The Dark Master Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 well ive been working on this, tell me how 'good' it is...lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 You can only bump once every 12 or more hours ok.Lowdown of card: picture aint great and yes you do have OCG and grammar errors but still, none the less, nice effort. O_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 i did bump in 12 hours 0_o... i posted it yesterday at 6:30 pm, now its 7 am 0_o...lol...i like the pic, and were are the ocg errors...? and thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Sorry i didn't realise that it had gone 12 hours =/Some of the OCG errors are: end phase=End Phase, A monster with a 'D' counter placed on it increases its ATK by 1000. You also have grammar errors but still good try. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 lol its ok...k thanks, ill work on it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 lol its ok...k thanks' date=' ill work on it...[/quote'] Just totally scrap this card and remake it, pm me iif you need any help at all. O_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyperwater Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 This card is very helpful. I like it, Just change the picture.....Its been used too much. But the effect is great! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 k...thanks i guess.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 It's a goo try, some problems, but good ^_^7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaco Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 k...thanks i guess.... That must be a bummer, you say it's one of your best cards and you've got people saying you should scrap it XP At first glance it seems balanced enough, perhaps a little overpowered, but I have a few problems with it. 1. You can just use his effect each turn to keep him a 2700 ATK monster. That can be solved by saying "once every 2 turns" or something similar. 2. As a single card it's only slightly overpowered, but it's also a DARK warrior-type monster. That means it has all the searchability of a Warrior-type and all of the Phantom Darkness support of DARK monsters. So overall, it's not ridiculously overpowered, but it's overpowered enough to where it needs a little revision. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 A few OCG errors, like end Phase should be End Phase, 'at your opponents end phase' should b something more like 'at the start of your opponents End Phase' 7/10, i've seen this picture around alot O.O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Like you said, lots of OCG errors, but a unique idea. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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