Grunt Issun Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 It's been a while since I made any cards, and scrolling through Realistic Cards and playing Minecraft got my ideas flowing, so I decided to make a bit of an Alchemy Set... sorta. [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]Master Alchemist [/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/2439/114068.jpg[/img] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]When this card is summoned, by discarding one card, you can add one "Alchemist Circle" from your deck to your hand. [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]Alchemists Circle [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/8115/114068g.jpg[/img] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]As long as this card remains on the field, once per turn you can activate th following effect. By tributing one or more Monster Cards, you can special summon a monster from your hand or deck whose stars are equal the sum of the stars of the tributed monsters [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] I'm a bit rusty, so my OCG is probably off, so you know, might wanna help me on that. Anyway, all criticism is welcome.[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 You broke my ratings scale... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted September 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 In a good way or a bad way? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 What can I do for you first, master? (Check sig) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted September 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 Ah, thanks man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 Your OCG's a bit off, but I like 'em 'cause alchemy's used in Fullmetal Alchemist... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted September 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 Yeah, I had a "Feeling" you liked Full Metal Alchemist, so anyway, you got any help for the OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 Master Alchemist: [s]bring[/s] [i]add[/i] Alchemy Circle: Once per turn, you can Tribute any number of monsters. Special Summon a monster from your hand whose Level is equal to the combined Level of the Tributed monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted September 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 Fixed, I believe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 Okay then, let's get to work on your cards! Master Alchemist: [quote]When this card is Summoned: you can discard one card; add one "Alchemist Circle" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.[/quote] Erm...It's a little overpowered with it searching both the Deck and Grave. I understand it only worse when it's summoned, but still it should be one or the other to balance it out a little. Still a nice card overall! Alchemist Circle: [quote]Once per turn: By Tributing one or more Monster Cards, you can Special Summon a monster from your hand or Deck whose Level are equal the sum of the stars of the tributed monsters.[/quote] This one seems okay to me, however it could be considered overpowered due to searching the Deck for power cards. Sure it's a tribute, however Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted September 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 Yeah, I realized how Overpowered it was. But yeah, I'll limit Master's effect to just Deck for balance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 6, 2011 Report Share Posted September 6, 2011 the spell remains OPed because all you have to do is match the star level to get the monster out you should make it match more than just that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted September 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2011 Like what though? ATK maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted September 6, 2011 Report Share Posted September 6, 2011 I was justing thinking of doing something like this anyway 1st card: When this card is summoned, by discarding one card, you can add one "Alchemist Circle" from your deck to your hand. [b]OCG looks fine. A bit easy to get the OP'd card though[/b] [b]OCG 10/10[/b] [b]Creativity 9/10[/b] [b]Originality 5/5[/b] [b]Balance: 9/10[/b] [b]Total: 33/35[/b] [b]2nd card:[/b] As long as this card remains on the field, [b]O[/b]nce per turn you can activate th[b]e[/b] following effect. By [b]T[/b]ributing one or more Monster Cards, you can [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummon a monster from your hand [s]or deck[/s] whose stars are equal the sum of the stars of the tributed monsters. Fix'd OCG/Spelling and what i think will make it a bit better/less OP [b]OCG 8.5/10[/b] [b]Creativity 8/10[/b] [b]Originality 8/5[/b] [b]Balance: 7/10[/b] [b]Total: 31.5/35[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted September 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2011 I know that's more balanced, but that seems almost underpowered honestly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted September 6, 2011 Report Share Posted September 6, 2011 Do you mind if i use the alcemist idea thing-a-ma-bober? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 6, 2011 Report Share Posted September 6, 2011 [quote name='Wandering Artist - Issun' timestamp='1315273918' post='5495397'] Like what though? ATK maybe? [/quote] either that part or the def part, or maybe do both Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 6, 2011 Report Share Posted September 6, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1315296700' post='5495860'] either that part or the def part, or maybe do both [/quote] No way, not both, then you'd never be able to use it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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