The Elementals masters.

[raaabr]

[img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/2164/25039.jpg[/img]





[img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/2164/25039.jpg[/img]





[img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/2164/25039.jpg[/img]




[img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/2164/25039.jpg[/img]




[img]http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/3151/25039p.jpg[/img]







This is all I have for now.



EDIT: LOOK AT PAGE 12 FOR THE NEWLY ORGANIZED SYSTEM

[Nede]

If you want to post a card, after you make the card, "Generate" it, and click it, there's should be a link below the card you make, copy and paste it here. Done!

[ragnarok1945]

re post it, we're not seeing the cards here

[raaabr]

Here are some new ones:





[img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/2164/25039.jpg[/img]





[img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/2164/25039.jpg[/img]












[img]http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/2164/25039.jpg[/img]





The "Advanced Elementals" are going to be coming out soon. They are actually a type. And they are more like evolved forms of the original elementals

[ragnarok1945]

for Ray you need an alternative

what happens if your opponent has no cards in the hand or face down cards on the field?

[raaabr]

Okay. Here is the new version:



[img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/2164/25039.jpg[/img]














And some others:









[img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/3061/25039j.jpg[/img]







Tell me what you think of the first advanced elemental.












[img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/9923/25039r.jpg[/img]

[ragnarok1945]

well that alternative for Ray isn't all that good

LP gain alone isn't too useful

[raaabr]

[img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/2164/25039.jpg[/img]



When this card is summoned, your opponent must either:
Show you their hand or reveal all face down cards on their side of the field.
This card gains 300 attack for each monster revealed this way. If your opponent has no face down cards or any cards in their hand when this card is summoned, banish 5 cards from the top of your opponents deck.Then gain 1000 life points





Thanks for pointing that out. Also, could you please make any comments on the rest of the cards?

Just made a new one:




[img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/7787/25039q.jpg[/img]









Tell me if any of them are OP'ed or under powered.

[ragnarok1945]

milling up to 5 cards for Ray? Now that seems almost too many

[raaabr]

Why is ray so hard to get right???

What kind of effect should he have then?



In the meantime:




[img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2164/25039.jpg[/img]







[img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/4025/25039h.jpg[/img]

[ragnarok1945]

Write out the lore for Gale

As for Angel, that you can't attack other monsters means you can just go for LP directly, which is ok given its high level and only 3000 atk

for Banishing all your opponent's spells/traps, you forgot to say from where

[raaabr]

Thanks. Your practically my only regular commenter.


Gale: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be summoned except for the effect of "Elemental Release!". When this card is summoned, destroy all spells and traps on the field. By sending one wind type from your hand to the graveyard, this card gains 1000 attack. During the end phase of the turn, this card loses 1000 attack.


As for angel, I meant for him to be unable to attack except for a direct attack, once there are no monsters on the field. I'm trying not to make a "Earthbound immortal: here. Here is the revised version:










[img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/4729/25039b.jpg[/img]






Lore: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be summoned except for the effect of "Elemental Release!". This card can not attack monsters. Once per turn, you may banish one card from your hand to banish all of your opponents spells/traps from their side of the field.




And a couple more:





[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/2164/25039.jpg[/img]



Lore: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except for by the effect of "Elemental Release!". Once per turn, during your standby phase, you can summon one "Mushroom token" (0 atk, 0 def) to your opponents side of the field in defense mode. When a "Mushroom Token" is destroyed, this card gains 100 atk. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack till the next turn.





[img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/2164/25039.jpg[/img]




[img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/2164/25039.jpg[/img]


Lore:This cards attribute counts as fire, water, wind, dark ,earth and light. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, you can discard one monster to have this card gain the discarded monsters effect and attack/defense till the end phase.




[img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/2164/25039.jpg[/img]

Lore:This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be summoned except for the effect of "Elemental Release!". This card can only attack once every 3 turns. When this monster attacks a defense position monster, destroy the monster without entering the damage step.

Note: Don't try and complain about the gender. The "Advanced Elementals" are embodiments of the original wizards power, not their transformed selves.



[img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/2164/25039.jpg[/img]



Lore:This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except for by the effect of "Elemental Release!". Once per turn, if this monster would be destroyed, it is not. During your main phase, you can double this cards attack. If you do, destroy this card during the end phase.

[-Chippy]

Make sure to capitalize every card's name. Most of the cards here are uncapitalized... btw 7.5/10 nice.

[raaabr]

Thanks for the rating! This is my first set of cards, so i'm still trying to come to grips with how to make them 100% accurately.

[ragnarok1945]

all right, NOW I can rate Gale

there's nothing really wrong with the effect, but you wrote Wind type

WIND isn't a type, it's an attribute

[raaabr]

Hehe. Sorry about that. Too much pokemon influence, i guess.

[KitoMP]

Nice set, 8.5/10

[raaabr]

I seriously did not expect such good ratings for my first set! One question: How is the art, and are any of the effects overpowered?

Another one of my regular updates:

[img]http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/2164/25039.jpg[/img]


Lore: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except for by the effect of "Elemental Release!!". If this card successfully manages to directly attack your opponent, then once every standby phase, they lose 500 life points.



And now I am adding a new concept for this Archetype.

[img]http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/2164/25039.jpg[/img]


And the first "Perfect Elemental" (And perhaps the last)

[img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/4135/25039f.jpg[/img]

Also. Should i make it so that Niger Foramen has another effect, or boost his attack/defense? I think he is underpowered, but hey, i have poor judgment of my own cards.


And now a proper support card:



[img]http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/2164/25039.jpg[/img]

Hope you enjoy!

[raaabr]

Oh yeah, I forgot, Niger Foramen in latin roughly translates as black hole, and silicus means rock or stone.

[gimmepie]

These are good. The art is impressive, and I like the Released monsters. I dunno why but these remind me of the Monarchs for some reason.

[raaabr]

Hehe.... I kind of got my inspiration from the monarchs, and the familiar-possesed. they all have to do with elements and specific effects that somehow work together.

[gimmepie]

I think these take the concept further than the Monarchs though, you have to be careful not to take it too far though.

[raaabr]

Why?

[gimmepie]

Cause then you'll end up either having OP'd cards or an archetype that's impossible to use. Where they are now though is really good IMO.

[raaabr]

So i should avoid the "Perfect elemental" archetype for now?