sirbeanalot Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Ok guys, here is my new monster card. Her name is 'Zeina the Elven Godess' (Btw i make my own graphics for the card, through either drawing them or finding various pictures off the internet and editing them, or both) Please rate out of 10 Thank you =] (Updated with right card type lol!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 . Good Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 OMG, lol how dumb of me :oops: Brb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ixigo Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 I love the artwork although the picture is a little stretched. The effect is decently balanced and kind of original, but it just might get overpowered so I suggest placing a limit to the amount of Life Points you can get by this card's effect. The OCG has some noticeable flaws, and grammar errors as well. I don't really understand why people insist on having their cards rated, since a rating is just a blatant number that means nothing without criticism, but if it means that much to you... -Artwork: 8/10 (Good, but a little stretched and blurry)-OCG: 6/10 (Unneccessary mistakes, grammar errors)-Originality: 9/10 (Nice effect, good theme)-Effect: 8.5/10 (Overall, not bad)-Balance: 9.5/10 (Might get a little overpowered at times, but generally alright) -Overall: 8.4/10 (Great work) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 I will work on it, i'm still getting to grips with the OCG so i expect critisism from that area. Thanks for the comment though! =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Its random but nice, i love the picture. O_oIxigo pointed out all your other mistakes, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Thank you Cyber =] The elf picture is off the internet but i edited it quite a bit, the rest i did. I will change the OCG and try and fix the grammar, it would help if you pointed it out though.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Your welcome sirbeanalot =/Ixigo pointed out all your errors, check his post. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Ok, i've limited the LP gain so i think that's all good now. All comments are very welcomed =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 BUMP =] Updated the card again. Comment please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terrorblazer Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 The picture is very nice and the effect is not bad at all. Just a few grammar errors and a slight change in the att power would make it perfect. The effects benefit both the monster and the player and its only one tribute, theres one more slight issue about the original att power lol and thats because its quite high considering your effect but nevertheless its a great card. I give it a 8/10. Good job keep it up =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Thank you =D I will change some bits and see how it goes! Thank you for all the comments =] Keep them comming! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Ok, changed some bits, and card type. for some reason it was still 'normal'. Made the picture a LITTLE less stretched as well. I think i should of used Illustrator to make the Bg lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Give me the text, and I fix the OCG, ya? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Ok kizzi =] The text is 'At the start of every Battle Phase that this card is in play. Increase this monsters ATK by 50x the number of monsters on your side of the Field. When this card is sent from Field to Graveyard. Halve the ammount of ATK gained through effect and add it to your LP.' Hope that helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Thanks for the rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 dont put spaces in the effect between every two sentences Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 Ok, thanks for your comments everyone. Keep them comming =D Would like to know! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yaden Yuki Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 totally random but nice pic is a little i don't know streched or something and some grammar errorsbut all in all 8.5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 Thank you for the good rating =] And yes i am trying to get it less stretched! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 "At the start of every Battle Phase that this card is in play, increase this card's ATK by 50 for each monster on your side of the field. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, you gain Life Points equal to half of the ATK this card gained by it's own effect." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 i think its a little overpowered. give it more stars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 Thank you =] And i will change the OCg and revise the star count! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 BUMP Comments will help me improve this card =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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