LordCowCowCowCowCowCowCowCow Posted November 10, 2011 Report Share Posted November 10, 2011 Reborn Dragon Level 8 Dark. Dragon/Effect This card cannot be normal summoned or set. It can be special summoned only by banishing 3 Dragon-type monster in your graveyard. It's ATK is equal to the original ATK of one of the monsters used to summon it [b](you choose which)[/b] Once per turn, you may banish 1 Dragon-type monster in your graveyard and add half of it's original ATK to Reborn Dragon until the End Phase. ATK: ? DEF: 0 Bolded because I don't know how to word this. Link to comment
LordCowCowCowCowCowCowCowCow Posted November 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 Zero replies? can't have that so BUMP Really, even if it's just to say how bad this is I want some kind of review, can't get better without input, and don't want to make any more cards without finding out how I did on previous ones. Link to comment
NeoTwice Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 Once per turn, where do you Banish the Dragon-type from? The Field, the deck, the Graveyard? Aside from that, it strikes me as being slightly overpowered... Ditch a Blue-Eyes, then Banish just 1 monster from the grave for 3000 ATK? Link to comment
LordCowCowCowCowCowCowCowCow Posted November 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 Ok, I hope this edit makes it better, please rate. Link to comment
·Toot Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 it should state which monster it gets teh atk from, or make it say you choose it... i think its Up'ed because you banish 3 cards cards, but only get teh reward from one of them... I hink you should take off the second effect and add one that lets you take teh effect of one of the banished monsters aswell as the atk... or make it so they get them from different monsters... of those that were banished I mean... Link to comment
NeoTwice Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 That's much better. I didn't notice this before, but the way you've worded it suggests that you can Special Summon it by its own effect, or by other means, so does that mean if I summon it with my REDMD's effect that it would be summoned with 0 ATK? Or should the card read "Must be Special Summoned by..." so it can ONLY be summoned by its own effect. Link to comment
LordCowCowCowCowCowCowCowCow Posted November 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 [quote name='NeoTwice' timestamp='1320983502' post='5632129'] That's much better. I didn't notice this before, but the way you've worded it suggests that you can Special Summon it by its own effect, or by other means, so does that mean if I summon it with my REDMD's effect that it would be summoned with 0 ATK? Or should the card read "Must be Special Summoned by..." so it can ONLY be summoned by its own effect. [/quote] Technically it was a mistake, but do you think it would be best to keep it this way or change it? Thanks for pointing that out either way. Link to comment
NeoTwice Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 I don't really know. If you can Special Summon it other ways it makes it less of a dead draw. Link to comment
LordCowCowCowCowCowCowCowCow Posted November 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 Well for now it shall stay like this, that is unless I get more people rating to tell me what's wrong with it *hint hint, nudge nudge*. Link to comment
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