Nine Breaker Posted September 1, 2011 Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 [font=trebuchet ms,helvetica,sans-serif][color=#800000][i]'Succubus [suhk-yuh-buhs]: a demon in female form, said to have sexual intercourse with men in their sleep.'[/i] - Random Dictionary Creatures that tempt and charm others, enticing their prey to their side. Thus these monsters focus on manipulating the opponent's monster(s) in different ways. Other cards in this set also play on succubi myths. [/color][/font] [font=trebuchet ms,helvetica,sans-serif][color=#800000]Entered this card in a contest before and it gave me a few ideas. Figured I'd give it a little tune up and try out the realistic section too.[/color][/font] [spoiler=Bacchanal At Dead Night] [img]http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/7518/465695.jpg[/img] [i]Increase the ATK and DEF of all Fiend-Type monsters and monsters with 'Succubus' in their name by 200. All monsters with 'Succubus' in their name may use their effects the turn they are Special Summoned. When an effect that would summon a Cambion Token(s) on the field is activated Special Summon 1 Cambion Token (Fiend-Type/EARTH/Level 3/ATK 950/ DEF 300) to your field. If these tokens are used for a Synchro Summon the monster must be a 'Succubus' monster.[/i][/spoiler] [spoiler=Little Succubus Loli] [img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/7518/465695.jpg[/img] [i]If this card is in your hand and your opponent activates a monster's effect on the field, you may equip this card to that monster. Negate the monster's effect. While this card is a face up monster, once a turn you can select 1 monster with 'Succubus' or 'Incu' in it's name in your hand, field or graveyard. Increase or decrease that monster's level by 1.[/i][/spoiler] [spoiler=Incu Gift-Bearer] [img]http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/7518/465695.jpg[/img] [i]FLIP: If there is a card with 'Succubus' in its name on the field you can Special Summon up to 2 Cambion Tokens (Fiend-Type/EARTH/Level 3/ATK 950/ DEF 300) to your side of the field in attack position. When this card is destroyed by battle increase your Life Points equal to the amount of Cambion Tokens on the field x300. If these tokens are used for a Synchro Summon the monster must be a 'Succubus' monster.[/i] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Agrat Succubus] [img]http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/7518/465695.jpg[/img] [i]You may equip this card to a monster on your opponent's field. Decrease that monster's ATK and DEF by 1000. When this card is sent to the graveyard while treated as an equip card you may Tribute 1 Cambion token on the field to Special Summon this card back to your field. This card cannot use it's effect the turn it is Special Summoned.[/i][/spoiler] [spoiler=Naamah Succubus] [img]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/4835/465695u.jpg[/img] [i]You can Special Summon 1 monster in your opponent's Graveyard to your field and equip this card to it. Decrease the monster's ATK and DEF by 500. When this card is sent to the Graveyard while treated as an equip card, you may Tribute 1 Cambion Token on the field to Special Summon this card back to your field. This card cannot use it's effect the turn it is Special Summoned.[/i][/spoiler] [spoiler=Eisheth Succubus] [img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/7518/465695.jpg[/img] [i]Once per turn you can look at the top 5 cards of your opponent's deck. Choose a monster from those cards and Special Summon it to your field with this card equipped to it (the rest of cards are shuffled back into the deck). Decrease the monster's ATK and DEF by 500. When this card is sent to the Graveyard while treated as an equip card, you may Tribute 1 Cambion Token on the field to Special Summon this card back to your field. This card cannot use it's effect the turn it is Special Summoned.[/i][/spoiler] [spoiler=Passionate Outcry] [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/7518/465695.jpg[/img] [i]Check the stars of each monster on the field equipped with a 'Succubus' monster. During each of your End Phases increase your Life Points equal to the total stars of those monsters and the equipped 'Succubus' monsters x100.[/i][/spoiler] [spoiler=Immoral Afterglow] [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/7231/465695s.jpg[/img] [i]During each of your End Phases Special Summon 1 Cambion Token (Fiend-Type/EARTH/Level 3/ATK 950/ DEF 300) for each monster with 'Succubus' in its name that is equipped to a monster. If these tokens are used for a Synchro Summon the monster must be a 'Succubus' monster.[/i] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Lustful Endowment] [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/7518/465695.jpg[/img] [i]Until the end of this turn all Cambion Tokens are treated as DARK monsters. Increase the ATK of all Cambion Tokens by 1000. During the End Phase of this turn destroy all Cambion Tokens on the field.[/i][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 1, 2011 Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 where is the Cambion token stats, type, and attribute? you should write that out too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nine Breaker Posted September 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 [font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][color=#800000]Whoops, forgot them. The Cambion tokens are actually in the card 'Immoral Afterglow'. I took them out of the Succubus cards to shorten and simplify their effects. Think I should put the Cambion tokens stats back into the Succubus cards?[/color][/font] [font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][color=#800000]Updated with Immoral Afterglow and Naahmah Succubus.[/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Afterglow you may want some token restrictions for Naambah, do the tokens in that lore have the same stat, type, and attribute as in Afterglow? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NumberCruncher Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 First, effects of Succubus's should have "While treated as an Equip" instead of "While as an Equip" Second, I don't see one thing that makes Naamah anywhere as good a card as Argant. You -2 yourself as opposed to minus -1, the monster loses 500 instead of 1000, and you lose 2 tokens instead of one resummoning it. Swap Argant and Naamah's costs to resummon and reduce Nammah's level by 3 and we're in business, otherwise Naamah just isn't as applealling as Argant(couldn't resist the pun). Third, this Archetype needs more cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 quick question... is Succubus Knight part of this Archetype? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nine Breaker Posted September 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2011 [font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][color=#800000][b]Ragnarok1945[/b]: Yep. All Cambion Tokens are the same. I left them out of the Succubi cards cause their effects were getting long. That and they don't generate them on their own. Think I should put them on the cards anyways though?[/color][/font] [color=#800000]I'm still considering restrictions. How about something like 'These tokens can only be used for the Synchro Summon or Xyz Summon of a monster with 'Succubus' in it's name.'?[/color] [color=#800000][b]NumberCruncher[/b]: Thanks for the input. I put in the 'While treated as an Equip card' in. I actually left a part out of Naamah's effect. When she special summons a monster it is special summoned to your field for you to control. Eisheth is something similar. Maybe I should put in the card 'Take control' instead?[/color] [color=#800000][b]~Burning Soul~[/b]: I had her in mind while making these cards. It's main focus are for the succubi that can equip onto monsters, but there will be other little things that can help her (or any other succubus monsters out there) out. The Lewd Sisterhood of Traveling Love has to stick together after all.[/color] [color=#800000]Updated: Incu Gift-Bearer, Eisheth Succubus, and Lustful Endowment[/color] [font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][color=#800000]A few more to come.[/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 8, 2011 Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 yeah I was thinking the same thing for the tokens, your thought is a good idea though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nine Breaker Posted January 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2012 [font=trebuchet ms,helvetica,sans-serif][color=#800000]Still around and back (well somewhat) with more of the succubus series. More sensuality, innuendo and interesting pictures abound. We're approaching the end of the set with only a few left from my original plan. There might be a few others if I can pan out their effects. Ohh and I know there is a slight numbering problem. I'll fix that at the end. Till next.[/color][/font] [font=trebuchet ms,helvetica,sans-serif][color=#800000]Updated: Cards with Cambion Tokens have added '[i]If these tokens are used for a Synchro Summon the monster must be a 'Succubus' monster.'[/i]. Passionate Outcry, Bacchanal at Dead Night and Little Succubus Loli have been added.[/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2012 Report Share Posted January 14, 2012 Outcry is meh, the LP gain is too small to make too huge a difference better if you burned your opponent instead for Loli, i don't quite get changing a monster's level in the graveyard by 1 doesn't seem to suit much purpose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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