DynaBladeX96 Posted September 1, 2011 Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 20 cards!!! Heres the demon deck i created, This deck is based on effects, self sacrifice ,and quickly disarming the field, there will be a few more, including powerful cards like phoenix and cthulu, the next deck will be the angel deck Im bad with Photo shop so be nice plz Little demon x5My ace card : Demonic Trickster #1Demonic trickster #2Demonic CastleDemonic Pact x2Big demon x3Ultimate Demon kingUltimate Demon QueenTHe SPIRIT card: Flame SpiritMy Ultimate card: Perfectly Ultimate Demon Supreme MasterZombification x4Demon Kuriboh Demon Kuriboh:You take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. After this card on the field is destroyed, any Battle Damage the controller of this card takes this turn becomes 0. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DynaBladeX96 Posted September 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 More cardsDemon Kuriboh LV10 Demon wings Demon warrior x3Demon warrior's sword x2Demon magician x2Demon magician's staffDemon Dragon x2Demon dragon's armorDemon summoning x2FORBIDDEN CARD: Switch up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiryadid Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 Some of the effects are overpowerd,i suggest you balance this deck abit,you must also fix some grammer mistakes that may lead to a different effect from what you wanted,also your card "switch up" doesnt make any sense because there is no "other deck" included in the game,so you cant just take another one from your pocket or something,and fix your demonic castle because the game can last forever if the controller will alaways increase his life points,i suggest you limit that effect to a certain amount per turn,like 1000.Overrall rating 6/10,this deck got potential just rebalance and fix it abit and im sure it can be a realy successful deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DynaBladeX96 Posted September 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 Some of the effects are overpowerd,i suggest you balance this deck abit,you must also fix some grammer mistakes that may lead to a different effect from what you wanted,also your card "switch up" doesnt make any sense because there is no "other deck" included in the game,so you cant just take another one from your pocket or something,and fix your demonic castle because the game can last forever if the controller will alaways increase his life points,i suggest you limit that effect to a certain amount per turn,like 1000.Overrall rating 6/10,this deck got potential just rebalance and fix it abit and im sure it can be a realy successful deck. Switch up is for the people who carry a second deck and it's forbiddenDemonic castle is a field spell which means it can be destroyed by other field spells Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 ....Your OCG and wording sucks bro...You need to look at other cards made by pro card makers before you make cards.. (Btw...the pictures aren't good..)And you put the Summoning conditions (If they have a way to be Special Summoned) first. Not the main effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiquidDJ11 Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 Holy OGC.... please read the new OGc rules, and look at other cards before you post cards again.you have bad diction (wording) as well, please reconsider.please fix pictures as wellno ratings from me until you fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiryadid Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 guys im preety new in this forum,whats OGC? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xaqairy Posted September 2, 2011 Share Posted September 2, 2011 · Hidden by Xaqairy, September 2, 2011 - No reason given Hidden by Xaqairy, September 2, 2011 - No reason given OCG is Original Card Game Link to comment
DynaBladeX96 Posted September 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 ok thx for the feedback ill try and balance it out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
canoehead Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 This is pretty good but i have to say some of the editing is well.......ok so 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachturbo Posted February 11, 2012 Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 i like the theme, could you make some more kuriboh cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ginko Posted February 11, 2012 Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 some of these cards make absolutely no sense in this deck: (cthulu, phoenix)secondly, you really need help with the ocg, as well as the fact that cards don't have gaps in between the effects.the card art really sucks too, the plain backgrounds/crappy clarity in the pictures can easily be fixed by cropping out a proper area in MS paint, that'd make them look better Holy OGC.... please read the new OGc rules, and look at other cards before you post cards again.you have bad diction (wording) as well, please reconsider.please fix pictures as wellno ratings from me until you fix not only that but your fusion monsters need fusion materials to be summoned, plus you can't have more than 1 type for a monster (winged-beast, fiend, etc) only one per monster dude. nobody uses equip spell cards or vanilla monsters anymore. fix thati liked little demon, that card itself would go for a 6/10 because of the card art, and the effect, the OCG just needs to be fixed (Special Summoned) rate overall: 0/10. almost no unity between the cards, effects are OP'ed, monsters are OP'ed, this has nothing going for it. look at other posts on this forum, take some lessons, and come back and try again with this archetype, i see some potential Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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