✪RION Posted November 6, 2011 Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 [center][img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/9524/365966d.jpg[/img][/center] [center]Lore[/center] [center]During the turn this card is Summoned: Your opponent cannot activate Trap Cards. When this card destroys a monster by battle: You can destroy this card and send 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-type monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. If this card was destroyed by its own effect: Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase with its effect negated.[/center] [center]so cnc[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 6, 2011 Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 ok so it's not a recycling effect since its effect is gone next turn which doesn't really make it too flexible, you should have allowed it to keep its effect, but then say you can only pull this effect off like 2 times per duel or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
✪RION Posted November 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1320589334' post='5621128'] ok so it's not a recycling effect since its effect is gone next turn which doesn't really make it too flexible, you should have allowed it to keep its effect, but then say you can only pull this effect off like 2 times per duel or something [/quote] I thought that if I recycle the effect it would be op and abusable...so should I change or not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 6, 2011 Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 no don't change it you make it recyclable it might get too broken Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
✪RION Posted November 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 so anyway,need more comments on this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocalypse Cards Posted November 7, 2011 Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 You can make it keep its effect if you edit so it lets you if you want to bring it back but the turn you do you can't normal summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
✪RION Posted November 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 [quote name='Apocalypse Cards' timestamp='1320671369' post='5623629'] You can make it keep its effect if you edit so it lets you if you want to bring it back but the turn you do you can't normal summon. [/quote] thinking of doing that although, that would also mean every time I summon it back, it would be Jinzo 2.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted November 7, 2011 Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 hehe i like it...although...maybe if you kept the efeect, you could negate the first half with the traps? just a thought... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Worm Victory Posted November 7, 2011 Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 Ha, im just here to correct your text. Dont use Colons, your supposed to use Commas. So like this... Once per turn, you may select one monster you control and send it to the Graveyard. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, you may Special Summon it in Face-up Attack Position. Also, dont capitalize after commas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
✪RION Posted November 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2011 [quote name='Glowfly' timestamp='1320685912' post='5623890'] hehe i like it...although...maybe if you kept the efeect, you could negate the first half with the traps? just a thought... [/quote] You mean effect, girl? anyway I don't get what your saying so elaborate if you can. [quote name='Dread689' timestamp='1320704139' post='5624511'] Ha, im just here to correct your text. Dont use Colons, your supposed to use Commas. So like this... Once per turn, you may select one monster you control and send it to the Graveyard. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, you may Special Summon it in Face-up Attack Position. Also, dont capitalize after commas. [/quote] Well...I'll give you this brah [center][IMG]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/2937/300pxgalaxyeyesphotondr.png[/IMG][/center] [quote] [center]and the lore:[/center] [center]You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by Tributing 2 monsters with 2000 or more ATK. During either player's Battle Step, when this card battles an opponent's [b]monster[size=4]:[/size] You[/b] can target the monster this card is battling; banish both it and this card, then any monster banished by this effect returns to the field at the end of the Battle Phase. If the monster banished by this effect was an Xyz Monster, this card gains 500 ATK for each Xyz Material the Xyz Monster had when it was banished.[/center] [/quote] I took the liberty to bold the colons so tell me if I shouldn't use colons brah which would make the "[b]Also, dont capitalize after commas[/b]." comment irreverent . Thanks for the ocg fix but that would make my card even more broken when I can special summon it that easily and in attack position. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted November 8, 2011 Report Share Posted November 8, 2011 In all honesty I'd never use this. Make it a Level 4 monster with 1800 ATK and a "No SS except by its own effect" condition, and we'd talk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Worm Victory Posted November 9, 2011 Report Share Posted November 9, 2011 [quote name='KillSwitch the Maniac' timestamp='1320755734' post='5625961'] You mean effect, girl? anyway I don't get what your saying so elaborate if you can. Well...I'll give you this brah [center][img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/2937/300pxgalaxyeyesphotondr.png[/img][/center] You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by Tributing 2 monsters with 2000 or more ATK. During either player's Battle Step, when this card battles an opponent's [b]monster[size=4]:[/size] You[/b] can target the monster this card is battling; banish both it and this card, then any monster banished by this effect returns to the field at the end of the Battle Phase. If the monster banished by this effect was an Xyz Monster, this card gains 500 ATK for each Xyz Material the Xyz Monster had when it was banished. [/quote] I personally have no clue on what Xyz is but... the parenthesis around "from your hand" aren't needed. Also... "During either player's Battle Step, when this card battles an opponent's monster, you can target the monster this card is battling [b]and[/b] banish both it and this card.[s] then any monster banished by this effect returns to the field at the end of the Battle Phase.[/s] [b]During the End Phase, any monsters banished by this card's effect are returned to the field.[/b] Notice how "when this card battles an opponent's monster" can be taken out and still make sense? Thats how you can tell if commas need to be there. Some re-wording was needed....and yeah, i mostly know what im doing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted November 9, 2011 Report Share Posted November 9, 2011 [quote name='Dread689' timestamp='1320798353' post='5627208'] I personally have no clue on what Xyz is but... the parenthesis around "from your hand" aren't needed. Also... "During either player's Battle Step, when this card battles an opponent's monster, you can target the monster this card is battling [b]and[/b] banish both it and this card.[s] then any monster banished by this effect returns to the field at the end of the Battle Phase.[/s] [b]During the End Phase, any monsters banished by this card's effect are returned to the field.[/b] Notice how "when this card battles an opponent's monster" can be taken out and still make sense? Thats how you can tell if commas need to be there. Some re-wording was needed....and yeah, i mostly know what im doing. [/quote] You honestly have no idea what you are talking about, do you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Worm Victory Posted November 9, 2011 Report Share Posted November 9, 2011 [quote name='Dante v. Nero' timestamp='1320798531' post='5627217'] You honestly have no idea what you are talking about, do you? [/quote] Have you gone through grade school? Unless education is wrong i am correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted November 9, 2011 Report Share Posted November 9, 2011 [quote name='Dread689' timestamp='1320799384' post='5627251'] Have you gone through grade school? Unless education is wrong i am correct. [/quote] http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Problem-Solving_Card_Text New OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Worm Victory Posted November 9, 2011 Report Share Posted November 9, 2011 [quote name='Dante v. Nero' timestamp='1320799445' post='5627254'] [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Problem-Solving_Card_Text"]http://yugioh.wikia....lving_Card_Text[/url] New OCG. [/quote] Lol i never paid attention to the effect changes. Sorry... im used to the old OCG.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted November 9, 2011 Report Share Posted November 9, 2011 [quote name='Dread689' timestamp='1320799596' post='5627259'] Lol i never paid attention to the effect changes. Sorry... im used to the old OCG.... [/quote] Then don't bother posting OCG Fixes if you don't know the new OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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