kyop Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/352/91008.jpg[/img] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][b]This card is used to Ritual Summon "Albenhein Lord of the Fallen". You must offer mosters whose total Levels are 10 or more.[/b] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/352/91008.jpg[/img] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][b]This card cannot be Summoned, except by the effect of "Darkness Opened". You can discard 1 Fairy-type monster to inflict 500 damage to your opponent. When this card attacks, you can lower this card ATK by 500 to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card your opponent controls. While this card is on the field, when your opponent has 3 or more Level 6 six monsters, you can tribute this card; destroy all cards on both players side of the field. Neither player can Special Summon during their next turn.[/b] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/5589/91008l.jpg[/img] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][b]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned by triburing 1 "Albenhein Lord of the Fallen". You can tribute 1 Faiy-type monster you control; Special Summon Level 5 or lower Fairy-type monster from your Deck; [/b][b]send to the Graveyard during your End Phase. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent: halve it and send the top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard. During your End Phase: send this card to the Graveyard; Special Summon 2 Albenhein Tokens to your side of the field (0 ATK/0 DEF/Fairy/Level 2/LIGHT). Those when an Albenhein Token is destroyed, increase your Life Points by 500. Those tokens cannot be used as Fusion, Synchro and Xyz Material or Tribute Summons.[/b] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [indent=2]what about them? :/[/indent] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] EDIT: In the first card I forgot to put "from your hand or field" [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 12, 2011 Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 "[b]When this card attacks, you can lower this card ATK by 500 to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card your opponent controls"[/b] That shouldn't be permanent for your ritual. 3000 is relatively weak for lv10 anyway for Lord of Light's lv5 or lower summon, since it lasts only 1 turn on the field, there's no need to negate its effects the token effect is good, but having Lord of Light only last 1 turn on the field, that just seems too short Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted September 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1315785873' post='5508475'] "[b]When this card attacks, you can lower this card ATK by 500 to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card your opponent controls"[/b] That shouldn't be permanent for your ritual. 3000 is relatively weak for lv10 anyway for Lord of Light's lv5 or lower summon, since it lasts only 1 turn on the field, there's no need to negate its effects the token effect is good, but having Lord of Light only last 1 turn on the field, that just seems too short [/quote] I made 1 turn because of its ATK, I'll remove the effect negation, thank you ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 12, 2011 Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 no problem, once you do that I can give the cards 9/10 for your efforts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Newsd Posted September 12, 2011 Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 Those are great i love the pics especially darkness opened! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted September 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 made v2 lore for converted albenhein, thnks for comments =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 12, 2011 Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 [b]This card cannot be Summoned, except by the effect of "Darkness Opened". You can discard 1 Fairy-type monster to inflict 500 damage to your opponent. [color=#ff0000]When this card attacks, you can lower this card ATK by 500 to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card your opponent controls.[/color] While this card is on the field, when your opponent has 3 or more [s]Level 6 six[/s] monsters, you can tribute this card; destroy all cards on [s]both players side of[/s] the field. Neither player can Special Summon during their next turn.[/b] [b]I love the Red Parts. Keep it, and yeah. make it permanent[/b] [b]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 1 "Albenhein Lord of the Fallen". You can tribute 1 Fairy-type monster you control; Special Summon Level 5 or lower Fairy-type monster from your Deck; [/b][b]send to the Graveyard during your End Phase. [color=#0000ff]When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent: halve it and send the top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard[/color]. [color=#00ff00]During your End Phase: send this card to the Graveyard; [/color]Special Summon 2 Albenhein Tokens to your side of the field (2000 ATK/0 DEF/Fairy/Level 5/LIGHT). Those when an Albenhein Token is destroyed, increase your Life Points by 500. Those tokens cannot be used as Fusion, Synchro [s]and Xyz Material[/s] or Tribute Summons.[/b] [b]Blue part is meh, make it until the End Phase. [/b] [b]Green part - there's a BIG chance that this card will be a dead draw, so i suggest to make it optional. Tributing Level 10 monster to have this card and in the end is destroyed isnt cool[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted September 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 [quote name='Syns' timestamp='1315796209' post='5508935'] [b]This card cannot be Summoned, except by the effect of "Darkness Opened". You can discard 1 Fairy-type monster to inflict 500 damage to your opponent. [color=#ff0000]When this card attacks, you can lower this card ATK by 500 to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card your opponent controls.[/color] While this card is on the field, when your opponent has 3 or more [s]Level 6 six[/s] monsters, you can tribute this card; destroy all cards on [s]both players side of[/s] the field. Neither player can Special Summon during their next turn.[/b] [b]I love the Red Parts. Keep it, and yeah. make it permanent[/b] [b]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 1 "Albenhein Lord of the Fallen". You can tribute 1 Fairy-type monster you control; Special Summon Level 5 or lower Fairy-type monster from your Deck; [/b][b]send to the Graveyard during your End Phase. [color=#0000ff]When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent: halve it and send the top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard[/color]. [color=#00ff00]During your End Phase: send this card to the Graveyard; [/color]Special Summon 2 Albenhein Tokens to your side of the field (2000 ATK/0 DEF/Fairy/Level 5/LIGHT). Those when an Albenhein Token is destroyed, increase your Life Points by 500. Those tokens cannot be used as Fusion, Synchro [s]and Xyz Material[/s] or Tribute Summons.[/b] [b]Blue part is meh, make it until the End Phase. [/b] [b]Green part - there's a BIG chance that this card will be a dead draw, so i suggest to make it optional. Tributing Level 10 monster to have this card and in the end is destroyed isnt cool[/b] [/quote] I've made the reduction opicional, because I've been so angry with light and darkness dragon sometimes I'm considering makin the tokens level 3 or 4, it can be useful for xyz since you will lose a level 10 monster Thanks for the opinion, I'm just going to wait a litte more to make the definitive version of the card ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vexslasher Posted September 12, 2011 Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 These look amazing, I especially like the fallen one, but they are all very well done. The light ones kinda hard to read his effect tho wonder if it would look OK when printed.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 [quote name='Touya' timestamp='1315870118' post='5510625'] I've made the reduction opicional, because I've been so angry with light and darkness dragon sometimes I'm considering makin the tokens level 3 or 4, it can be useful for xyz since you will lose a level 10 monster Thanks for the opinion, I'm just going to wait a litte more to make the definitive version of the card ^^ [/quote] Get rid of the blue part at least ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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