FF Fan Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 [img]http://i.imgur.com/xF75T.png[/img] [spoiler= Lore] This card cannot be Banished. When this card is destroyed by battle Special Summon it during the End Phase. When this card is destroyed by a card effect destroy 1 monster your opponent controls.[/spoiler] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Bsd0C.png[/img] [spoiler= Lore]When a Zombie-Type monster is sucessfully Special Summoned from either player's Graveyard, you can discard this card from your hand to select 1 face-down Spell or Trap card that your opponent controls. Your opponent places that card on top of their Deck.[/spoiler] [img]http://i.imgur.com/u8UNe.png[/img] [spoiler=Lore]You can Tribute this card to send 1 Zombie-Type monster from the Deck to the Graveyard.[/spoiler] [img]http://i.imgur.com/nrLqW.png[/img] [spoiler=Lore]When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent roll a six-sided die. Your opponent sends card from the top of their Deck to the Graveyard equal to the result. A monster(s) sent to the Graveyard by this effect is treated as a Zombie-Type monster while in the Graveyard.[/spoiler] [img]http://i.imgur.com/ybLq7.png[/img] [spoiler=Lore]Bride to Damballah the Sky God she is the second in command of the Kingdom of Dahomey. Despite her terrifying appearance she is peaceful in nature only resorting to violence when it is absolutely necessary.[/spoiler] [img]http://i.imgur.com/7ObNK.png[/img] [spoiler=Lore]When this card is removed from the field by the effect of an Effect Monster card Special Summon it. [/spoiler] [size=5][b]*New*[/b][/size] [img]http://i.imgur.com/OAkCc.png[/img] [spoiler=Lore]"Plaguespreader Zombie" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters. Face-up Zombie-Type and Dinosaur-Type monsters you control other than this card gain 500 ATK and are Special Summoned during the End Phase of a turn that the monster is destroyed.[/spoiler] [img]http://i.imgur.com/OrsJT.png[/img] [spoiler=Lore]When this card is sent from your hand to the graveyard by a card effect return it to your hand. [/spoiler] [img]http://i.imgur.com/CfIpd.png[/img] [spoiler=Lore]When this card is sent from the Deck to the graveyard banish 1 Zombie-Type monster from your graveyard and Special Summon this card.[/spoiler] [img]http://i.imgur.com/CDY8k.png[/img] [spoiler=Lore]Activate only when a Plant-Type or Insect-Type monster is sent from the field to the Graveyard. All monsters in your opponent's Deck become Zombie-Type monsters.[/spoiler] [size=5]Some more zombie support can be found here: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/277180-queen-of-the-damned/"]http://forum.yugiohc...-of-the-damned/[/url][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1SDAN Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 4 IK, try removing d last sentence, makes it 2 OP'd. Also, post d lore so ppl can give proper OCG easier plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 The first card seems a bit oped since it can be Special Summoned too easily. And if your opponent chooses to destroy that card with a spell or trap you take advantage from it. If your opponent doesn't control a card , can you special summon the zombie monster or the effect just misses? The mouse seems a bit weak. All it does is delaying the activation of your opponents spell or trap card. It should have another effect while it is face up on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FF Fan Posted August 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 What if I get rid of the Special Summon in Immortal King when he's destroyed by an effect? Also with Muerte Mouse not only does it delay the activation of my opponent's card I also will know what card he will be drawing and I would have slowed down my opponent's draw especially if my opponent may have been waiting for a particular card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 [quote name='FF Fan' timestamp='1314569761' post='5475786'] Also with Muerte Mouse not only does it delay the activation of my opponent's card I also will know what card he will be drawing and I would have slowed down my opponent's draw especially if my opponent may have been waiting for a particular card. [/quote] True but i still think that it needs an aditional effect while it is on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 Immortal King is Oped, because it can't be banished, when the card is destroyed by battle, you can special summon it, and when the card Is destroyed by effect, special summon Zombie. I don't think Muerte Mouse is weak, I think it's perfect, it's true what FF Fan said "Muerte Mouse not only does it delay the activation of my opponent's card I also will know what card he will be drawing and I would have slowed down my opponent's draw especially if my opponent may have been waiting for a particular card." Umm maybe you could lower Muerte Mouse's DEF to 200, so Flamvell Poun can search it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 29, 2011 Report Share Posted August 29, 2011 the only thing to change is Immortal King I'd recommend you say it can't be banished by Spell/traps, but leave monster effects in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FF Fan Posted October 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2011 Added 3 more cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 Vampire Huntress could get Oped for milling your opponent's deck WAY too quickly Forest is basically a DNA surgery effect, just for decks, and that's going to wreak total havoc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FF Fan Posted October 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 But since Huntress mills until you get a level 4 or lower shouldn't that be ok? Just about everyone runs a level 4 and lower monsters, but I guess someone could get a really weird deck shuffle and have about 5 spells and traps on top until you get to a monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FF Fan Posted February 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2012 Posted new cards: Dead Merging, Akasha, Queen of the Damned, Ayida-Weddo, and Sparta Phantom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 24, 2012 Report Share Posted February 24, 2012 technically wouldn't Akasha Queen of the Damned belong to pop culture since that's both a book and a film? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FF Fan Posted February 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2012 When I got the idea to make her I just googled famous vampires and her name came up. Didn't realize she was based off a book and film character. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 24, 2012 Report Share Posted February 24, 2012 well I'll tell you this much from the book: they sent her flying straight into the sun to burn her to a crisp, and she survived anyway given that you might want to make her a little bit harder to kill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FF Fan Posted February 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2012 Edited the effects of Immortal King and Vampire Huntress. Also added Rottasaurus Rex. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 26, 2012 Report Share Posted February 26, 2012 Rex is relatively meh 300 atk isn't really much. The trap immunity in the battle phase is just siphoned off of Ancient Gears. Not to say that's a crappy effect or anything but still personally I see this more used for zombies than dinosaurs. Still, what do you think you can pull off via the dinosaur type with this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FF Fan Posted February 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2012 I chose 300 ATK because at first I thought that 800 was going to be overkill. With his second effect I couldn't think of much, but I did want his effects to have elements of both Zombies and Dinosaurs. Dinosaurs are about high attack and Zombies are about coming back from the dead. So I changed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 27, 2012 Report Share Posted February 27, 2012 well obviously 800 would be too much I was thinking up to 500 and that's enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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