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[center][center][quote][color=#00ffff]Both players target 1 Monster in their Graveyard: Special Summon the targeted Monster on their opponent's side of the field.[/color][/quote][/center][/center]

[center][center][color=#ff0000]How Is It?[/color][/center][/center]
[center][center][color=#ffa07a]OCG Fixes Highly Appreciated.[/color][/center][/center]
[center][center][color=#008000]I Give Reps For Constructive Feedback.[/color][/center][/center]
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[center][center][color=#daa520]Image Credit Goes To JazinKay[/color][/center][/center]
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[center][center][color=#00ff00]Lol it's kinda like a two way foolish revival[/color]

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Targeted only has 1 "t".

Also, instead of a colon after "Graveyard" use a semicolon. Colons are usually used to follow up on a trigger. Both players targeting 1 monster in their graveyards isn't really a drawback, so a colon sin't really necessarily.

Lastly, the way you worded it makes it sound like only [i]you [/i]put the monster on your opponent's side of the field. Unless that's what you meant, it should say "both players put their targeted monsters on their opponent's side of the field." ...that way not only does it make more sense, but it's so much more fair... and balanced.

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[quote name='Wyren' timestamp='1316244433' post='5520032']
Not bad, but like rag said, nothing too new.
8/10
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It's not all about creativity, you know. Fact is the card uses the same style just in a different direction. That is what makes the card unique, not the creativity of the mechanics.

...at least in my opinion.

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