Neko Girl Posted November 1, 2011 Report Share Posted November 1, 2011 So, here it is. Sorry if it's kind of bad. But I haven't made a card in ages. [img]http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/4885/156266.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is Special Summoned to your side of the field, Beast-Warrior-Type and DARK monsters on your field cannot be destroyed by battle and gain 500 ATK and DEF as long as this card is face-up on your side of the field. I know, the name isn't very creative. ^-^" So, um, CnC? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
genexdeity Posted November 1, 2011 Report Share Posted November 1, 2011 Not bad a little incorrect ocg, balanced, but the name is a little eh... 8/10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted November 1, 2011 Report Share Posted November 1, 2011 [quote name='NerdyGirl ' timestamp='1320182665' post='5611375'] [i]When this card is destroyed by battle, you can send the top 5 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon this card to your side of the field in DEF position[/i].[/quote] wat WAT No, seriously, free milling and revival is just bad card design. Scrap that effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neko Girl Posted November 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2011 [quote name='Æther Royce' timestamp='1320183486' post='5611411'] wat WAT No, seriously, free milling and revival is just bad card design. Scrap that effect. [/quote] Oh, okay. Thank you for the comments. ^^ Better? :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 2, 2011 Report Share Posted November 2, 2011 well 500 atk gain isn't really much, and neither is just preventing from being destroyed in battle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neko Girl Posted November 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2011 No, I guess it isn't. I've always sucked at finding the happy middle between OP'd and UP'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted November 2, 2011 Report Share Posted November 2, 2011 The effect makes it sound like if a monster is both a Beast Warrior and a DARK monster, it gains the +500 bonus twice. I would raise her original ATK to 1900 and make the following change so her effect affects her fully, but other cards partially: [i]"While this card is on the field, DARK monsters you control gain 500 ATK and Beast-Warrior-Type Monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle."[/i] So she becomes a 2400 ATK monster that cannot be destroyed by battle. Her dark powers bolster your monsters of an identical attribute, and her animal-like nature ensures no catgirls will be harmed while in the midst of battle. I hope this helps! EDIT: Don't let it be ages before you make a card again. I look forward to seeing more from you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neko Girl Posted November 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2011 Thank you for the comments! [quote name='God Kaze' timestamp='1320212024' post='5612639'] EDIT: Don't let it be ages before you make a card again. I look forward to seeing more from you. [/quote] Don't worry, I think I'll make some more soon. ^^ Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 2, 2011 Report Share Posted November 2, 2011 [quote name='NerdyGirl ' timestamp='1320203607' post='5612371'] No, I guess it isn't. I've always sucked at finding the happy middle between OP'd and UP'd. [/quote] It's all right. Just let us know when you make the modifications Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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