kyop Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][url="http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/24/flamvell.png/"][img]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/6243/flamvell.png[/img][/url][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][b]"Once per turn: you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card to Special Summon 1 FIRE monster with 200 DEF from your Graveyard. This card gains 400 ATK for each Xyz material attached to it." 2000 ATK / 200 DEF[/b][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][b]This lore is NOT written in the card, I'll fix it later[/b]. But this is the [b]v2 lore.[/b][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]my first try to a xyz monster, is pretty simple, but I think it would be a bit usefull in a flamvell deck, since with dog you can summon it easily [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☼◄Firewolf►☼ Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 I'm Not Good In Xyz Cards So I Don't Know If It's Balanced, But The Picture Is Very Cool.:--) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 2 Level 4 FIREs, so really its a 3500 ATK beatstick. *Bangs head on wall then comes back* Take that off? 2500 is a good decent attack for rank 4. Special Summon 2 FIRE monsters with 200 DEF? *Bangs head on desk* Ok... SS Flamvell Magician and Firedog = Instant Synchro for Stardust etc. -Reads effect to see it is not restricted per turn- Activate again to SS Poun/Archer and Baby = Instant Sync for Formula = Shooting Star/Red Nova What did it lose? 1000 ATK it shouldn't have :/ Sorry I'm not liking this card. I'd possibly make it only 1 per turn. To be honest, flamvells don't need this at all. They've got rekindling. Don't take this the wrong way, I'm simply pointing out the flaws with the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 [quote name='Elemental Dragon' timestamp='1315754334' post='5507138'] 2 Level 4 FIREs, so really its a 3500 ATK beatstick. *Bangs head on wall then comes back* Take that off? 2500 is a good decent attack for rank 4. Special Summon 2 FIRE monsters with 200 DEF? *Bangs head on desk* Ok... SS Flamvell Magician and Firedog = Instant Synchro for Stardust etc. -Reads effect to see it is not restricted per turn- Activate again to SS Poun/Archer and Baby = Instant Sync for Formula = Shooting Star/Red Nova What did it lose? 1000 ATK it shouldn't have :/ Sorry I'm not liking this card. I'd possibly make it only 1 per turn. To be honest, flamvells don't need this at all. They've got rekindling. Don't take this the wrong way, I'm simply pointing out the flaws with the cards. [/quote] now that you said, It was supposed to have 1500 atk, my bad maybe It lower its atk to 0 when it does not have any xyz material, or destroy it along with all other flamvell monsters you control except the last summoned but it idea is to summon flamvells like rekindling, but they are not removed from play during end phase, if you do not use them to synchro or something I didn't take it in the wrong way, I'm happy when people tells me what they really think about the card and point the flaws, it kinda makes me want to improve thank you ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Special Summon 1 monster, not 2. Why? Summon Firedog. Attack, SS Magician. Now what normally was an insta lvl 8 play is now an insta 2000 beater (assuming you meant 1500 as you said in the previous post), and a possible insta lvl 8. I know rekindling gives much more advantage, but it's harder to search. I also think it could stand to have 2000 ATK, I mean we have a 2500 Rank 3 beater already (revise dragon), why not a 3000 Rank 4? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Should be has 2000 ATK and 300/400 gains ATK for each Materials. and IMO, since it not limited by once per turn. must be 1 Materials for 1 monster for the balancing problems. and dont make exception for magician Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 "Once per turn: you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card to Special Summon 1 FIRE monster with 200 DEF from your Graveyard. This card gains 400 ATK for each Xyz material attached to it." 2000 ATK / 200 DEF is this effect good? it would be a easy summon 2800 monster, with nice support to quick summon shooting star/red nova/others xyz monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Still needs to be once per turn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 [quote name='Miror B.' timestamp='1315760024' post='5507294'] Still needs to be once per turn [/quote] fixed, thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 "[b]You can detach 1 Xyz material from this card to Special Summon up to 2 FIRE monsters with 200 DEF from your Graveyard, except "Flamvell Advanced Magician""[/b] This effect needs to be limited to only once per turn, or it's too much flood power Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 He actually changed it Rag. Changes are 3 posts above yours. I'd suggest changing the OP so people don't get confused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 I've put in the main post, thnks for suggestion Mirror B. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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