DestinyGame Posted September 17, 2011 Report Share Posted September 17, 2011 [img]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/2036/487823.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters This card cannot be targeted by the effects of your opponent's Trap Cards. Once per turn, target 1 Xyz monster your opponent controls: the targeted monster's effects are negated until the End Phase of your opponent's next turn. When this card leaves the field: inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted September 17, 2011 Report Share Posted September 17, 2011 Ah, first card? THEN LET'S TEAR U TO SHREDZZZZZZZ! ...damn, this is good. U win, ur fine, welcome to YCM I like the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DestinyGame Posted September 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2011 [quote name='AggroDrago' timestamp='1316277574' post='5520529'] Ah, first card? THEN LET'S TEAR U TO SHREDZZZZZZZ! ...damn, this is good. U win, ur fine, welcome to YCM I like the card. [/quote] Tk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Neos Posted September 17, 2011 Report Share Posted September 17, 2011 great playability great effects great pic/name epic first card 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 17, 2011 Report Share Posted September 17, 2011 You pass the test! This card is amazing, and the picture's epic... It should be "Once per turn, you can target 1 Xyz monster on your opponent's side of the field" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted September 17, 2011 Report Share Posted September 17, 2011 the card is great for a newby as expected, there are a few OCG (official card grammer) mistakes, but i can help you on that the colons and semi-colons can be a bit confusing 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters This card cannot be targeted by the effects of your opponent's Trap Cards. Once per turn[b]: You can[/b] target 1 [u]Xyz [b]M[/b]onster[/u] your opponent controls[b];[/b][b] [/b]the targeted monster's effect[b](s) is[/b] negated until the End Phase of your opponent's next turn. When this card leaves the field: [b]I[/b]nflict 1000 damage to your opponent. like i said, i like the card and hope this helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted September 17, 2011 Report Share Posted September 17, 2011 Wow, awesome, would totally use this. 10/10. EPIC FIRST CARD DOOD! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unbreakerable Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 nice work, i can't wait to see what you can do man 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 classic JazinKay Pics This is good for a first member... can't wait to see more... Welcome To YCM Fellow Troll Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guy Raffaele Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 This is really good for a first card 1st it's fair 2nd perfect English and 3rd, AWESOME PICTURE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceDorago Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Nice work for a first card, man. Most decks will have one or two Xyzs, so this could be useful in most Extras, plus it has a burn effect when it leaves, so, if you need to and you're opponent's at low enough LP, you could do something like negate their Utopia's effect, point for point then kill with burn. Though I doubt that would happen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LinkTheGHhero14 Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 I think any card making skills I might have had were given to you instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 I don't really think it'll see much play, given the difference between 2500 (this) and 2700 (Scrap Archfiend) pretty much wins or loses games. But well, summoning this when your opponent has less than 1000 will make an unbreakable wall... I say it's pretty damn nice overall. Especially, for the first card made, this is baws. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 great card,ocg good,pic great, I would use this card 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Surprisingly amazing for beginner, far from what i expected, awesome card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Nice card, especially for your first one, anyway some minor OCG errors, but nothing major. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 nothing new, typical skill drain effect to XYZs has a neat 1000 burn to it, very well done for an early card 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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