Since you like my poem about Love so much, im writing one about death. O_o

[Lucas Maximus]

This is a poem about the subject of death, since you like my poem about love so much, i hope you enjoy this. XD

 

So my question to you is simple and yet sharp as a knife,

Are you living a life of death or the death of your life?

Is death coming suddenly, or are you just wasting away?

Which of these morose questions holds the truth I cannot say,

With one hand you're watching your life decay,

On the other you're waiting for your last day,

Whichever of these statements you feel is true,

The end of your life is all it comes down to.

 

Much shorter then my other but it has a deep meaning. O_o

[Lucas Maximus]

Bump, please post, i'm hoping to be a very succesful poet, lol, not really tis just a hobby of mine. O_o

[J-Max]

Sounds like something a Emo would say to themselves in desperation. Very Heart Grabbing!

[Kizzi]

O_o

Cool! I like it better than your love one. ^_^

[Lucas Maximus]

O_o

Cool! I like it better than your love one. ^_^

 

Thankyou very much kizzi, i'm glad you like it, i'm to continue to post poems. ^_^

[ITI3L33]

I like it.

[WindupRabbitFan14]

It deserves a rep. 10/10

[Careless Whisper]

dude, this is completely awesome literature, do you mind if I print this out and show this to my American Lit. Teacher, all credit would go to you of course...It reminds of the style of Edgar Allen Poe

[Lucas Maximus]

dude' date=' this is completely awesome literature, do you mind if I print this out and show this to my American Lit. Teacher, all credit would go to you of course...It reminds of the style of Edgar Allen Poe

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Of course you can man, i'm happy you all like it, i'm going to post yet another poem of mine later today.

[Careless Whisper]

dude' date=' this is completely awesome literature, do you mind if I print this out and show this to my American Lit. Teacher, all credit would go to you of course...It reminds of the style of Edgar Allen Poe

[/quote']

 

Of course you can man, i'm happy you all like it, i'm going to post yet another poem of mine later today.

 

sweet, keep them coming..

[Zeroshot]

Sounds like something a Emo would say to themselves in desperation. Very Heart Grabbing!

 

i resent that.

 

 

 

and Cyber Static, you should meet my friend Derek, He is an extreemly great poet with the same style

 

great poem

[Lucas Maximus]

Thankyou Zeroshot, i would like to meet your friend Derek but unfortunatly i'm unable to... for obvious reasons, i recently posted my latest poem, a poem on life, my best yet, please read and rate it...

[CrazyKev]

Wow

Great poem

very nice.

[Lucas Maximus]

Thankyou Kev, i'm glad everybody likes it. ^_^

[CrazyKev]

Thankyou Kev' date=' i'm glad everybody likes it. ^_^

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Your Welcome.

 

Make more :shock:

you m-m-m-u-s-t m-m-m-a-k-e m-m-ore

 

It would make everybody happy :)

[Lucas Maximus]

I have currently posted 3 of my poems check out my one about love and my one about Life... ^_^