Nede Posted August 15, 2011 Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/8413/451325.jpg[/img]   Lore : This card is also treated as Spellcaster-Type monster. This card gains 300 ATK for each "Mage" card in your Graveyard. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict Piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. Once per turn, if this card attacks, after the Damage Step, you can select and activate 1 of the following effects : - Banish 1 card from your opponent's hand. - Banish 1 monster from your opponent's Graveyard. 2nd Version! [img]http://img808.imageshack.us/img808/8413/451325.jpg[/img] Lore: This card is also treated as Spellcaster-Type monster. This card gains 300 ATK for each "Mage" card in your Graveyard. Once per turn, if this card attacks, after the Damage Step, you can select and activate 1 of the following effects : - Banish 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard. - Banish 1 monster from the top of your opponent's Deck. 3rd Version! [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/8413/451325.jpg[/img] Lore : This card is also treated as Spellcaster-Type monster. This card gains 300 ATK for each "Mage" card in your Graveyard. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict Piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. Once per turn, if this card attacks, after the Damage Step, you can select and activate 1 of the following effects : - Banish 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard. - Banish 1 monster from the top of your opponent's Deck. What do you think? What is more Balanced to you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted August 15, 2011 Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 It is a good and balanced card but I think the 300 ATK boost is too much. In my opinion you should increase this card's ATK to 2000 and deacrease its boost to 200 ATK for every mage in your Graveyard. 8,5 / 10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 I'll take that as a consideration, thanks for your suggestion, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MujinTengu Posted August 15, 2011 Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 the card is good, effects are all right and good...I just wandering>> "Once per turn, if this card attacks, you can select and activate 1 of the following effects" its after or before the Damage Step? well it is good so overall 8.2/10 (after my calculation) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 After the damage step, i'll fix that later, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted August 15, 2011 Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 First of all, I agree whit groniack, it should have 2000 ATK, 300 ATK gain is just fine, soo.. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 I think 1700 ATK and 300 ATK boost is enough, this card need 1 tribute, you tribute 1 "Mage" and send it to the graveyard, its ATK already 2000,but OK I'll consider about that, thanks for the comments and rating! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 15, 2011 Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 300 atk is fine given that it's lv5, and 1700 atk is weak for lv5 anyway I don't really see anything wrong with its effects, so this gets 9.7/10 from me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☼◄Firewolf►☼ Posted August 18, 2011 Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 Wow I Like It, Good Effect, Nice Picture And Balanced, I Give You A 8.8/10!:--) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 Thanks for your comment/rate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted August 18, 2011 Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 Yes, the tribute required already increases his ATK to 2000. But its not like you'll never have other monsters in the Grave before he is Summoned, he could easily have 2900 ATK, require 1 tribute, inflict piercing damage and banish your opponents cards. I think a 200 ATK increase will work, with the 1700 original ATK he has. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 Good point, I'll think of it, that's a good suggestion, and you have a reason for it, Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 19, 2011 Report Share Posted August 19, 2011 [center][center]Make it for each "Mage" card with a different name in your graveyard.[/center][/center] [center][center]Also, don't banish from hand. If anything, then banish top deck and GY only. +1 piercing heavy beater for 1 Tribute is OP, Cyrus. [/center][/center] [center][center]Off Topic: Why the change of name? lol[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2011 Good to see you again, I think you are impressively true, I'll change it but... You said tribute 1 is Oped, if I change it to tribute 2, then, should I change the ATK to 2100 or keep the ATK 1700? Off topic : Nah, I just don't wanna use my real name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted August 20, 2011 Report Share Posted August 20, 2011 This is balance enough, thought its rather not fair between banish only 1 in Grave and 1 in hand. Clearly at hand would be troublesome, so 2 cards at Graveyard is wise option too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2011 Soon, Version 2 will be added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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