Nede Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [img]http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/8413/451325.jpg[/img] Lore : This card gains 1000 ATK for each face-up monster that includes "Girl" or "Lady" in its name on the field. You can tribute this card to Special Summon 1 monster that includes "Girl" or "Lady" in it's name from your hand. You can banish 1 monster that includes "Girl" or "Lady" in its name from your Deck to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/8413/451325.jpg[/img] Lore: Activate only when a monster(s) that includes "Girl' in its name is destroyed by battle while "Toong Pao, The Flirty King" is face-up on the field. Destroy and banish the attacking monster. Then, inflict damage equal to the attacking monster's ATK. (I'M TOO LAZY TO SEARCH PICTURES TODAY, SO I JUST EDIT IT) Rate and Comment Please! Not to be rude, but i don't like comments like "Good Card 8.5/10" or "Bad Card 7/10". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 I think it's a good card. I think it's fine if you leave it as girl. And the picture is very good. 9.9/10... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 Hmmm. In my opinion this card won't gain much ATK since there are very few monsters with "Girl" in their name. But it has good DEF. If you add Lady it will be easier to gain ATK. "You can [u]banish[/u] 1 monster that includes "Girl" in its name to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard." You should also write from where the card is banished ( Graveyard,hand...) I like cards with good DEF . If you also add the "Lady" part it would be good in a fortune or harpie Lady Deck Since this card will gain much ATK. In my opinion it is a good card but If you make some more support it would be even better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted September 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 Okay thanks, i will edit it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 No, wait! If you make an archetype with "girl" in it's name, this card would do really good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 I probably would add "Lady" as a prerequisite; that adds some more potential monsters (Harpies, for example). I would also change "Flirty" to "Licentious" or something similar; they have different shades of meaning, and the "king" seems more licentious than flirty. Strategically, it looks to me like a Machine King powered by women instead of machines. The only real archetype I could see it working with are the Harpies, and it might not work well with Amazoness should you add them. I don't like the metagame, but I highly doubt this card would last long enough in an actual duel to do any major damage. You would need a deck filled with "Girls" and "Ladies" to get this out, let alone make it effective. It's a beatstick, sure, but that's all it's got in its favor. In short, it's aesthetically interesting, but its strategic value is very limited. This would have made sense about 7 years ago (before Synchros and their comparatively fast summoning), or in an anime-style deck (which focuses on types and appearances rather than actual strategy). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted September 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 @Sonic Dragon : Hmm... nice idea! but I'm going to consider that first, thanks for your suggestion! @En Almhjbat Wahd : Licentious huh? I'll take that as a consideration! but this card is useful for Synchro too, that's why i made the "You can banish 1 monster that includes "Girl" or "Lady" in its name from your Deck to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard.", for Synchro Summon. [b] [/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 Beatsticks can be good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [quote name='Sonic Dragon' timestamp='1316432246' post='5525784'] No, wait! If you make an archetype with "girl" in it's name, this card would do really good... [/quote] That's a better idea. It would need to work with all of this thing's facets, not just the powering-up thing. Maybe make a powerful one to take advantage of its second effect (special summoning 1 "girl") and several weaker ones to take advantage of its third effect (banish 1 "girl" to Special Summon this card). Try looking up some soft hentai/ecchi for pics... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [quote name='En Almhjbat Wahd' timestamp='1316432677' post='5525793'] That's a better idea. It would need to work with all of this thing's facets, not just the powering-up thing. Maybe make a powerful one to take advantage of its second effect (special summoning 1 "girl") and several weaker ones to take advantage of its third effect (banish 1 "girl" to Special Summon this card). Try looking up some soft hentai/ecchi for pics... [/quote] Exactly! See if you had cards to support it, then it would be better... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [quote name='Sonic Dragon' timestamp='1316432609' post='5525790'] Beatsticks can be good... [/quote] True, but the metagame (at least the metagame that people bring up in my threads) is based on effects that put your opponent at a disadvantage (milling, burning, nuking, field control). This is a straight-up beatstick, and one that requires 3 "girls" to be on par with the big boys. Try giving it an initial 1000 ATK; if you somehow manage to get 4 "girls" on the field, it'll have 5000 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted September 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 Hmm... okay I will make the Girl Deck if I have time. And for the Soft Spicy Ecchi Pics, don't worry I have some... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [quote name='En Almhjbat Wahd' timestamp='1316432881' post='5525798'] True, but the metagame (at least the metagame that people bring up in my threads) is based on effects that put your opponent at a disadvantage (milling, burning, nuking, field control). This is a straight-up beatstick, and one that requires 3 "girls" to be on par with the big boys. Try giving it an initial 1000 ATK; if you somehow manage to get 4 "girls" on the field, it'll have 5000 ATK. [/quote] Don't get me wrong, you need good effects, but an effect beatstick? Those are amazing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 That was a fast edit! I still think it would be good with an initial 1000 ATK (or even 500-750 if you're feeling conservative). 0 ATK is too low. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted September 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 Is it okay? it's only Level 6, and I think i won't raise it, because I want to make this card useful for Synchro Summon too. Oops wrong quote. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 WITH 3000 DEF!? No way! It should even be a Level 7! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted September 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [quote name='En Almhjbat Wahd' timestamp='1316432881' post='5525798'] True, but the metagame (at least the metagame that people bring up in my threads) is based on effects that put your opponent at a disadvantage (milling, burning, nuking, field control). This is a straight-up beatstick, and one that requires 3 "girls" to be on par with the big boys. Try giving it an initial 1000 ATK; if you somehow manage to get 4 "girls" on the field, it'll have 5000 ATK. [/quote] Is it okay? it's only Level 6, and I think i won't raise it, because I want to make this card useful for Synchro Summon too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [quote name='Sonic Dragon' timestamp='1316432955' post='5525801'] Don't get me wrong, you need good effects, but an effect beatstick? Those are amazing... [/quote] If this thing had the archetype to support it, then its effects could really come into play. Right now, there's just too few "girls" to really make this amazing, whereas Lightsworns (as much as I hate them) are self-milling, but have plenty of support to compensate for that. I don't think this has that support to compensate for that low ATK it will have early on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [quote name='Hell Heat' timestamp='1316433175' post='5525808'] Is it okay? it's only Level 6, and I think i won't raise it, because I want to make this card useful for Synchro Summon too. [/quote] It could still be used for Synchro Summon, like for Stardust Dragon... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [quote name='Hell Heat' timestamp='1316433175' post='5525808'] Is it okay? it's only Level 6, and I think i won't raise it, because I want to make this card useful for Synchro Summon too. [/quote] Wrong quote again. Of course, the replies are coming pretty quickly... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted September 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 Damn, wrong quote again. The replies are coming very quickly... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [quote name='En Almhjbat Wahd' timestamp='1316433257' post='5525812'] Wrong quote again. Of course, the replies are coming pretty quickly... [/quote] Stop Spamming, do you want to get this topic locked? Anyways, just leave it...I think it's fine the way it is... But you should still consider making the archetype... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted September 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [quote name='Sonic Dragon' timestamp='1316433256' post='5525811'] It could still be used for Synchro Summon, like for Stardust Dragon... [/quote] If its Level 6, this card and 1 Level 2 Tuner monster. But if you raise it? I don't think so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 Sorry, I was just trying to correct him... Aside from the archetype thing, there really isn't much more I need to say... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted September 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 So is it already fine the way it is now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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