kyop Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 [center][center][b][img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/352/91008.jpg[/img][/b][/center][/center] [center][center][b]This card is treated as a Normal Monster while on the Field. You can Normal Summon this card again to make it gain the following effect: Select up to 2 "Extra" monsters in your Graveyard. Return them to your Extra Deck if you have 10 or less cards in your Extra Deck. This card gains 250 ATK for each card in your Extra Deck.[/b][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][b][img]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/5725/91008j.jpg[/img][/b][/center][/center] [center][center][b]Once per turn, you can return 1 Synchro monster you control to your Extra Deck to Special Summon 1 Machine-type Level 4 monster from your hand. It effect is negated, it ATK and DEF becomes 0. That monster gains the effects of the monster you returned to the Extra Deck. If this card is sent to the graveyard, return all monsters on your side of the field to the owner's hand.[/b][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][b][img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/352/91008.jpg[/img][/b][/center][/center] [center][center][b]This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. You can send to the Graveyard 3 "Extra" monsters in your Extra Deck to Special Summon this card. If you have 10 or more cards in your Extra Deck, you cannot declare an attack during the turn this card is Special Summoned. This card gains 300 ATK for each card in your Extra Deck. This card cannot be destroyed by Trap Cards, except during your End Phase. During each of your End Phases: send 1 "Extra" monster in your Extra Deck to the Graveyard. If you do not have a "Extra" monster in your Extra Deck, destroy this card.[/b][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][b][img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/352/91008.jpg[/img][/b][/center][/center] [center][center][b]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned: return 1 Fusion, Xyz or Synchro monster in your Graveyard to your Extra Deck, except "Extra Machine Hunter" or "Extra Machine Killer". This card gains 200 ATK for each card in your Extra Deck. While this card is face-up, lower its ATK by 800.[/b][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][b][img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/7480/91008x.jpg[/img][/b][/center][/center] [center][center][b]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Synchro monsters This card gains 300 ATK for each card in your Extra Deck. During your End Phase: send to the Graveyard 1 card in your Extra Deck or destroy this card. When this card leaves the Field (except if it was banished), return all Synchro, Xyz and Fusion monsters in your Graveyard to your Extra Deck.[/b][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][b][img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/7480/91008x.jpg[/img][/b][/center][/center] [center][center][b]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Synchro monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can return up to 2 "Extra" monsters in your Graveyard to your Extra Deck. Once per tur, you can negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card by sending 1 "Extra" monster in your Extra Deck to the Graveyard. This card gains 250 ATK for each card in your Extra Deck. During your End Phase activate one of the following effects: •Send 1 monster in your Extra Deck to the Graveyard. •Inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each "Extra" monster in your Graveyard.[/b][/center][/center] [center][center] EDIT: Aw yeah, finally fixed this layout and fixed last sentence for machine hunter[/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NumberCruncher Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 [b]Once per turn, you can return 1 Synchro monster you control to your Extra Deck to Special Summon 1 Machine-type Level 4 monster from your hand. It effect is negated, it ATK and DEF becomes 0. That monster gains the effects of the monster you returned to the Extra Deck. If this card is sent to the graveyard, return all monsters on your side of the field to the owner's hand[/b] This is what Extra Fortress's effect would look like if you wrote it correctly and took balance into consideration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted September 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 [quote name='NumberCruncher' timestamp='1315113791' post='5490815'] [b]Once per turn, you can return 1 Synchro monster you control to your Extra Deck to Special Summon 1 Machine-type Level 4 monster from your hand. It effect is negated, it ATK and DEF becomes 0. That monster gains the effects of the monster you returned to the Extra Deck. If this card is sent to the graveyard, return all monsters on your side of the field to the owner's hand[/b] This is what Extra Fortress's effect would look like if you wrote it correctly and took balance into consideration. [/quote] I'm going to change it, thanks for advice ^^ [b]EDIT: 1 new card and a V2 of other =D[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned: return 1 Fusion, Xyz or Synchro monster in your Graveyard to your Extra Deck, except "Extra Machine Hunter" or "Extra Machine Killer". This card gains [b]200 [/b]ATK for each card in your Extra Deck [b]- 800[/b]. You reach 15 x 250 = 3750 so easily if this card is Summoned at the beginning of a game. So, make it 200 x 15 is still OPed which you can get over Stardust 2500 ATK with Level 4 Synchro. Maybe Some, - 800 like in the bold. So when it reach 3000 the ATK of the card is 2200 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted September 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 [quote name='Syns' timestamp='1315145847' post='5491311'] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned: return 1 Fusion, Xyz or Synchro monster in your Graveyard to your Extra Deck, except "Extra Machine Hunter" or "Extra Machine Killer". This card gains [b]200 [/b]ATK for each card in your Extra Deck [b]- 800[/b]. You reach 15 x 250 = 3750 so easily if this card is Summoned at the beginning of a game. So, make it 200 x 15 is still OPed which you can get over Stardust 2500 ATK with Level 4 Synchro. Maybe Some, - 800 like in the bold. So when it reach 3000 the ATK of the card is 2200 [/quote] I've fixed it, thanks ;3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 It still Oped if it is 250 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted September 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 [quote name='Syns' timestamp='1315146618' post='5491330'] It still Oped if it is 250 [/quote] fixed o/ I'll fix the layout latter... is really bugging, its the 2nd time this happen -___- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 "[b]This card gains 200 ATK for each card in your Extra Deck -800" [/b]I don't get what that -800 means in the sentence for the 1st card Extra Machine Killer's effect is a bit too much for the monster return effect in it, you should have also included if destroyed by its own effect as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted September 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1315165069' post='5492006'] "[b]This card gains 200 ATK for each card in your Extra Deck -800" [/b]I don't get what that -800 means in the sentence for the 1st card Extra Machine Killer's effect is a bit too much for the monster return effect in it, you should have also included if destroyed by its own effect as well [/quote] it means minus, like: 14 x 200 = 2800 [b]- 800[/b][b] = 2000[/b] I wasn't sure if the correct would be writing "minus" or put "-800" I didn't put by its own effect because let's say that you synchro summon it as your last synchro, then end your turn and the card is destroyed, so you get all other cards back in your extra deck easy instead of 300 should I put 200 or 250? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 ok, sorry that just sounds REALLY weird for the card wording...... And yeah make it 200 max Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Last card added, and I can't fix this layout... I think I'm going to work on a new set now, thankyou guys for all suggestions *-* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 only the atk determing effect seems a bit weak you'll need to have at least 17 cards in the extra deck for this to stand up to itself though yes 300 does seem a bit too many, maybe make it 250 atk per card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Whats with the big gaps.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 [quote name='Cindy ♥s You' timestamp='1315750055' post='5507010'] Whats with the big gaps.. [/quote] I dunno, everytime I put a new card the layout goes buggy @ragnarok I'll fix it to 250, thanks \o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 oh the big gaps aren't a problem, we can still see the cards, that's what counts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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