Lucas Maximus Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Hope you like my poem. i wrote it all by myself. »-(¯`v´¯)-» Love is a game just meant to be played Love is a phrasejust awfully cliched. Love is a drug with a license to kill Love drugs us allnot just me but all you. Love is a gamejust meant to be played.Love is a phrasejust overly clichéd. It's dominated by cheaters,players, and rule-breakers.Where three words often saidare lies spoken by fakers. Love is an emotionand hormones are the cause.Love is perfectionthat brings out your flaws. Young ones are swayedinto believing that it's real.Soon concious of mistakes,next fear is what you feel. Hope you all like it. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 You made this thread twice but it is pretty good poem I like it (and I really don't like poems) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 You made this thread twice but it is pretty good poem I like it (and I really don't like poems) Thanks man and kaze is already on the job hes about to delete the second thread. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Sorry for the early bump, anymore comments on my poem. 0_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 nice poem CS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 (>^_^<)Nice poem, Static. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Thanks you two, im glad you like it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaitou Kid Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 I like it and unfortunatley i just suffered a heart break and i kept on saying this in my head. I played roulette to many times and failed.Then when i finaly won I had nothing to gain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 it's good... i like it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 I like it and unfortunatley i just suffered a heart break and i kept on saying this in my head. I played roulette to many times and failed.Then when i finaly won I had nothing to gain Ok lol O_o sorry about your heartbreak =/ it's good... i like it... Thanks Boss, im very glad you like it. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 I think it's Great :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Thanks alot slash, everybody seems to like my poem, perhaps i should wright more. O_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I like pie21 Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 you made it twice, but i love the poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 I got the second thread deleted after a accidently posted it twice, still im glad you like it pie. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dryad Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 This is a very beautiful peace of work and it can be true with todays modern society :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Thanks Rose, im glad you like it, do you think i should make a few more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dryad Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 I indeed think you should make more, you really have a poetic talent, I hope to read more poems from you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachy_syko Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 I like it! And I'm hard to please with writing pieces, especially poems! You have an awesome talent, you should write for Hallmark or something :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Nice poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basherbelding Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 its cool! its about a 7 or 8 out of 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 I indeed think you should make more' date=' you really have a poetic talent, I hope to read more poems from you :)[/quote'] Thanks alot man. O_o I like it! And I'm hard to please with writing pieces' date=' especially poems! You have an awesome talent, you should write for Hallmark or something :D[/quote'] I never expected to get feedback this good, i had on idea i was this good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Bump, just thought i would tell you i will be posting my next poem soon, this time though, it is sadly on the subject of death, i have been working on it and editing and editing it... for about 4 days now i shall hope you will like it. I may make my own official poem thread O_o Its an idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 It's a nice pœm, even if it's false. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Dude64 Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 8/10 nice and sweet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 It's a nice pœm' date=' even if it's false.[/quote'] Even if it's false, other people have told me this poem is so true, but i guess that's just your opinion. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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