Giriel Posted November 9, 2011 Report Share Posted November 9, 2011 Hi guys, this is my first try at making YGO cards myself. It sure needs a lot of balancing but I hope it is somehow ok so far (I had a free day, so I made a handful cards). The Executioner Archetype is composed of monsters of the Fire, Earth and Wind attribute and they are always Warrior type or are double-typed. They are set out to destroy other cards through either their own card effects or by sacrificing themselves to inflict even greater damage, so to speak. The Synchros are split up in two groups, Execution Knights that are meant to recycle cards and Execution Lords that have powerful effects, but return to the Extra Deck after three turns. Their Spell cards give them additional battle control and some more destruction but usually at the cost of more monsters or life points. The Trap cards are only activated after your monsters get destroyed in battle, resulting in either counter-destruction or additional/reinforced field presence. [spoiler='Monsters (12/??)'][spoiler='Fire & Anti-Trap (4/??)'] [center][img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-018Executioner-FullArmor.jpg[/img] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-009Executioner-Flare-1.jpg[/img][/center] [center][b]Executioner - Full Armor[/b] [i]This card is also treated as a Warrior-type monster. You can discard this card from your hand to negate the activation of a trap card and send it to the bottom of the owner's deck, then deal 400 damage to your opponent's life points. This effect can be used during either player's turn.[/i] [b]Executioner - Flare[/b] [i]This card is also treated as a Warrior-type monster. When this card is successfully summoned, put one "Steel Shard" counter on this card. This card gains 200 ATK for each "Steel Shard" counter on it. Once per turn you can remove one "Steel Shard" counter to destroy and negate the activation of a trap card.[/i][/center] [center][img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-017Executioner-Cross.jpg[/img] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-014Executioner-Jeda.jpg[/img][/center] [center] [b]Executioner - Cross[/b] [i]Once per turn: Discard one "Executioner" monster card to destroy one spell or trap card on your opponent's side of the field.[/i] [b]Executioner - Jeda[/b] [i]If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the Synchro Summon of an "Executioner" monster, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent for each level of the summoned Synchro Monster. [/i][/center] [center][/spoiler][/center] [center][spoiler='Wind & Anti-Spell (4/??)][/center] [center] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-016Executioner-Fulgur.jpg[/img] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-015Executioner-Hunter.jpg[/img][/center] [center][b]Executioner - Fulgur[/b] [i]This card is also treated as a Warrior-type monster. This card is not affected by spell cards. During the End Phase you have to discard an "Executioner" card from your hand or send this card to the graveyard.[/i] [b]Executioner - Hunter[/b] [i]This card cannot be destroyed by battle and after damage calculation you can chose one face down Spell or Trap card on your opponent's side of the field. If the card is a spell card you can send that card and one card from your side of the field to the graveyard to special summon one level 4 or lower "Executioner" monster from your hand. That card cannot attack the same turn it was special summoned.[/i][/center] [center][img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-007Executioner-Cerl.jpg[/img] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-005Executioner-Ero.jpg[/img][/center] [center] [b]Executioner - Cerl[/b] [i]Once per turn you can activate the following effect: Discard one spell card from your hand. Destroy one spell or trap card on the field.[/i] [b]Executioner - Ero[/b] [i]This card is also treated as a Warrior-type monster. This card can only be used for the Synchro Summon of a Warrior-type monster. Destroy one face-up spell card to destroy one monster on the other side of the field.[/i][/center] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Earth & Anti-Monster (4/??)'] [center][img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-006Executioner-Grave-1.jpg[/img] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-004Executioner-Lord.jpg[/img][/center] [center][b]Executioner - Grave[/b] [i]Once per turn you can activate the follwoing effect: Destroy one monster on the field. If this card is destroyed by a card effect draw one card, afterwards both players discard one card.[/i] [b]Executioner - Lord[/b] [i]If you have two or more "Executioner" cards on your side of the field you can special summon this card by releasing two "Executioner" cards on the field. Once per turn you can destroy one card on the opponents side of the field. This card is unaffected by spell or trap cards while there are any other "Executioner" monsters on your side of the field.[/i][/center] [center][img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-010Executioner-Trisha.jpg[/img] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-008Executioner-WallehtheHungry.jpg[/img][/center] [center] [b]Executioner - Trisha[/b] [i]This card can only be used for the Synchro Summon of an "Executioner" monster. [/i][i]You cannot use this card to Xyz summon. [/i][i]You can discard one card from your hand to increase the level of this card by 2. If you activate this effect destroy this card during the End Phase. [/i] [b]Executioner - Walleh the Hungry[/b] [i]You can special summon this monster on your side of the field if you control no monsters. In the turn this card has been special summoned by it's effect you can chose a level 2 tuner monster on your opponent's side of the field or graveyard and special summon it on your side of the field. Destroy it in the End Phase of the turn it has been summoned.[/i] [/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Traps (3/??)'][/center] [center] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-012DramaticBattleMutualExecution.jpg[/img] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-011SneakAttackCounterExecution.jpg[/img][/center] [center] [b]Dramatic Battle! Mutual Execution![/b] [i]When a monster you control is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard: Destroy the attacking monster.[/i] [b]Sneak Attack! Counter! Execution![/b] [i]When a monster you control is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard: Special summon 1 level 4 or lower "Executioner" monster from your hand.[/i][/center] [center][img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-013ExecutionersAssemble.jpg[/img][/center] [center][b]Executioners! Assemble![/b][/center] [center][i]Activate only during your opponent's Battle Phase when all of your monsters (At least two) have been destroyed either by battle or card effects. End the Battle Phase and search your deck or graveyard for two "Executioner" monsters and add them to your hand.[/i][/center] [center][/spoiler] [spoiler='Spell Cards (5/??)'][/center] [center] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-048ExecutionersGuildHallwaytoHell.jpg[/img] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-046IncredibleTensionQuick-DrawExecute.jpg[/img][/center] [center][b]Executioner's Guild! Hallway to Hell![/b] [i]This card is unaffected by the effects of "Executioner" cards. Every time an "Executioner" card is removed from the field you can put one "Steel Shard" counter on this card. Remove two "Steel Shard" counters to activate one of the following effects: • Destroy one card on the field. • Draw one card.[/i] [b]Incredible Tension! Quick-Draw! Execution![/b] [i]Activate only if your opponent declares an attack: Discard one card and destroy one card on your side of the field to destroy all face-up attack position monsters on the field except "Executioner" monsters. Both players lose 600 life point for each monster destroyed by this effect.[/i][/center] [center][img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-045FeintExecutionGo.jpg[/img] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-044ExecutionCommandGo.jpg[/img][/center] [center] [b]Feint! Execution! Go![/b] [i]Activate only when an "Executioner" monster on your side of the field is is targeted for an attack: Destroy the attacking monster and if there's another monster on the opponent's side of the field chose the next attack target. No player takes battle damage from a battle forced by this card.[/i] [b]Execution Command! Go![/b] [i]Activate only when an attack has been declared: Destroy one card on your opponents card on the field for every monster that battles this turn (max. 3 attacks). After the end of the Battle Phase destroy all of your monsters that did not attack.[/i][/center] [center][img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-043ExecutionersRebirth.jpg[/img][/center] [center][b]Executioner's Rebirth[/b][/center] [center][i]Activate only during the end of your opponent's Battle Phase when one or more "Executioner" monsters have been destroyed in battle. Special summon one of the monsters destroyed during this Battle Phase and special summon it on your side of the field and increase it's attack by 300 points. Then destroy the face-up monster that destroyed your monster, if you can't you take 800 points damage[/i].[/center] [center][/spoiler] [spoiler='Execution Knights (6/??)'][/center] [center][spoiler='Wind & Special Summon (2/?)][/center] [center] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-024ExecutionerKnight-North-1.jpg[/img] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-020ExecutionerKnight-Alice.jpg[/img][/center] [center] [b]Executioner Knight - North[/b] 1 "Executioner" Tuner monster + 1 non-Tuner Warrior type Monster. This card is also treated as a Warrior-type monster. Once per turn you can activate the following effect: Return one "Execution" card from the field to destroy one card. This card is unaffected by spell cards. [b]Executioner Knight - Alice[/b] 1 "Executioner" Tuner monster + 1 non-Tuner Warrior type Monster. Once per turn you can activate the following effect: Return one "Executioner" monster to your hand and special summon one "Executioner" monster from your graveyard. [/spoiler][/center] [center][spoiler='Earth & Recycle (2/?)'][/center] [center] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-019ExecutionerKnight-Lehar.jpg[/img] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-022ExecutionerKnight-Borre.jpg[/img][/center] [center] [b]Executioner Knight - Lehar[/b] 1 "Executioner" Tuner monster + 1 non-Tuner Warrior type Monster. Once per turn you can activate the following effect: Return one "Executioner" monster to your deck and increase this monster's attack by 300 points. [b]Executioner Knight - Borre[/b] 1 "Executioner" Tuner monster + 1 non-Tuner Warrior type Monster. This card is also treated as a Warrior-type monster. Once per turn when you destroy an opponent's monster you can return one "Executioner" card from your graveyard to your deck.[/center] [center][/spoiler] [spoiler='Fire & Extra Draws (2/?)][/center] [center] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-021ExecutionerKnight-AriusMerian.jpg[/img] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-023ExecutionerKnight-BloodSlicer-1.jpg[/img][/center] [center] [b]Executioner Knight - Arius Merian[/b] 1 "Executioner" Tuner monster + 1 non-Tuner Warrior type Monster. This card is also treated as a Warrior-type monster. Once per turn you can activate the following effect: Return one "Executioner" monster to your deck and draw one card. [b]Executioner Knight - Blood Slicer[/b] 1 "Executioner" Tuner monster + 1 non-Tuner Warrior type Monster. This card is also treated as a Warrior-type monster. Once per turn when you destroy an opponent's monster you can discard one card to draw one card from your deck. [/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Execution Lords (3/?)'][/center] [center] [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-002ExecutionEmperorVaal.jpg[/img][/center] [center] [b]Execution Emperor Vaal[/b] 1 "Executioner" Tuner monster + 2 or more non-Tuner "Executioner" Monsters. The name of this card is treated as "Executioner". When this card is successfully Synchro Summoned you can destroy two cards on the opponent's side of the field. Your opponent loses 200 life points every time a card on is sent to his graveyard. During your third End Phase after this card has been summoned, destroy two cards on the field and send this card back to the Extra Deck. [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-003ExecutionMachineThrant.jpg[/img][/center] [center] [b]Execution Machine Thrant[/b] 2 "Executioner" Tuner monsters + 1 or more non-Tuner "Executioner" Monster. The name of this card is treated as "Executioner". When this card is successfully Synchro Summoned, return up to two cards on the opponent's side of the field to the bottom of his deck and draw two cards. Once per turn you can draw one card from your deck. During your third End Phase after this card has been summoned, return two cards to the owner's hand and send this card back to the Extra Deck. [img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/Gerlandor.jpg[/img][/center] [center] [b]Execution Dragon Gerlandor[/b] 1 "Executioner" Tuner monster + 1 non-Tuner "Executioner Knight" Monster. The name of this card is treated as "Executioner". When this card is successfully Synchro Summoned, banish up to two cards on the opponent's side of the field and reduce the attack of your opponent's monsters by 400 every time a card is banished. During your third End Phase after this card has been summoned, banish two cards and send this card back to the Extra Deck.[/spoiler] I hope I can get some useful feedback and ideas to improve this archetype (or rather these cards) and that they're not extremely over- or underpowered.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 9, 2011 Report Share Posted November 9, 2011 a lot of lores are too small to read write out the ones for Full Armor, Flare, Hunter, Lord, Walleh the Hungry, and all your synchros Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giriel Posted November 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2011 Done, sorry, I just realized that myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 10, 2011 Report Share Posted November 10, 2011 for Flare, the counter removal effect needs to be limited to once per turn. After all, you didn't put a max limit to the counters it can have Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giriel Posted November 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2011 'Fixed' Flare. Are there any other ideas on how to improve this? (Apart from the names, I know they suck hard) Do the effects meet OCG rules/standard? Hope this isn't considered an unnecessary bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 10, 2011 Report Share Posted November 10, 2011 for Trisha, the level increase is ok, but I think it should be 1 card for 1 level, not 2 levels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocalypse Cards Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 what about if it is 1 card for 2 levels but the effect go away at the end phase? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 that'd make no difference as you'd only NEED 1 turn to use it for synchro food You could try something like you can raise it by 1 level or 2 levels. However if you choose the 2 level option, you can't use it for synchro food under circumstances Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giriel Posted November 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 Added two new, almost generic support cards: [spoiler='Support'] [center][img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-013ExecutionersAssemble.jpg[/img][/center] [center][b]Executioners! Assemble![/b][/center] [center][i]Activate only during your opponent's Battle Phase when all of your monsters (At least two) have been destroyed either by battle or card effects. End the Battle Phase and search your deck or graveyard for two "Executioner" monsters and add them to your hand.[/i][/center] [center][img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-043ExecutionersRebirth.jpg[/img][/center] [center][b]Executioner's Rebirth![/b][/center] [center][i]Activate only during the end of your opponent's Battle Phase when one or more "Executioner" monsters have been destroyed in battle. Special summon one of the monsters destroyed during this Battle Phase and special summon it on your side of the field and increase it's attack by 300 points. Then destroy the face-up monster that destroyed your monster, if you can't you take 800 points damage[/i].[/center] [center][/spoiler][/center] Changed Trisha to : [spoiler='Trisha'] [center][img]http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr350/Giriel_Erio/YGO%20CC/EXC-010Executioner-Trisha.jpg[/img][/center] [center] [b]Executioner - Trisha[/b] [i]This card can only be used for the Synchro Summon of an "Executioner" monster. [/i][i]You cannot use this card to Xyz summon. [/i][i]You can discard one card from your hand to increase the level of this card by 2. If you activate this effect destroy this card during the End Phase.[/i][/center] [center][/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 still seems a bad idea to raise it by 2 for Trisha, but whatever Executioners Assemble is very easy to pull off for searching for Rebirth, I'm curious why you added the 800 damage in the effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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