The Jazz Posted November 20, 2011 Report Share Posted November 20, 2011 [img]http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/5227/511054.jpg[/img] [size=5]Lore: This card's name is treated as "Umi" while face-up on the field. If this card battles an opponent's monster; increase the ATK of this card by 600 until the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn: You can discard 1 card to search your Deck for 1 level 4 Aqua-Type monster and place it on top of your Deck.[/size] To get rid of Gene-Warped Warwolf, Alexandrite Dragon, and also the 2k DEF monsters too. Not sure if it belongs in RC or AoC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 20, 2011 Report Share Posted November 20, 2011 shame at 1550 it's not searchable the direct attack part is meh even without the 500 atk drop, 1550 damage isn't enough for OTK set up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1321809932' post='5655083'] shame at 1550 it's not searchable the direct attack part is meh even without the 500 atk drop, 1550 damage isn't enough for OTK set up [/quote]...so you're saying too weak then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 20, 2011 Report Share Posted November 20, 2011 I'm saying you really don't need to drop it 500 atk in the event of a direct atk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
david ice Posted November 20, 2011 Report Share Posted November 20, 2011 nice pic but it should not drop its atk ,or you could say it gains 1000 atk until the end of the damage step(your opponent take no battle damage) then its atk drops by 5oo when it attacks direct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Okay, I made it searchable and I got rid of the negative effect. The problem now is the effect looks really boring... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 so add another effect to it it's balanced the way it is after all right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1322017590' post='5660484'] so add another effect to it it's balanced the way it is after all right now [/quote]Any suggestions then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 [center]Yeh, it IS really boring...[/center] [center]Make its name Umi while on the field may spice it up, and maybe you can discard a card to search a Sea Serpent Level 4 or lower from deck or something? (So you can fetch Deep Sea or even Codarus)[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 right now the card i saw may be a little overpowered im not an exert tjough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 [center]2050 ATK only while battling is not really OP. I would rather NS a Stardust Dragon (Dux) or Leviathen Dragon (Tour Guide), or even Utopia or such (Gishki Beast and others).[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 [quote name='Gagaga Girl' timestamp='1322089105' post='5661882'] [center]2050 ATK only while battling is not really OP. I would rather NS a Stardust Dragon (Dux) or Leviathen Dragon (Tour Guide), or even Utopia or such (Gishki Beast and others).[/center] [/quote] well 2050 atk is only enough to handle lv4s. Most lv5s will kill it right away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1322167651' post='5663008'] well 2050 atk is only enough to handle lv4s. Most lv5s will kill it right away [/quote]My idea exactly, this is to get rid of 2k attackers and defenders[quote name='Gagaga Girl' timestamp='1322088769' post='5661869'] [center]Yeh, it IS really boring...[/center] [center]Make its name Umi while on the field may spice it up, and maybe you can discard a card to search a Sea Serpent Level 4 or lower from deck or something? (So you can fetch Deep Sea or even Codarus)[/center] [/quote] Hokay, I may work on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 Still it just seem a bit off, but whatever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1322176022' post='5663343'] Still it just seem a bit off, but whatever [/quote]Sorry, a bit off for what? And, also, I added a couple more effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 26, 2011 Report Share Posted November 26, 2011 well for the last part you should have said aqua type, not sea serpent type (the former is more popular) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1322326304' post='5666920'] well for the last part you should have said aqua type, not sea serpent type (the former is more popular) [/quote]Okay I may change that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 27, 2011 Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 let us know if the modifications are done, k? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 OKay, the change is done. Now the effect at the end targets level 4 aquas instead Speaking of which, this card is a level 4 aqua... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 27, 2011 Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 all right, now to rate your new version: the 600 atk is good, nice to see at 1450 it's still searchable very easy to get aqua monsters into your hand now, so that's a good thing too with regards to getting the atk gain while battling ANY of your opponent's monsters it shouldn't really be too much a problem 2050 atk is enough to kill most lv4s, but many lv5s will kill it right away still Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1322407078' post='5669389'] all right, now to rate your new version: the 600 atk is good, nice to see at 1450 it's still searchable very easy to get aqua monsters into your hand now, so that's a good thing too with regards to getting the atk gain while battling ANY of your opponent's monsters it shouldn't really be too much a problem 2050 atk is enough to kill most lv4s, but many lv5s will kill it right away still [/quote]Well actually the effect only gets the card to the top of the deck... should I have it be directly to the hand instead? Or maybe just chain with jar of greed... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 27, 2011 Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 no, keep it at the top of the deck if you said DIRECTLY to the hand it just might be too fast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 Okay thanks, I guess I just wait for more comment now then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted November 27, 2011 Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 Horrible card design. It's as if someone purposely made a beatstick designed as a horrible counter, and then just make it invulnerable to everything. 1. It can't be Bottomless'd. 2. It can be searched by Sangan. 3. Salvage, blah blah blah. 4. It's technically one of the best Level 4 beatsticks you can have. But that's totally irrelevant. Not to mention that no-one will used Gene-Warped and Alexandrite for that reason anyway. Alexandrite is just a Chaos Rabbit target really. And Gene-Warped will near always have something like 2800 ATK. I mean, of course you can tech it, but only ever sided and it wouldn't ever pay off half of the time. And I'm not sure on the last effect. It looks like good tutoring, but eh. My only problem is that awful 1450 ATK. Get it to 1600 ATK, make the ATK boost to 2100, and I wouldn't actually care. Because it'll be run over anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 [quote name='Cursed Reaction' timestamp='1322408612' post='5669416'] My only problem is that awful 1450 ATK. Get it to 1600 ATK, make the ATK boost to 2100, and I wouldn't actually care. Because it'll be run over anyway. [/quote]I just wanted to make it searchable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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