kevin7653 Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 my latest card give honest output and give ideas for upgrading the car [img]http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/650/218546d.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 [center]OCG Correction:[/center] [center]"When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the graveyard: Increase this card's ATK by 100."[/center] [center]ATK Gain effects are dull, try spicing it up a bit![/center] [center]And also, the ATK gain is pretty low.[/center] [center]In the future, Captilize "Dragon" in its Type, and captilize the beginning letter of each word in its title besides "of", "the", or "and".[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 As it is now , it is very boring ..... You should add another effect. How about : "When this card is summoned: You can banish up to 2 FIRE monsters in your Graveyard : Destroy cards your opponent controls equal to the number of monsters banished by this effect. Once per turn : You can discard 1 card from your hand: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of cards in their hand x300. " This is just a suggestion . But you should add an effect to this card. As it is now it is underpowered . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 how about this [img]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/6280/218546.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 meh effect There's a card called Emes the Infinity, it can already do something similar for that as self boosting and like yours, Emes's atk boost is also permanent in addition yours is just WAY too slow. 100 atk gain is virtually nothing, and your opponent will get it off the field LONG before it can even reach 3000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 what if I make it any card on your side of the feild and a 200 attack boost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DropDeadDream Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 You still should capitalize "Dragon" "Demon" and "Fire" in the name and "Dragon" as it's type. It just makes it look better. The effect is decent. Nothing amazing, but good enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 26, 2011 Report Share Posted November 26, 2011 [quote name='kevin7653' timestamp='1322247596' post='5664896'] what if I make it any card on your side of the feild and a 200 attack boost [/quote] 200 atk boost is still on the small end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2011 hopw about 400 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 26, 2011 Report Share Posted November 26, 2011 that could work out then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2011 ok i will do thathere it is [img]http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/6985/218546m.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 27, 2011 Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 ok, now let's have a look at the new changes the 400 atk gain is still meh, but this time it's permanent, so it just might be able to do something, at least in the long run the 500 burn is also meh however, you redeemed it by saying when a monster is destroyed, and not HOW the monster is destroyed since there's no specifications, the burn is VERY easy to pull off, so I considered it good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 27, 2011 Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 I'm still unsure if you need a max atk limit it can reach though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 prrobaly not or i could lower the gain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 27, 2011 Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 that'd work too 2600 atk is reasonable for lv8 already Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 lower it to 200? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 28, 2011 Report Share Posted November 28, 2011 you must mean 2000 or something. That's a bit weak for lv8, but it should be compensated by the atk gain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2011 ok[img]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/5851/218546k.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 30, 2011 Report Share Posted November 30, 2011 [quote name='kevin7653' timestamp='1322486771' post='5672015'] ok [img]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/5851/218546k.jpg[/img] [/quote] yeah see in this case it's a lot better mainly because the atk gain is permanent since you gave it realtively low base atk it also means that it'll take a while to reach the amt you want and all that and by then your opponent won't be thinking of destroying it in battle anymore, so it works out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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