CommanderVolt Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://oi55.tinypic.com/28s7fvl.jpg[/img][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]Harbinger of the End - DARK/Fairy[/center][/center] [center][center]3400/3000[/center][/center] [center][center][Card Lore][/center][/center] [center][center]2 Level 8 Ritual Monsters [/center][/center] [center][center]At the beginning of your Main Phase 1 detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card, banish all other cards on the field and in each players graveyard its rare for me to post in the realistic cards.... but anyway. Comments? Questions? Suggestions? OCG Fixing? Critizisim? All appreciated. [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 I like it, good pic Im not good at Ocg and over all it seem balanced since what you have to do to get it on the field 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Meh, could be used in Demise Gaiadown when you feel like going for overkill. Seems nice. Wouldn't change the meta at all, but should be printed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 No OCG errors and balanced, awesome card! Want to see more of your cards.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CommanderVolt Posted September 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Alright so thats 3 for Balanced, ocg seems fine. Thanks everyone for your thoughts. @Darkplant Funny because Demise is meant to be one of the Xyz Materials for this card, but im sure you already figured that out. @Hell Heat i only post on some rare occasions, otherwise i usally only post in Written cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSeed Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 I don't know about this type of monster, or Xyz's, but it should be "Main Phase 1". Overall, I like the card. Very difficult to summon though, but that may be the point of Exceeds. &Isn't the pic from Black Rock Shooter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 [quote name='TwinSeed' timestamp='1316325488' post='5522351'] &Isn't the pic from Black Rock Shooter? [/quote] Once you say it, it looks like one (I've never seen the anime, but I know the main character, and this person seems similar.) @34: Well, I sorta figured because Demise and Herald are the only competitive Rituals besides Gishki. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CommanderVolt Posted September 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 @Seed Its not a black rock star reference. if i remember correctly it's actually based off of something from World of Warcraft. @DarkPlant, oh i figured you would have noticed how its pretty much like an upgraded Demise lol. but yeah that works to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSeed Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 I looked up Exceeds and found out the mistake. Wouldn't it be "At the beginning of your Main Phase 1, [b]you can[/b] detach..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CommanderVolt Posted September 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 [quote name='TwinSeed' timestamp='1316326775' post='5522388'] I looked up Exceeds and found out the mistake. Wouldn't it be "At the beginning of your Main Phase 1, [b]you can[/b] detach..." [/quote] I've actually meant for the card effect to be non-mandatory, as such, there is no "you can" included. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSeed Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Then it would be "At the beginning of your Main Phase 1, [s]by detaching[/s] [b]detach[/b] 2..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CommanderVolt Posted September 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 [quote name='TwinSeed' timestamp='1316327422' post='5522397'] Then it would be "At the beginning of your Main Phase 1, [s]by detaching[/s] [b]detach[/b] 2..." [/quote] That sounds about right actually. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSeed Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Anytime Also, I'm pretty sure graveyard is capitalized also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 graveyard should be Graveyard, main phase should be Main Phase. And I believe it's [Fairy/XYZ/Effect] instead of [Fairy/Exceed]. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSeed Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 *looks it up* Hell Heat's right on all accounts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 effect seems balanced out, just seems it's going to be really hard to summon you got any plans to get this one out really fast? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CommanderVolt Posted September 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 @Seed and Heat: Unfortunately, the card maker thing i use has it set up as Exceed and doesnt add Effect to the card name so i am unable to change that (for now at least). as for the wording i can change. @Ragnarok Although not meant to be gotten out easily, one can Ritual Summon, Demise, or other level 8 monsters via Djinns or Ritual Raven (If Ritual Summoning a DARK Monster), and then drop Ritual Foregone to Special Summon a 2nd Level 8 Ritual Monster. If this card survives, it should be well worth the payment. Thank you all for your input Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSeed Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Wait.. So, the first turn it loses both material monsters, so what happens the next turn? You need to add a "If this card has no Materials..." or "If you cannot detach 2 Materials..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [quote name='Ｎｏ．３４ 電算機獣テラ・バイト' timestamp='1316351108' post='5522704'] @Seed and Heat: Unfortunately, the card maker thing i use has it set up as Exceed and doesnt add Effect to the card name so i am unable to change that (for now at least). as for the wording i can change. @Ragnarok Although not meant to be gotten out easily, one can Ritual Summon, Demise, or other level 8 monsters via Djinns or Ritual Raven (If Ritual Summoning a DARK Monster), and then drop Ritual Foregone to Special Summon a 2nd Level 8 Ritual Monster. If this card survives, it should be well worth the payment. Thank you all for your input [/quote] Yeah I only ask because rituals aren't exactly popular nowadays Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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