Millenium Master Posted August 26, 2011 Report Share Posted August 26, 2011 [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/7854/431177.jpg[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/3889/431177u.jpg[/img] This was made with help from Kyng of Ice... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted August 26, 2011 Report Share Posted August 26, 2011 Poseidon: OCG FIX: "Trident" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned: You can banish all your WATER monsters from your Graveyard; this card gains 150 ATK for every monster banished by this effect. My opinion: It's a little Underpowered in my opinion. It's low ATK for such a high level, plus the boost itself isn't much. The bare minimum you could get by this effect after Summoning it is a +300 boost, making it 1800. I'd say 200 is more appropriate. It's picture is nice though, well done. Trident: OCG FIX: You didn't do good at all with the OCG here. Firstly, Trident should have been a Union monster as well as a Tuner, because it is these kind of monsters that Quip to others, like Heavy Mech Support Platform. So I've scrapped your old OCG with this: Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can equip this card to a WATER monster you control as an Equip Card, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this effect: that monster gains ATK equal to this card. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.) It's effect otherwise is fine in my opinion, but the picture is very basic and boring. Overall: You should have a look around the Yugioh Wikia for some card making guidelines, you did okay for a new member, but they need improving. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Millenium Master Posted August 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2011 It s not the OCG, it s more that Im not English...I ll try to make it with your OCG fix to see how they look. OK?Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 27, 2011 Report Share Posted August 27, 2011 Poseidon is weak, all it has is an atk boosting effect kind of hoped for another effect than that given it's a synchro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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