Y B Posted September 1, 2011 Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 [img]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/2606/fallenangelprincesofhel.png[/img] [spoiler=Lucifer 01/07][img]http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/8845/160217.jpg[/img] [b][color=#ff0000]Comment[/color][/b] : The God Of Fallen Angel, the Leader of the New Era of FA. Now, come forth, the Light and Hell bringer, Lucifer. I got my own fan-fiction behind this set of cards actually. [b]Lucifer'[/b][b]s Sins is Pride.[/b] So your opponent can't destroy him by card's effect. Even if battle destroy him, he would try everything he got to stand again. [b][color=#b22222]Art[/color] [/b]: Unknown, Ask Daemon [b][color=#ff8c00]Art Modification[/color][/b] : Daemon [b][color=#ee82ee]Card Creator [/color][/b]: Yuri Bakura [/spoiler] [Spoiler=Mammon 02/07][img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/8845/160217.jpg[/img] [b][color=#ff0000]Comment[/color][/b] : Originally, he is not a fallen angel, but Princes Of Hell, a demon. However, in my fac-fiction, he become one of the fallen angel who banished from heaven with his brothers and sister. I got my own fan-fiction behind this set of cards actually. [b]Mammon[/b][b]'s Sins is Greed.[/b] So your opponent can't destroy him when your opponent has higher life point than yours. [b][color=#b22222]Art[/color] [/b]: Unknown, Ask Daemon [b][color=#ff8c00]Art Modification[/color][/b] : Daemon [b][color=#ee82ee]Card Creator [/color][/b]: Yuri Bakura[/spoiler] [Spoiler=Asmodeus 03/07][img]http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/9691/160217s.jpg[/img] [b][color=#ff0000]Comment[/color][/b] : Originally, he is not a fallen angel, but Princes Of Hell, a demon. However, in my fac-fiction, he become she and she is a fallen angel who banished from heaven. I got my own fan-fiction behind this set of cards actually. [b]Asmodeus[/b][b]'s Sins is Lust[/b]. So your opponent can't destroy her by battle. [b][color=#b22222]Art[/color] [/b]: Unknown, Ask Daemon [b][color=#ff8c00]Art Modification[/color][/b] : Daemon [b][color=#ee82ee]Card Creator [/color][/b]: Yuri Bakura[/spoiler] [Spoiler=Satan 04/07][img]http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/6365/160217v.jpg[/img] [b][color=#ff0000]Comment[/color][/b] : Originally, he is not a fallen angel, but Princes Of Hell. However, I would like him to become a Fallen Angel which suits my story well. I got my own fan-fiction behind this set of cards actually. [b]Satan[/b][b]'s Sins is Wrath[/b]. So your opponent only can stop this monster by eliminate him. His wrath is far too stronger than the Spell and Trap to handle. [b][color=#b22222]Art[/color] [/b]: Unknown, Ask Daemon [b][color=#ff8c00]Art Modification[/color][/b] : Daemon [b][color=#ee82ee]Card Creator [/color][/b]: Yuri Bakura[/spoiler] [Spoiler=Beelzebub 05/07][img]http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/5172/160217f.jpg[/img] [b][color=#ff0000]Comment[/color][/b] : Originally, he is not a fallen angel, but Princes Of Hell. However, I would like him to become a Fallen Angel which suits my story well. I got my own fan-fiction behind this set of cards actually. [b]Beelzebub's Sins is Gluttony[/b]. So when opponent card in field is lesser than yours, he will feel too hungry and then become temporary invulnerable. [b][color=#b22222]Art[/color] [/b]: Unknown, Ask Daemon [b][color=#ff8c00]Art Modification[/color][/b] : Daemon [b][color=#ee82ee]Card Creator [/color][/b]: Yuri Bakura[/spoiler] [Spoiler=Leviathan 06/07][img]http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/8845/160217.jpg[/img] [b][color=#ff0000]Comment[/color][/b] : Originally, he is not a fallen angel, but Princes Of Hell. However, I would like him to become a Fallen Angel which suits my story well. I got my own fan-fiction behind this set of cards actually. [b]Leviathan's Sins is Envy[/b]. So when opponent hand card is higher than yours, he will feel jealous and then grows to invulnerable. [b][color=#b22222]Art[/color] [/b]: Unknown, Ask Daemon [b][color=#ff8c00]Art Modification[/color][/b] : Daemon [b][color=#ee82ee]Card Creator [/color][/b]: Yuri Bakura[/spoiler] [Spoiler=Belphegor 07/07][img]http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/8845/160217.jpg[/img] [b][color=#ff0000]Comment[/color][/b] : Originally, he is not a fallen angel, but Princes Of Hell. However, I would like him to become a Fallen Angel which suits my story well. I got my own fan-fiction behind this set of cards actually. [b]Belphegor's Sins are Vanity and Sloth[/b]. So when your life points are higher than your opponent, he will feel lazy and arrogant, which grants him invulnerable. [b][color=#b22222]Art[/color] [/b]: Unknown, Ask Fatherwolf [b][color=#ff8c00]Art Modification[/color][/b] : Fatherwolf [b][color=#ee82ee]Card Creator [/color][/b]: Yuri Bakura[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted September 1, 2011 Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 I am impressed since you are a Level 1 member and you make this good cards. I have found some mistakes though. Angel / Demon is not a type. You might wanted to say Fairy or Fiend. Other than that your cards are awesome. 9,9 / 10 You will do great here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y B Posted September 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 [quote name='groniack' timestamp='1314907287' post='5484551'] I am impressed since you are a Level 1 member and you make this good cards. I have found some mistakes though. Angel / Demon is not a type. You might wanted to say Fairy or Fiend. Other than that your cards are awesome. 9,9 / 10 You will do great here [/quote] thx for your compliment O.O *happy* Anyway, I will fix it right away, thanks you for the comment. edit : Now i am level 2 member ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted September 1, 2011 Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 Demon is the Japanese type of fiend, http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Fiend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted September 1, 2011 Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 You are welcome . I am looking forward to seeing more of this Set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 1, 2011 Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 overall Leviathan probably won't exceed 2700 atk by its own effect, but that's still normal for lv8 Belphegor is a bit too much for the atk gain via counters though. If you do that you might as well give a cut off limit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y B Posted September 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1314920474' post='5485290'] overall Leviathan probably won't exceed 2700 atk by its own effect, but that's still normal for lv8 Belphegor is a bit too much for the atk gain via counters though. If you do that you might as well give a cut off limit [/quote] Try to make the cost higher for Belphegor and thanks for the comment. anyway, updated with Beelzebub Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 [quote name='groniack' timestamp='1314907287' post='5484551'] I am impressed since you are a Level 1 member and you make this good cards. I have found some mistakes though. Angel / Demon is not a type. You might wanted to say Fairy or Fiend. Other than that your cards are awesome. 9,9 / 10 You will do great here [/quote] Just because they are a Level 1 member doesn't mean they have to make bad cards.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 This is actually a pretty cool idea, at least I haven't seen it before. Only thing is that your Monsters are Fairy and Fiend in the card text. I suggest making them simply fairies (which are well supported and easy to bring out) and having them have an effect that makes them fiend-type as well. (for wording, see Light and Darkness Dragon) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y B Posted September 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 [quote name='AggroDrago' timestamp='1314969842' post='5486300'] This is actually a pretty cool idea, at least I haven't seen it before. Only thing is that your Monsters are Fairy and Fiend in the card text. I suggest making them simply fairies (which are well supported and easy to bring out) and having them have an effect that makes them fiend-type as well. (for wording, see Light and Darkness Dragon) [/quote] it consumed much space in the effect box and the word will look very small. I actually hate that because people will likely just skip it because lazy to read the small words. Well, including myself. So to simplify it, I used 2 types concept. Which means that the monster has two types. So they are still fairy type, and at the same time fiend type, though it doesn't exist, but I think it look prettier like this. By the way, thanks for the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 [quote name='Yuri Bakura' timestamp='1314948675' post='5486053'] Try to make the cost higher for Belphegor and thanks for the comment. anyway, updated with Beelzebub [/quote] Beelzebub is just War from the game Darksiders (not sure if you heard of it) the picture clearly shows him as a warrior, not fairy or fiend and make it 700 TOTAL, not 700 per card. 3400 atk is too high Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y B Posted September 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1314995795' post='5487149'] Beelzebub is just War from the game Darksiders (not sure if you heard of it) the picture clearly shows him as a warrior, not fairy or fiend and make it 700 TOTAL, not 700 per card. 3400 atk is too high [/quote] Well, I never heard before, I just follow their names in the http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seven_princes_of_Hell anyway, the picture is not perfect for him, but I kinda like it. The warrior look is perfect for him imo, he is the archangel once before banished from heaven and sent to hell, consumed by darkness and become fiend. About the effect, I rescale it. 3400 atk is quite high, i agree but with original attack 2000, he can be easily get rid. Of course, he has the effect to back him up. So I make it 500 atk for each card, so total is 3000. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 I know 2000 is weak for lv8, but 2700 is normal for lv8's atk level Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y B Posted September 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 Updated with additional 2 cards, Mammon and Asmodeus Anyway, I decreased the attack gain from 500 to 400 (each card) so total attack he gained is 2800. And I turn them into tri-type monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 just to clarify for Mammon are you saying it can gain a max of 2500 atk, or 2500 atk is the limit its effect can reach? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y B Posted September 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2011 well, it's actually max 2500 atk gain. So his max damage is 3500. But it's quite imbalance, so I nerf the effect a bit. [quote]This card cannot be destroyed as long as your Life Points is lower than your opponent. When this card is [b]attacking[/b], this card gains attack points equal to the Life Points difference between both players up to 2500.[/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y B Posted September 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2011 too busy with examination, can't even go online. now update the last card and how can i move my thread to complete set ? [img]http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/8845/160217.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 21, 2011 Report Share Posted September 21, 2011 you shouldn't have put so many times up there, should have written that in the lore plus for Lucifer you forgot the tails effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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