Pyrokinetic Archtype! /??

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well this is a continued version of my first post, the set is under construction and here is what i have so far:


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Lore for Released Rage: This card cannot be special summoned. This card can only be tribute summoned with the effect of "losing control". You can pay 1000 life points to move all "Kinetic counters"(Max.10) on the field to this card. Once per turn: You can remove "Kinetic counters" from this card to activate one of the fallowing effects:
2 counters: Add one "pyrokinetic:" monster from your deck to your hand.
5 counters: Increase the ATK of all "Pyrokinetic:" monsters by 1000, until the end phase. This cards ATK decreases by 1000 until the end phase if you activate this effect.
10 coounters: Inflict 3000 points of damage to your opponents life points, this card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect.

Lore for Matchstick: Once per turn: You can pay 500 life points, then place 1 "Kinetic counter" (Max.4) on this card. Once per turn: You can remove all "Kinetic counters" from the field and increase the ATK off all FIRE monsters you control, equal to the number of counters

Lore for Fueling Wind: Once per turn: You can discard one card from your hand, then place 2 "Kinetic counters" (Max.6) on this card. Once per turn: You can pay 500 life points, move 3 "Kinetic counters" from this card to three "Pyrokinetic" monsters on the field.

(yes i know i might have spell'd "pyrokinesis wrong)
well that's it, I'll update/add cards in the future, feel free to C&C!

[ragnarok1945]

can you write the lore out for Fueling Wind and Matchstick too?

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Certainly, here you go

BUMP

[ragnarok1945]

for Matchstick that's horrible for atk gain

you said a max of 4 counters, and the atk gain = # of counters you removed

you must mean # of counters you removed * 300 or something

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ya that's what i meant, i'll fix that up

[ragnarok1945]

all right, you make the modifications, we'll look at it again

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Thanks rag, BUMP

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[quote]Lore for Fueling Wind: Once per turn: You can discard one card from your hand, then place 2 "Kinetic counters" (Max.6) on this card. Once per turn: You can pay 500 life points, move 3 "Kinetic counters" from this card to [b]_______ [/b]three cards on the field x200.[/quote]

Erm...move 3 Kinetic Counters from this card to -what- three cards on the field x200? (it's also on the actual card)

Love the pictures by the way ^^

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[quote name='suko nara' timestamp='1321036302' post='5632935']
Thanks rag, BUMP
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you take the pics from anime? They certainly look like they belong to one

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[quote name='James of Darkness' timestamp='1321037385' post='5632964']
Erm...move 3 Kinetic Counters from this card to -what- three cards on the field x200? (it's also on the actual card)

Love the pictures by the way ^^
[/quote] Thanks for the comment, I fixed up the lore so it's should be fine now

@rag: I don't know where they are from actually, I just got them off a google images search, though, if they were from an anime I would not be surprised

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BUMP

[ragnarok1945]

oh by the way for Inflammatory Distraction's effect

overall it's little more than Negate Attack + Skull Dice

now yes Skull Dice isn't really good because you can't get more than 600 atk decrease

in your case while you could get more than that, *100 still seems a bit small

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ok, i up'ed the atk loss to 200, 300 seemed a little high since you can remove counters anywhere from the field, thanks for the comment rag

[ragnarok1945]

yeah that's more like it

I was thinking the max was 250, but 200 is just fine too

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hey does any-one know what Latin for "dark" might be? (like how: pyro=fire or luma=light)

[ragnarok1945]

I looked it up online

the word is called "tenebrae"

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thanks rag, more cards will be coming soon i promise, oh and, BUMP

[ragnarok1945]

if you need any more latin translations, please let us know, k?

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will do

[ragnarok1945]

I'm hoping you have another card to add here soon.......