TGOR Posted October 9, 2011 Report Share Posted October 9, 2011 I put this on the "Questions and help" forum and they told me to go here so could you help me with the OCG of this card [img]http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/7563/498723.jpg[/img] Constructive Criticism is welcomed too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbyman46 Posted October 9, 2011 Report Share Posted October 9, 2011 "Once per turn, you can target 1 Defense Position monster your opponent controls: Destroy the targeted monster. If you activate this effect, skip your next Draw Phase" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TGOR Posted October 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2011 Thank you googleplex Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyborg360 Posted October 9, 2011 Report Share Posted October 9, 2011 Kinda underpowered :/ Draw Phase means a lot these days, plus there's always [b]Shield Crush [/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted October 9, 2011 Report Share Posted October 9, 2011 with the new OCG: colons seperate [color=#FF0000][u]'When you can use this card[/u]'[/color] to[color=#0000FF] '[u]The cost of activating this card[/u]' [/color](Words following a colon are always made to have a capital letter) semi-colons seperate[color=#0000FF] [u]'cost'[/u] [/color]to [color=#006400][u]'the card's actual effect'[/u][/color] [b]Example[/b] = [color=#FF0000]Once per turn, during your Battle Phase[/color][b]:[/b] [color=#0000FF]You can discard this card from your hand[/color][b];[/b] [color=#006400]destroy 1 card on the field[/color]. If you have no cost, you just remove the semi-colon from the equation to be like 'When to use' to 'actual effect' [b]Example [/b]= [color=#FF0000]Once per turn[/color][b]:[/b] [color=#006400]Your opponent must discard 1 card in their hand.[/color] [size=5][u][i][b]Your[/b][/i][/u][/size] OCG should look like the following bold words [b]Once per turn: You can target 1 Defense Position monster your opponent controls; destroy the target. If you use this effect: Skip your next Draw Phase.[/b] Hope all that helps... there is a link in my sig saying 'OCG Help by Konami' its just 1 part of where all this info comes from --- For the card, it seems like a pretty basic effect, but the case is that the most simple are usually the most useful... for a new guy, this gets you a 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 9, 2011 Report Share Posted October 9, 2011 well the OCG is done, so let's just move to the effect part stumbling will certainly help here, but that's situational you should have made it in ANY battle position for more flexibility Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted October 10, 2011 Report Share Posted October 10, 2011 IMO it's balanced, but it's too risky and too situational too. And I agreed what rag said. Make it in any position. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TGOR Posted November 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 [img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/7563/498723.jpg[/img] like this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 16, 2011 Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 yeah it's a lot better this way reminds me a little bit of Offerings to the Doomed effect now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TGOR Posted November 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 [size=6][sup]That was one of my ideas in making this card[/sup][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 16, 2011 Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 I like it though since you can use it more than once Offerings to the Doomed does have the advantage of being quickplay though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TGOR Posted November 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 It is a better card in sticky situatons My card is more just to be annoying when you are winning At least that is what I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 16, 2011 Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 well it doesn't have to be just that either, but I'll leave that up to you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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