-Chaos Zero- Posted September 16, 2011 Report Share Posted September 16, 2011 been spending many hours on gimp derastically failing with lighting and smudging etc, finally came up with something i like but i am sure it will get ripped apart (which is what i want, i want to know where to improve so please cnc [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/21cijat.jpg[/IMG] ZERO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 [color=#00ff00][font=comic sans ms,cursive]Umm...the motion blur doesn't work. The lighting is really off, and that white...orb..sphere thing gets all the focus. If that was supposed to be your light source, well...it shouldn't. To achieve believable lighting you have to use brushes and not other renders, C4Ds, or created stuff...Plus, it looks really sharp. There is no depth or flow. Keep it up though, you are slowly improving...Oh, and it's good that you didn't use text...[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Chaos Zero- Posted September 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 cheers mate i actually used glow brushes for the light effect but i get where your coming from cheers for commenting ZERO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 [color=#00ff00][font=comic sans ms,cursive]I meant simple round brushes, not custom ones...Just brush around where the light should be, then play around with the opacity and set it to any layer mode looks good...[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Chaos Zero- Posted September 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 oh i am starting to do that a bit more as i am getting practice i make probably 3 sigs a day so thanks again for the advice ZERO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Do you have the .xcf or .psd? I want to show you how to improve it a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Cursed, stop showing off. But yes, this needs a lot of work and CR could help a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Chaos Zero- Posted September 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 cheers for the coment as you said in previous threads practise practise practise and thats what i am slowly doing and slowly familierising with the software ZERO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 No seriously guise. I might as well try to go through the layer structure :/ So, Chaos Zero, do you have the .xcf/.psd? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Don't rely on brushing as much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Chaos Zero- Posted September 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 xcf why? if its easier mate pm me ZERO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Eh, it's basically so I can look at what you did. It looks a bit messy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Chaos Zero- Posted September 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 i have got a more recent version (that was made 5 days ago) i think it looks better, shall i post it up? ZERO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Feel free. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 CR can help you. If you are going to tutor him, in a sense, be sure to remove the brush-crutch of his, and to use other resources. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Chaos Zero- Posted September 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 i will put up my latest 2 then.i redid flygon with a lighter background and gradient - [IMG]http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff406/chaos-zero1/flygonbanner2.jpg[/IMG] the weavile one i focused more on the light and shadow i didnt really know how to do this but i went round an outline of areas i thought needed lightening (opacity 60 - soft light ) - [IMG]http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff406/chaos-zero1/weavilesig.jpg[/IMG] cheers all ZERO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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