Alice Moonflowyr Posted October 6, 2011 Report Share Posted October 6, 2011 Please rate the card. Also, vote which pic is better. [img]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/4110/203822.jpg[/img] [img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/6759/203822i.jpg[/img] [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/4110/203822.jpg[/img] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/9935/203822f.jpg[/img] gogogogogoggo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted October 6, 2011 Report Share Posted October 6, 2011 The effect is kind of bland and simple... Same with the card its self, yet it is kind of balanced. 8.5/10 Also the 1st or Second pictures would work best. The last 2 kind of suck.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted October 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2011 thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted October 6, 2011 Report Share Posted October 6, 2011 First, its not XYZ, its Xyz Next, i voted for pic 2 Your effect needs some kind of a drawback... despite the fact that it's only half the ATK, it could still do damage... I'd say that if this effect was used, this monster cannot attack the turn it was used... I only offer this drawback because the monster's stats are powerful your OCG should look like this: [b]2 Level 5 DARK monsters[/b] [b]Once per turn, during your [u]Main Phase 1[/u]: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; inflict damage to your opponent equal to half of the detached monster's ATK. If you use this effect: This card cannot attack this turn.[/b] All the bold text is what your effect should look like... If you don't want the drawback effect, you can just completely delete the last sentence... The underlined part is involved with the drawback, and it displays a time before the Battle Phase, which is where you use your monsters to attack your opponent... You can change it if you want to "Standby Phase" to make it even more clear when the effect happens, or (if you still don't want the drawback) you can delete the [i]", during your ___" [/i]line completely, but keep the colon as it is part of the new OCG (to make your card look realistic ) Hope that helps, and even though its a simple card, i like it, [b]8.5 / 10[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted October 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2011 Good, good. Once I decide on a pic I will add those changes. Exept I might give it a diffrent drawback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 too boring for just burning nothing really imbalanced about it, just kind of plain and all 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1317982126' post='5565618'] too boring for just burning nothing really imbalanced about it, just kind of plain and all 8/10 [/quote] Nothing imbalanced? You're saying that a Xyz that can destroy 2 monsters at once and possibly deal 2000+ damage to your opponent is balanced? And will you stop saying that cards are boring / plain because they have a short effect (which in most cases mean the card is good already)? Effects are supposed to be short and sweet, not long and sour. Want interesting and long effects? Go to AoC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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