriction from the basics
This is continues trap card.
[img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/3606/468564m.jpg[/img]


After activating this card this card becomes equip card.This can only be equipped with your opponent monster.The monster equipped with this card gain 700 attack points.Whenever the equipped monsters attacks or use its effect your opponent will declare one of the following effect:-

*Destroy this card and get 1000 Life points damage.
*Get 250 Life points damage..


No way out

[img]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/4964/468564.jpg[/img]



you can only active this card when your opponent Actives Spell/Trap card.Then He/She can declare one of the following effect:-

*Destroy His/Her spell or trap card and gain 700 Life points.
*Continue the effect of His/Her spell or trap card and get 500 Life points Damage.


B-U-R-N

[img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/4964/468564.jpg[/img]



Banish these card from your graveyard to active this card:-
*Burning Mind
*BURN-Urgent Burn
*BURN-Restriction from The basics
*BURN-No way out
Destroy one monster on the field and inflict 700 Life points to both players at the end of your turn.Then your opponent declare one of the following effect:-

*Your opponent Life points will not decrease until the end of your turn and you can special summon one monster from your or your opponent graveyard ignoring its summoning conditions.

*Destroy all of your monsters and inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each BURN monster destroyed by this way.


(still not satisfied from it)

Burn-Horse From The Hell

[img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/4964/468564.jpg[/img]
Whenever this monster inflict damage to your opponent .Put one BURN counter on it.you can remove three BURN counter from this card.Then your opponent have to active one of the following effect:-

*You can destroy one card on the field.
*You can return one your and two of your opponent monsters to their owner hand.

Burn-The Godess Kyna
[img]http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/4964/468564.jpg[/img]

Whenever a card effect whose contain BURN on its name is activated(Except the effect of Burn-The Goddess Kyna)put one BURN counter on this card.Remove Three counter From this card.Then your opponent select one of the following effect.

*Increase its attack700 points.
*You can special summon one 5 level or less monster from your graveyard.

Burn-The Lord Megma
[img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/4964/468564.jpg[/img]

This card cannot Be targeted by your opponent cards when there is at least one another monster on your side of the field which contain BURN on its name.If effect of a card which contain BURN in its name is activated,instead of your opponent you will chose the effect.When this card is tribute summoned your opponent select one of the following effect:-
*Increase its attack by 300 on each card that contain BURN in its name in the graveyard.
*your opponent select up to 5 cards that contain BURN in its name from graveyard and shuffle them to your deck then you draw two cards.


Burn-Sacrificer
[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/9499/468564e.jpg[/img]
You can only active its effect when it is in face up attack position.when this card is destroyed and sent to graveyard as a result of battle your opponent select one of the following:-

*Your opponent take the battle damage instead of you.
*you get the control of monster that destroys this for one turn.

Anti Burn
[img]http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/4964/468564.jpg[/img]
Instead of your opponent get control on all cards effect that contains BURN on their name until the end of your turn.Get 800 damage at your end phase.


Burn-Ultimate Machine
[img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/553/468564a.jpg[/img]

When burning mind is on the field this monster can halve its attack points and attack your opponent directly.

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[quote]whenever you inflict Life points damage to your opponent(except battle damage)inflict 300 more damage.[/quote]

This card is so poorly written it creates an FTK.

- Activate Burning Mind
- Activate Ookazi
- Since your opponent took damage (from Ookazi), Burning Mind activates.
- Since your opponent took damage (from Burning Mind), Burning Mind activates.
- Since your opponent took damage (from Burning Mind), Burning Mind activates.

Repeat. Forever.

Your card is just a re-skinned Dark Room of Nightmare, except Dark Room of Nightmare isn't abusable because it contains "this effect is not applied to the effect of Dark Room of Nightmare".

And speaking of DRoN, if Burning Mind is just changed so that it says "this effect isn't applied to the effect of Burning Mind", then you still have a 3 card FTK with Burning Mind, DRoN, and any random burn effect. If you revise it's effect, it has to take DRoN and itself into account.

[quote]He/She can declare one of the following effect:-


*Destroy the spell/trap card and gain 700 Life points.[/quote]
I assume you mean, the opponents S/T is destroyed and your opponent gains 700 LP, right?

You're aware destroying a card and negating it are two seperate things, right? It's like using MST on Monster Reborn. It destroys the card, but the card's effect still goes off so your opponent still gets Reborn's effect and gets to pick a card.

... Sure, it might be useful-ish for continuous spells and traps, but I'd honestly rather use MST or Trap Stun or Spell Shattering Arrow or Royal Decree or... a bunch of other cards that don't require me to run a BURN monster.

Secondly, your opponent will most likely just take the 600 damage an overwhelmingly large percent of the time. You might as well use Poison of the Old Man if you need a quickplay that inflicts damage for some reason, instead of giving your opponent the choice and being super specific and etc etc.

[quote]The monster equipped with this card gain 700 attack points.whenever the equipped monsters attacks or use its effect your opponent will declare one of the following effect:-

*Destroy this card and get 1000 Life points damage.

*Get 250 Life points damage.[/quote]

So let's set up the scenario...

I have... any random monster with 1000 attack. You have any random monster with 400 attack. You use Restruction and attack.

My choice is either:
a: Take 350 damage (100 from battle. 250 from Restruction's effect) and loose my monster.
b: Take 1000 damage. Have you take 600 damage. Keep my monster and have you lose your monster.

ALTERNATIVE!

I have any random 1000 attack monster. You have a 1100 attack monster. Sam as above, Restruction and attack.

My choice is either:
a: Take 1050 damage (800 from battle. 250 from the effect) and my opponent can keep inflicting 250 every turn.
b: Take 1100 damage (100 from battle. 1000 from the effect) and my opponent can not keep inflicting 250 every turn.

Any competent duelist will choose option B every single time.

So basically, it's a trap that inflicts 1000 damage. Eh. Underwhelming

[quote]you can only active this card when your opponent declare attack with monster.He/She can declare one of the following effect:-


*Destroy the attacking monster and gain 700 Life points.


*Continue the attack and receive 500 Life points Damage.[/quote]

The only reason anyone would ever choose the first effect would be if their monster had less then 700 attack, or they had less then 500 life points.

In any case, you're so much better off just using one of those effects and sticking with it. Need a trap that burns? Use Ceasefire or Just Desserts. Need a way to destroy attacking Monsters? D-Prison, Sakuretsu, Widespread Ruin, or Mirror Force.

[quote]Destroy one monster on the field and inflict 1000 Life points to both players at the end of your turn.Then your opponent declare one of the following effect:-

*Your opponent Life points will not decrease until the end of your turn and you can special summon one monster from your or your opponent graveyard ignoring its summoning conditions.

*Destroy all of your monsters and inflict 500 damage of each BURN monster destroyed by this way.[/quote]
... I'm confused by this effect.

Your opponent declares one of the following effects... but who is the effect applied to?

First effect: Do you mean: Your opponent (the guy who didn't active B-U-R-N) won't have his LP decreased, and then he SS-es from the grave? Or... you (the guy who activated BURN) SS from the grave, and your opponent (the guy who didn't activate BURN) doesn't lose LP for the rest of the turn?

Second effect: Do you mean: Your opponent (the guy who didn't activate BURN) has all of his monsters destroyed and if he oh-so-happened to have a BURN monster, he'll take 500 points of damage? Or you (the guy who used BURN) has all your monsters destroyed and your opponent takes 500 damage for each BURN?


This would probably be easier to understand if your OCG wasn't so awful. Also yeah. Your OCG is really awful. It's hard to read and a bunch of sections don't make sense.

Also, the lack of monsters makes this hard to accurately judge.

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Burning Mind's only use is to OTK with Burning Land. None of the cards you made, the spells, the monsters, the traps, can be used with Burning Mind. Possibly Urgent Burn, but your opponent wouldn't purposely start the FTK if they're given a choice.

And I can tell it's the theme or w/e, but you REALLY shouldn't do the "give your opponent a choice" thing for two reasons. First of all, your opponent will always choose the worst effect for you, so it's inconsistent. You'd be better of splitting them into two cards and letting deck makers decide how to use them.

Secondly, your OCG is terrible so it makes it difficult to figure out what exactly it is you're trying to say.


For the sake of simplicity, I assume the effects apply to you, and your opponent just gets to choose what effect can apply to you. All mentions of "you" mean, the guy who owns the card being activated, not the guy choosing the effect.


Burn Horse:
If you've inflicted damage three times, you don't need either of these effects. Their facedown s/t is a bluff, otherwise they would have activated it to stop you from getting the third counter, and if they have two monsters you didn't inflict damage to your opponent, because they are winning. (Alternatively, they're in defense mode, which makes it difficult to figure out how you inflicted damage.)

In any case, your opponent would just pick the second effect so it would fizzle and not work every time.

Burn Goddess:
I already skipped ahead and read all the cards. Only Burn Horse, Burning Mind, and Burning Land can be used for this gal's effect consistently. The boss monster only works once. So does Sacrificer.

A part of it seems overpowered, but it can only infinite loop with Burning Land, which itself is already an OTK. Burn Horse, it'd take 6 turns to get the effect. By then if you still have this on the field and war horse, you probably just about won, but only 'cause your opponent was no good. You'd have probably done equally well with La Jinn and Summoned Skull, and when you're being compared to a Vanilla that's bad.

Burn Lord:
Basically, it's either a huge beatstick or a more specific Pot of Avarice + BEWD. Nothing really wrong with the beatstick, but the problem is that your deck doesn't really lend itself to milling and speed and getting cards into the grave so it'll never be that valuable. then again, you'll rarely get the PoA effect anyway, so w/e.

Burn Sacrificer:
You take battle damage before "this card is sent to the graveyard as a result of battle" so the first effect is impossible. Secondly, if you don't take any battle damage from battle (because this card was in defense or something) then your opponent won't take damage, and the effect is useless. If you meant "for the rest of the duel" the card is horribly overpowered. If you meant for the rest of the turn, it's kind of better, but not by much.

Your opponent can pick the "get control" effect, and then just end his or her turn, and get their monster back. It'll slow them down a bit, but there are much better cards with "destroy by battle" effects that are more consistent and inflict more damage. Snow Man Eater, Ryko, heck, Man Eater Bug is better.

Anti Burn:
Your cards are stupid and you can't write a proper card effect to save your life.

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blackscorpion Newbie

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So should i delete my all cards :sad:

ok let me clear the things...

[quote]None of the cards you made, the spells, the monsters, the traps, can be used with Burning Mind. Possibly Urgent Burn, but your opponent wouldn't purposely start the FTK if they're given a choice.
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I forgot to apply the changes that i have made very time ago...opppps..now new changes are maded...

[quote] you REALLY shouldn't do the "give your opponent a choice" thing for two reasons[/quote]
I do this because my cards effect are too much powerful thats why i give them to choise...my deck stratergy is to summon lord megma.i will make some other cards wihich will help megma to summoned.so i get the choise instead of ny opponent.

[quote] your OCG is terrible so it makes it difficult to figure out what exactly it is you're trying to say.[/quote]

I am new here and this is my 1st deck so can you help me in that.Give me correct ocg of LORD MEGMA and i will copy from there..


[quote]For the sake of simplicity, I assume the effects apply to you, and your opponent just gets to choose what effect can apply to you. All mentions of "you" mean, the guy who owns the card being activated, not the guy choosing the effect.[/quote]

Yes the opponents will active effects for me..in the spells the effects are for my opponent...in the monsters effects are for myself.

Burn horse..
My first step will be to put it face down and inflict first battle damage.

Burn goddes..
It will ot respond to burning mind because thats feild spell and it didnt contain BURN in its name..

Burn sacrificer..
ok i have to chage it...

Burn sacrificer...
it only control the opponent monster for one turn only...

Anti burn is the most powerful card..
by activating this i will have the choice to select any effect...

Now give me some rating plz :smile:

One more monster added...(I dont know why i cant stop making these cards)

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