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I don't know much about Pogeyman OCG (the last time I played was like, 10+ years ago with that game on the GBC) but...
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Kirby:
Shouldn't its attack say "Remove 1 damage counter from Kirby times the number of heads. Your opponent takes 10 damage times the number of tails" or something to that effect? I mean, as written you just flip ten coins for some reason and then your choice is either heal Kirby once or hurt some guy once (or maybe both, idk)

Ice Kirby:

The way the three Blue Energy things are for Ice Storm looks kind of weird.

Sword Kirby:

It's attack has to be something divisible by ten. Like... 20 or 30. It can not be 25. Also, it's picture is stretched weirdly.

Laser Kirby:

Similarly to Sword Kirby, it's HP has to be divisible by ten. Use 60 or 70, but it can NOT be 65. Damage counters only count 10 HP of damage, and you can't have half a damage counter.


Laser, Ice and Sword:

Retreat costs on Pokemon are always supposed to be colorless. You could argue you're trying to make them "original", but you're just making them worse then any other Pokemon.


Two minor nagging nitpicks:

1: What's up with the set number on the bottom corner? I mean, not gonna insult if you have 15 planned for this but... why not just post all of them? Or post their numbers sequentially? I figure if you post number 11, you've gotta already have numbers 1 through 10.
2: What's up with Xblaster360 in the bottom?

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Sorry I can't control the set number and These are some of my cards from my main set where I make random cards I am not sure if there will be 15 or not and if these are orignal ards who said can't have attacks with 45 damage I am pretty sure there are no rules against it but I might be wrong (not to be rude or anything but I am wondering if there is.If there is I will edit it.

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Ohhhh boy.
Kirby:Flippy attacks are bad, and attack has nothing to do with him. also what pika said.
Ice:Frozen isn't a special condition. Use Paralyze or sleep. Either way, "Immune to attacks" should be "prevent all effects of an attack, including damage, done to *Name* during your opponent's next turn."
Jet:Same thing with Ice.
Laser:Decent, but is that a 5 I see, and not a 0? Change it to a 0. Pokemon is based of 10.
Sword:Round up to 30 to be like laser. And that everything damaging/HP is divisable by 10.
General:Retreat costs are ALWAYS, Always always, Colorless. Change that.
You also need levels.

The one thing I would do, If It were me, would have all kirbi have a Poke-Power/Ability that reads: Once during your turn (before your attack), you may search your deck for another Pokemon that evolves from Kirby that is the same type as the Defending Pokemon, and switch it with *Power* Kirby. (Any cards attached to *Power* Kirby, damage counters, Special Conditions, and effects on it are now on the new Pokémon.) If you do, put *Power* Kirby on top of your deck. Shuffle your deck afterward. You can't use more than 1 Ability Swap Poké-Power/Ability each turn.
I would then omit it from Kirby, and give it an attack that reads:
(C) Swallow 10
Search your deck for a card that evolves from Kirby that is the same type as the defending Kirby, and place it on Kirby. Shuffle your deck afterwords.



but that's just me.

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Ceal@ They don't need levels and currently their is not a updated template this is an older template. The card Final smash does I have played ssbb and kirby's smash is where he cooks his enemies and I added his cook power into it where he recieves hp and poke powers are not in the template. There is no rule that says all cards hp and attack must be at intervals of 10. I also was trying to be orignal with frozen since it is a staus condition but it has not been added

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LKevels because it's an old template. It's tradition man, tradition, man.
Final Smash? You could have given him his signature attack instead of an ability!
Pokepower not it? PAH! Just do what they did in the old days: Look at base set charizard!
No rule? Look at every single card in the pokemon universe that is legal. Seriously.
Don't add status conditions! Forzen is the EXACT same as sleep in the games!

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Well I don't see a rule and I don't feel I need to give a poke power and level can't be done with the template dude. there are cards that do not have level that have been sold in stores in official sets and I bought them at target and walmart so they cannot be tampered with or fake they just have started to bring level back and level is useless and is a waste of ink. Dude I want to be original and not just give suction or something I wanted to give him something more original.

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If you've seen every pokemon card, there is a rule. It's an Unbroken, unwritten rule, like how in a pokemon game, nothing could be higher than a total +2 or -2 in stats. AT least before gen 5. If you want the cards to be realistic, FOLLOW IT. FFS
Pokemon Power Most certainly can be done: Just put down:
Pokemon Power:Effect
Done.
Levels can't? Link it. They can be put at the end of the flavor text, like other OLD Pokemon cards, You said this was an old template, it is, so I gave suggestions for an OLD card. Derp.
How about you're being original enough making a card. You're just being stupid with these, Like I said, in the games, frozen is the same as sleep anyway. put sleep down and be done with it.

I gave constructional critisism, I'm not bashing. At least I wasn't until you decided, "DERP IMA BE STUPED AND SAY HES RONG DERP". This is like how it is in real life, I try and be helpful and people lash out at me. Anyway, If you decide to be stupid and lash out again, I'll just poop on your topic and leave. Good day.


In addition, I play the game. As in right now. I have my deck in front of me. I most likely know more than you on how to make a good card.

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Be creative in another way! To quote somogon:
[quote]Bring in something like Mewtwo G ex Lv. X Delta, who is Steel, Dark, and Psychic at the same time, with an attack cost of [img]http://www.smogon.com/media/smog/10/tcg_psychic.png[/img][img]http://www.smogon.com/media/smog/10/tcg_metal.png[/img][img]http://www.smogon.com/media/smog/10/tcg_darkness.png[/img][img]http://www.smogon.com/media/smog/10/tcg_fire.png[/img][img]http://www.smogon.com/media/smog/10/tcg_water.png[/img][img]http://www.smogon.com/media/smog/10/tcg_grass.png[/img][img]http://www.smogon.com/media/smog/10/tcg_colorless.png[/img] and does 40 damage times the number of Pokémon you have in play to each of your opponent's Pokemon or something! Make it interesting![/quote]

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