Hunter. Posted August 18, 2011 Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 [img]http://i55.tinypic.com/vyl991.png[/img] credit to Daemon for the picture... i swear i'm losing it lately... lore: When this card is destroyed by battle: Special Summon one DARK monster with 2000 DEF or less. When this card is Normal Summoned: Destroy one Spell/Trap card on the field. When this card is used as Xyz material: Increase it's ATK by 1500 until the end phase. If you detach this card: Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted August 18, 2011 Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 [quote]1. If you use, you must give me credit.[/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucario2812 Posted August 18, 2011 Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 Picture 10/10 Effect 7/10 Phrasing 9/10 Card Match 8/10 Overall Score 34/50- 7/10(Rounded) - 70% Remember this is my opinion of the card i don't mean any offence nor do i expect everyone to agree with me. The picture was good i liked it. The effect was overpowered: 2000 DEF seems a bit much decrease it or make it to a type of monster e.g. warrior. I don't know much about Xyz monsters so i don't know if 1500 ATK is a bit much even for one turn. the phrasing was excelent a couple of small mistakes but don't worry much about them. The card seems too overpowered for a lv 4 etc. Personally i like the card Good job! just rework it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted August 18, 2011 Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 I think that this card has too many effects for a Level 4 monster. Remove the effect that it is Special Summoned when it is detached and i think that this card will be fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 18, 2011 Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 a little too recyclable I would have said once you detach it gets resummoned from the graveyard, you can't use it for XYZ, Tribute, or Synchro food anymore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jkheoift Posted August 18, 2011 Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 can't wait until i finish [i]my [/i]sets. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted August 18, 2011 Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 [quote name='Ĝǿĺđëŋ Ħǿŗďēšmãŋ' timestamp='1313696739' post='5453224'] [img]http://i55.tinypic.com/vyl991.png[/img] credit to Daemon for the picture... i swear i'm losing it lately... lore: When this card is destroyed by battle: Special Summon one DARK monster with 2000 DEF or less. When this card is Normal Summoned: Destroy one Spell/Trap card on the field. When this card is used as Xyz material: Increase it's ATK by 1500 until the end phase. If you detach this card: Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. [/quote] Two things: 1) Card is too recyclable 2) There's an error in the effect. "When this card is destroyed by battle: Special Summon one DARK monster with 2000 DEF or less." ...Special Summon from where??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
finalfinder Posted August 18, 2011 Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 "When this card is destroyed by battle Special Summon one DARK monster with 2000 DEF." Special Summon from what? Hand? Deck? Graveyard? Or is Hand simply implied in that? Pretty good. A little OP'd but very good. Probably get limited or semi-limited though. 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted August 18, 2011 Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 Wow, super OP. 3 very good effects, each one too good for a 1900 ATK monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted August 18, 2011 Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 When this card is destroyed by battle: [b]Special Summon one DARK monster with 2000 DEF or less(from where??)[/b]. When this card is Normal Summoned: Destroy one Spell/Trap card on the field. When this card is used as Xyz material: Increase it's ATK by 1500 until the end phase. If you detach this card: Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. This is like upgrade version of breaker, except the destroying part must be when it is normal summoned, Level 5 to this for solve the problems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted August 19, 2011 Report Share Posted August 19, 2011 Yeah, making it Lvl 5 should fix most the problems, just specify which spot the 2000 Def or less monster is Special Summoned from (either your Hand, Deck, or Graveyard) and it should be fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted August 19, 2011 Report Share Posted August 19, 2011 Many errors and OP effects here. 1) First effect is like Pyramid Turtle for DARK monster, what makes that Level 4 monster OP. Also: Special Summon the DARK monster from where? 2) Destroying a Spell/Trap Card without a cost? Just Normal Summon it? Not balanced. 3) The last two effects was supposed to work together, right? You should have said: "When this card is detached: Special Summon it and increase its ATK by 1500." Because when you sent it to the Graveyard, its ATK is returned to its original, making the increase ATK effect useless. Also, you should restrict its Special Summon effect and remove the ATK gain effect. That would balance the card IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dugal Posted August 19, 2011 Report Share Posted August 19, 2011 i find this card unconditionally OPed with no drawbacks, about 4 different beneficial effects, 1900 ATK is pretty high for a lvl 4 monster so meh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted August 19, 2011 Report Share Posted August 19, 2011 I believe he is meaning the 1500 ATK increase goes to the Exceed monster, however, upon re-reading it after your comment Zeaux it could use a re-phrase, although I don't want to try and do it myself lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 19, 2011 Report Share Posted August 19, 2011 [center][center]This would, for one, replace Breaker in the way it destroys a S/T and stays at 1900. I don't think it needs the Normal Summon effect, as for MST x3 and Heavy is usually enough. If he had 1600 ATK, maybe. [/center][/center] [center][center]Also, the destroyed by battle thing is kinda a waste of space in the effect. It would be better just to remove that. [/center][/center] [center][center]I like the Tengu like thing for Xyz, though. They need something like that. [/center][/center] [center][center]Playability: 9/10 OCG: 8.5/10 Balance: 6/10 Creativity: 7/10 Total: 30.5/40[/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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