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Poseidon:
OCG FIX:
"Trident" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned: You can banish all your WATER monsters from your Graveyard; this card gains 150 ATK for every monster banished by this effect.

My opinion:
It's a little Underpowered in my opinion. It's low ATK for such a high level, plus the boost itself isn't much. The bare minimum you could get by this effect after Summoning it is a +300 boost, making it 1800. I'd say 200 is more appropriate. It's picture is nice though, well done.

Trident:
OCG FIX:
You didn't do good at all with the OCG here. Firstly, Trident should have been a Union monster as well as a Tuner, because it is these kind of monsters that Quip to others, like Heavy Mech Support Platform. So I've scrapped your old OCG with this:

Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can equip this card to a WATER monster you control as an Equip Card, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this effect: that monster gains ATK equal to this card. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.)

It's effect otherwise is fine in my opinion, but the picture is very basic and boring.
Overall:
You should have a look around the Yugioh Wikia for some card making guidelines, you did okay for a new member, but they need improving. 4/10

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